Description: One wonderfully sunny day Twilight awakens, suffering from the tail end of a bender she didn't plan.
Yeah, it's another drunk pony story. But I still found it very funny. Especially with Twilight being involved; the last pony I would think to put in the same sentence with 'wasted.'
Let's have some real messages rather than a bing of firsts
Normal and Pinkie Pie tags? I call BS.
@CityFlyer502That was the point; she is the last pony you'd ever expect to get wasted.I just thought it was incredibly funny idea.
@SuperGiantRobot Made it all the more enjoyable. Great story, BTW. Especially the ending. Kind of a cliffhanger, but a hilarious one at that.
Great story, though I feel like it could use a comedy tag. I especially like the use of salt instead of alcohol. Great callback to the salt bar in Appleloosa.
Personally, I like the current description I have on FIMFiction: "Twilight awakens suffering from the tail end of an accidental bender. If you were expecting a more detailed description, gimme a break. It's not exactly a detailed story. Sheesh, there's just no pleasing some people. Ponies. Whichever."
@drkHDYeah, that is my fault. Sorry. If someone were willing to add the tag, though *wink winh*
I was expecting some Berry Punch on that description.
I honestly doubt I'll ever do better than "Quit Dragon Your Heels", though: right out of the gate, first time story, came within inches of being a six-star.
That's more (P)s than I have ever posted in one sentence in the tags.
@Princess LunaAlliteration is fun. I should have gone with 'predicament' but I'd already sent it in.
@SuperGiantRobotDespite that, thank you for not using any form of "Ponyville's Premiere Pink Party Pony." I did like the story for the most part, but that ending feels like you just stopped typing midway through a scene.
@DrakmireThat was kind of the point. I wanted to give it less of an "And everything gets put back to normal" and more of a "What'll happen next?" feel.As long as I at least get a grin from you, I feel I've done my job.
When i read the title...all i see is "drunk ponies, come read"...and I will :D
This was very good. Wish there was more. I want to see the adventures of BunnySpike.
Yay, drunk ponies. Every time I see something about ponies and drinking, Berry Punch instantly comes to mind. Every single time. A pony drinking story without her? Blasphemy!
@OctaviaThe poor thing is in APA. Give her a break, huh?
you know, i thought for sure this would be about berry punch...
This story did seem a bit random at points, but I did love the description at the beginning of Twilight's hangover.I think she cured it too quickly though.
Well, I didn't want to dwell on that all too much, I basically figure a reader's gonna go "Okay, she's shit-faced, I get that, but is there anything else to this?"
We really like to put these characters from a Saturday morning cartoon into "adult" situations, don't we? Never gets old as far as I'm concerned.
@SourcilsEspecially in Twilight's case. If she were any more straight and narrow you'd be able to bounce quarters off of her.
@SourcilsWell the only "Adult" (that's an incorrect term, "mature" is better) situations that one can put the ponies in that are not already to an extent dealt with in canon is to:1: Get them drunk/high2: Get them laid3: Get them killedRight now there's way too much of 3 and 2 is getting really creepy these days.Bring on the wasted ponies.
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