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Author: Zero Skyler
Description: A simple accident causes Derpy Hooves to have normal vision and a jogged mind. She is starting to remember things little by little, but what happens when there is more to remember than she could have imagined? This is the tale of a pony who goes on a journey to discover who she is and what she has forgotten. There are things that we all wish we could forget, Derpy proved it could be done. Now she only has to remember why.
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 1
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 2
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 3
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 4
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 5
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 6
noitcelfeR|Reflection Part 7 (New!)
Additional Tags: memories, subliminal concepts, emotional, introspective, determination
34 comments:
I would have done backwards letters, but that's just me- a Derpy fic where she gets normal vision?! Ima read this!!
Interesting concept, Normal tag only? Probably will read.
Sounds semi-sad. But interesting, so I will read it.
daer lliw I sihT
Read backwards
aw does sound pretty good
will read later
...who am i talking to?
@travis
not sure if directions were necessary, but ofcourse there r the few that just. dont. get it.
Why hasn't anyone thought of this sooner?
Inb4 a comment of "if you read this story backwards....."
Pretty nice to see this on EQD :D
ti tseggus ot gniog t'nsaw I
Anyone else notice that only some of the letters are backwards in the header image?
It's a very...
yrots doog
good!
@ShadowsPony Yep... it's almost as if the author meant for people to see the title on the picture and realize that the the one with the backwards letters is the regular title and the regular one is the reflectionl... I wonder if there is a subliminal message in that
No Sad/Dark tag?
@Zero Skyler
But the letters that aren't backwards aren't backwards in either. The word "Reflection" has no backwards letters, and the other only has some, like the artist got lazy.
oO seemst to be very, very short
@ShadowsPony
Thats because the message is that what you see in the reflection is clearer than reality. It may seem quite redundant, and it may seem like it was the product of a lazy artist, but a lot of consideration went into it. But in the end, as long as you enjoy the story, does it really matter?
@MaSc
I just noticed what you mean! I went to check out the fic, and your right. Only about a forth of the chapter was being displayed. I have no idea how it happened xD The chapter itself clocks in at around 4000 words. It's fixed now
and i was wondering why i don't understand the events in the following chapters -.-
@MaSc
Yeah that would be very confusing, especially because the second chapter bleeds over directly after the first.
But do know that the other chapters are not cannon. In fact before i even posted this one i ended up rewriting the entire chapter. The others may or may not have the same events, and really are just previews or brainstorming sessions
Each mirror is a window into another universe – let's see how it works for Derpy. Nice first chapter :-).
Awesome
Good story is good.
Needs more editing.
@DPV111
So does your comment. :shrug: I say we call it even.
@Zero Skyler (Neon Rave)
Lol. It's not riddled with mistakes, could use a touch up here and there though. Doesn't detract significantly from the story so it really makes no difference to me.
Looking forward to Ch. 3.
This needs to use the non-pixelated version of the cover art! Ugh! Meh, back to editing Chapter 3 xD.
I love it soooo much
Chapter 3 was great. For once Twi's OCD will come in handy.
I havent seen an update in soooo long
please
hurry and update D:
hmmm chapter 4 did two things for me...
1. it explained to me something and made it easier to understand
2. it told me new stuff and confused me again XD
MUST READ MORE
Also for those who have checked this story, or those going to. There is a very nice letter to/about us of the fandom and its dreamers. Beautifully written.
http://zeroskyler.deviantart.com/journal/To-the-Herd-297687454#comments
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