Saturday, January 21, 2012

Story: Outskirts (Update Part 8!)



[Grimdark] [Adventure] [LightShipping]

Author: Dr. Applejack
Description: When a series of strange events plagues the small town of Raincap Village, two young mares are thrown into the middle of an ancient conflict that will send them on a perilous journey through the world beyond Equestria's borders.

Outskirts: Prologue
Outskirts: Chapter 1

Outskirts: Chapter 2
Outskirts: Chapter 3
Outskirts: Chapter 4
Outskirts: Chapter 5
Outskirts: Chapter 6
Outskirts: Chapter 7
Outskirts: Chapter 8 (New!)

Additional Tags: War, OC Ponies, Long, Desert, Journey

33 comments:

Hato F said...

It sounds like this story is...

*sunglasses*

OUT of it.

NinesTempest said...

Yesss finally posted.

Travis Smith said...

It took me like two minutes to see the wing

Dr. Applejack said...

Woot! I guess this means I'm officially part of the Fandom :P XD

Lord Elliott said...

Judging from the tags, War(ing), OC Ponies, (take a) Long, Desert, Journey??? :P

Gozer the Equestrian said...
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Scootaloo said...
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Dr. Twilight Sparkle said...

The Author is REALLY sexy.

Dr. Rainbow Dash said...

I'm so proud of you AJ pal :'D make me...er, more proud!

Dr. Rarity said...

@Lord Elliott
What? The tags make it sound to me like this is a "Journey" crossover.

Dr. Applejack said...

lol, all my Dr. buddies. Go back to steam you ne'er do wells

NinesTempest said...

wtf @ "Dr." comments o.x

Dr. Applejack said...

@NinesTempest

We're all friends on steam and other places and we are all fake doctors. When they saw that this was posted they went buck wild O.O

NinesTempest said...

Well I'm glad it was posted, because I think it deserves some spotlight on the blog.

I'll, if my general interest in fanfiction sustains itself, definitely keep up with this story.

zippy194 said...

can we have a different section for shipping so when our little brothers ask what shipping is in this certain context that wont happen.....ever

Maquabra said...

Hm... I's the best kind of fic: a grimdark with some shipping. And "advanture" forces it to have some kind of plot. Unfortunately it lacks Twilight - the pony every good fanfiction should know. Hope it will be long :)

Waiting for "complete" tag.

Photon said...

I need a doctor .... a doctor... This is heavy doc

Matias Seapony said...

All I can see now is.."doctor." "Doctor." "Ah! Good Morning Doctor." "Doctor Sparkle" "Doctor Dash" "Doctor" "Doctor" (Dr Pinkie Pie):"CHIMICHERRYCHONGAS!"

Vinyl Scootaloo said...

I find it easy to dislike Vanity, but I'm not sure why.

HollowLurkerz said...

What's with all the doctors? :P

Alondro said...

@Dr. Applejack I'm not a doctor, but I play one on Pony. ;D

I'm kinda close to a doctor. I have a masters degree in biology. *sighs* Yet another story to read... *adds to list... which is about 100 stories long* X__x

Doc Steedly said...

FINALLY! An interesting story not on one of those stupid fanfic sites. Hay, I would rather go through the extra steps to download the stories off of DA than deal with unformatted txt files from them fanfic sites.

Rycr said...

@Doc Steedly You know, most stories I've read on EQD are hosted on Google Docs just like this one.

Big Mac. said...

dun dun dun duuuunnnnn!!?!?!?!? that was a riveting chapter looking forward to later uupdates

metapsionic said...

This could be an interesting tale, but I'm having a hard time keeping interest for some reason. I think it's the lack of information. Regardless, it has potential, and I'll be looking forward to the next chapters.

Edit chapter 4: Still having trouble getting onto it. What's the point of constant alarms if you can hide in an elevator for 30 mins? Also, you have mouth-operated guns (yay) but also tweezers and a car (huh?).

Xaos said...

@Hato F YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!

T6J2E5 said...

Is this still being written? I hasn't been edited since 7 Sep.

Dr. Applejack said...

@T6J2E5

I'm sorry for not having updated in so long. I am still writing Outskirts, but recently started a new non-pony related project that has taken a lot of my time. That coupled with college classes made writing Outskirts difficult. I have started work on it again, but it will likely be slow because my other project requires much work as well. Sorry for the delay.

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