Monday, February 27, 2012

Story: The Mailmare (Update Part 9!)


[Comedy]


Author: theamberfox
Description: It was supposed to be boring. The Annual Magic Users Convention is the one event of the year that recognizes all the accomplishments that unicorns, alicorns and other magic users have made. It's usually a night of long-winded speeches, mind-numbing presentations and unappetizing food. But when a certain mailmare finds two tickets to the convention addressed to her house, she decides that it is not only her privilege, but her duty to attend. And after suitably preparing herself for the occasion, she changes what is usually a boring night into one of the wildest and most bizarre experiences in a thousand years.
The Mailmare (New Part 9!)

Additional Tags: Annual Magic Users Convention, Nonsense, Nightmare Moon, Too Much Wine, Restraining Order

22 comments:

Hpkaska said...

Hmmm I might have to read this one sounds prrty gewd.

BruteForceFTW said...

whuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut

Destroyer said...

Yay Derpy is gonna party party hardy wooooo!!

Commentator said...

4th, Yes!Yay!, more Derpy

DerpGarde said...

Derpy in a comedy fic? JUST what the Doctor ordered. ;)

The Invincible said...

Well, if you're going down, go down blazing. Go Derpy!

Pegasus Rescue Brigade said...

Derpy + comedy.
Reading this one.

moocow1452 said...

That is one hell of a stinger on the first chapter.

Stryke said...

Bucking brilliant, more please and promptly.

BakedBad said...

I enjoyed this first chapter, and found the humor to be quite clever.

The Seventh Wonderbolt said...

Derpy Hooves. Making absolute calamity adorable since...Today?

Pegasus Rescue Brigade said...

I... what?

Derpy's thought processes are really quite unusual in this one, aren't they?

Not sure what else to say; I'll wait for the next chapter before I give any more feedback.

Bronyhub said...

Restraining order tag? Hmm. This one I
gotta check out!

Scott Muir said...

I LOVE this !!! It's hilarious !!! Please finish it !!!! I love the look into Derpy's thought processes !! I wish there were more like this !

Blackbelt said...

This story is really really good.


And the fact that I understand the majority of Derpy's thought is bith awesome and disturbing...

Phantom240 said...

Oh wow, the author has truly captured what I think is the absolute essence of Derpy Hooves. I can't wait for the next chapters!

Melodia said...

At first, it seemed completely off, because even out beloved Derpy/Dizty is never portrayed like that...but get toward the end, and man I love it. I actually for some reason really love the "first person ignorant-flighty" type character like this because it really just allows seeing the world so completely differently.
The last line is the winning goal though. Really can't wait for more.

Melodia said...

Oh god. Crazy story is crazy.

Melodia said...

The best part was the diary entries. Side effect indeed.

Cedric Bale said...

Can't WAIT for the Nightmare Moon tag to become relevant, lol.

Melodia said...

Drunk Celestia is silliest Celestia.

Melodia said...

The sheer absurdity of the this story is....well absurd.

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