[Slice of Life] [Comedy]
Author: TheSlorg
Description: The Cutie Mark Crusaders have had enough and are determined to finally get their cutie marks. When they meet a mysterious stranger who claims to be the "Cutie Mark Master", their quest looks to finally be at an end. But will even a Master of Cutie Marks not be enough?
The Cutie Mark Master
Additional Tags: Short, Parody, Everyone, Cute, Light-hearted
16 comments:
Looks interesting enough
Why does this cry pedobear....
The Origins huh? Fascinating!!! ^_^
will read
Uh oh... Is he offering free candy too? O.O
@WInter Storm
yeah there are only like a billion ways this scenario could easily go grimdark lol
Just finished reading, I found this little story quite charming.
Short, silly, and fun. Four stars. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to drink a lot of water.
That. Was. Epic.
I was really hoping for some push ups or running with a backpack, though. Oh well.
Where's that water bottle...
That story only had 1 problem. It should have been 10 times longer.
I want MORE!
But yeah the description remind me of THIS
I am honestly truly humbled that this made it here.
I woke up today coughing so hard I was doubled over in pain. I had slept poorly, my throat is raw, and I was miserable.
Then I signed into FIMFiction to find the story was featured and I felt much better.
Then I logged into chat and they all said "Congrats on EQD!"
I had no idea it had been posted up!
Seriously, I'm honored by everyone giving the story a read. If it puts a smile on a few faces, I'll feel I've done my job.
Thank you. :)
5 ★
I enjoyed this fanfic. The story was short and sweet, with the absolute hilarity of a frog talking like Yoda to the CMC. Poor Twi and AJ, haha!
...For some odd reason, I imagined the frog's voice sounding like Grover from Sesame Street, which made the story even funnier in my head.
Hope you feel better soon, TheSlorg!
This wasn't bad by any means. I enjoyed it. The exchanged between the CMCs was very cute, though some of their dialogue(namely some of Sweetie Belle's) seemed off.
I'll also say that it ended a lot sooner than I felt it should have. it had me loling, then going "Wait, it's over?"
Anyway, 4-stars. :)
The biggest complaint I've received so far is that people want it to be longer.
I made a blog post over on FIMFiction the day I wrote it that stated that if the story was well-received, then I may write up a sequel.
I suppose I have some writing to do.
Yes, that's exactly what would happen. I.E. the CMC especially seemed pretty much spot on.
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