Thursday, January 5, 2012

Story: Night Guards (Update Part 7!)


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Author: Raugos
Description: At first glance, Princess Luna's charioteers might appear to be little more than Royal Guards dressed in festive apparel for Nightmare Night. However, there is far more to the story than that - the Night Guards once played a pivotal role in the history of Equestria, and have sacrificed more for their beloved princess than most ponies are even aware of.
Night Guards (New Part 7!)

Additional Tags: Hypothetical history, Royal guards, Loyalty

38 comments:

ZAquanimus said...

dang, beat to it. ahh well

Octavia said...

Oooh, a stroy revolving around Luna's guards. Now that sounds like it could be pretty interesting.

Travis Smith said...

I was hoping someone would make a story based on them!
Now I just need a Windego Story

ilovebagelz said...

Sweet, I love Luna's guards, I wonder what happened to them, or what they did when Luna was gone, maybe they helped her escape. Must read.

Princess Luna said...

Let's see if this one got their information right...

Homfrog said...

"sacrificed"

DEVIL WORSHIP

mdude009 said...

Ha, I read this before it was on here!... Wait... That would make me... A HIPSTER!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! *Puts gun in mouth*

Mlp_creamcheese said...

I agree @Octavia pretty interesting.

cirek said...

There goes an hour or two of my time.

I think it will be worth it though. :D

mycutiemarkisagun said...

Luna Guards need WAY more fandom love. wtf bronies?

Corky64 said...

Read this on Fimfiction. Pretty great to see a story about the Lunar Guards for once.

Foxbadger said...

Sweet! Luna's guards are so much more awesome than the Day guys.

Renegade Of Funk said...

give back story to ALL the things

Nightmare Moon said...

I do love the designs of those guards. I might have to give it a read.

Travis Smith said...

@mycutiemarkisagun
I try to love them but there is no one who will tolerat

Desert Rose said...

brilliant first 2 chapters.

Shadow Heart said...

@mycutiemarkisagun

Actually, they are outcasts because thay are pony-dragon hybrids that Luna hoof picked as her guards. I was the one who taught them. Glad to see Silent Night and Black Out are doing well as her guards.

Travis Smith said...

@Shadow Heart
You taught them?
I trained'em two years before you joined the royal guard!

cirek said...

Finished reading, all I have to say is that this story is EPIC.

PURE EPIC.

'nuff said.

Protagonist said...

I like this :D I want moar!!

mycutiemarkisagun said...

@Shadow Heart

OMFG!! You taught them?! Wait.......you're not the real Shadow Heart, you're just role playing! STOP MESSING WITH MY HEAD!!! I KNOW WHAT'S REAL AND NOT REAL! I KNOW WHAT'S REAL AND NOT REAL! I CAN STILL *TELL* DAMMIT!!!

i can still...tell....

ChaosDX1 said...

Funny how the best stories just draw me to them. I look forward to reading more!

Shadow Heart said...

@mycutiiemarkisagun

It's me, the real me.

@Travis Smith

To set things straight, I'm not a royal guard. Simply a friend of the Princesses. I taught them for a luna about three months back. But they were already pretty strong. Props to you.

Armageddon said...

what a damn good story, Kinda reminds me of some other stories in which the main characters are forced to betray people they know and love for a cause that may not be worth it, and are seen as monsters.

Damn good concept, Its got me hooked, keep writing man, i cant wait to read more!

litewarior4 said...

>Chapter 1

What a tweest.

Shade said...

@Nightmare Moon I personally like this story most out of all I have read.

Shade said...

@Nightmare Moon I personally like this story most out of all I have read.

Shade said...

@Shadow Heart

OBJECTION!!!
They were normal UNTIL Nightmare Moon transformed them... But, she did that when she confronted Princess Celestia, so there is a hole in your logic.
Realization: You are simply trying to mess with mycutiemarkisagun...

@Travis Smith

Entirely feasible.

Travis Smith said...

Well I at least give these guards their respect, as a Shadowbolt I pass on the title of protector

RX-77 [ITA] said...

I like where this story is going.

Travis Smith the Last Shadowbolt said...

I must follow tradition...

Sweet new update

ChaosDX1 said...

And thus another great tale comes to a close.
I'm going to have to start picking out new fanfics to follow.

Well done. I enjoyed reading!

RX-77 [ITA] said...

Why didn't I notice the Bonus Chapter added in June? It's simply awesome!

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