Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Story Updates December 6th (Evening)


Steampunk is awesome

So are ponies

Have some story updates.

Story: Upheaval: Breaking Point (Update Part 33!) 

4 Star


[Grimdark] [Adventure]

Author: Visiden Visidane
Description: A coincidence and a magical accident leads Twilight Sparkle to a grim world hidden by Equestria's peaceful existence.
Upheaval: The Breaking Point




Story: Unstable Ground (Update Chapter 3!) 

4 Star

[Adventure][Light Grimdark]


Author: Inky Notebook
Description: Five ponies find themselves in deeper trouble then they ever could have imagined. Through hardships they must fight to return to the home that they once knew. Together they will learn the true meanings of not only friendship but their cutie marks.
Unstable Ground



Story: My Little Airship (Update Part 3!)

5 Star

[Adventure] [Sci-Fi]

Author: Firmly_Grasp_It
Description: It's Canterlot's fabricated Beastie's versus Trottingham's steam-powered Clankers. Twilight Sparkle is a Princess without a throne. On the run from her own country, she has only a fighting machine and a small band of soldiers by her side. Applejack is an aspiring pilot in Canterlot's Royal Air Force. Being a mare, she must fight for her cause and fight off
the prejudice of her peers at all cost. They are enemies with everything to lose, yet somehow their paths were destined to cross.

Inspired by Scott Westerfeld's "Leviathan".
My Little Airship



43 comments:

Bombedrumbum said...

I like that steampunk airship thing picture

Jelfes said...

My Little Airship sounds interesting, I may have to give that one a read some day.

Dido said...

Nothing I'm reading... Short again dangit

Cloudhammer said...

Needs more Article 2

CityFlyer502 said...

More stuff to drag me away from my to-do list it would appear. Oh well.

Ashfire said...

needs more 'through the eyes'

Ashton said...

One day I plan to read My Little Airship, but not untill it's finished, it sounds too good to have to wait for...

Salzvatik12 said...

Needs a LOT more Transcendence.

Omega_code said...

Doesn't the airship look like the one from the new episode?

Zaiker42 said...

Man, nothing I'm reading this time around.

Probably for the best,i should be doing homework anyway.

Tyranoman said...

Damn still no Transcendence or My little Hangover yet, ah well im sure people will have a lot more writing time during the holidays. *Crosses fingers*

Aerobrony768 said...

@Cloudhammer
I'm so addicted to that story! Moar!

Nebbles said...

A Leviathan based story?! Oh my god, definitely reading!

Nathaniel said...

Part of me is glad that none of my stories updated, so I can get this final assignment done. The other half of me is screaming for ponies.

MasterLuigi452 said...

What happened to End of Ponies?
It's almost been a month and no updates whatsoever...

Raefire said...

My First Party by ScyStorm? C'mon, Seth, it's had a second chapter for like two weeks...

Raefire said...

And End of Ponies takes a while. Author seems to like releasing 5 chapters at once.

Jolttix said...

More Though the eyes please!

Dusk Star said...

Needs more "Growing Pains". And more "Paradise" (but I think that one died- haven't seen an update in months)

Wolfy1328 said...

My little hangover, when will you return? :(

Hato F said...

@Gaarathedancingpanda

Transcendence author has been on hiatus forever now.

Joe said...

Lol at the authors name of the last story.

SatRock said...

@Cloudhammer
Your comment has won a cookie...

Broznik said...

Oh my Celestia... LEVIATHAN CROSSOVER. I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW! ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE ABOUNDS!

toothlessbrony said...

I made my first fanfic. I don't know if this link will work but: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hqwwt-mNlmk6CgZ2XuZoOMOy3MT-vT2w6DiW3hJ4Nr0/mobilebasic?hl=en_GB
WARNING. Chapter 1 is realllllllllly short and I'm working on a much longer chapter 2 right now.

OtterMatt said...

Pony sages tell that on the night that Transcendence, Fallout:Equestria, and Through The Eyes Of Another Pony all update at once, this world will end, and Celestia will come to reign for 1000 years.

At least, I think that's what they said. There was a LOT of whinnying.

Travis Smith said...

Wow Airship updated? Now I have something to do while in bed with a broken leg.

DPV111 said...

I think Upheaval: Breaking Point updates should be a drinking game. I'm pretty sure it updates often enough to get a good buzz goin.

Deibron said...

Haven't seen anything I've been reading in a while...
It will probably all hit me in one update

toothlessbrony said...

Okay here's the right link for my fanfic. The first chapter Is reallllllyyyyyyyyy short but chapter 2 (which I'm working on right now, will be really long)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hqwwt-mNlmk6CgZ2XuZoOMOy3MT-vT2w6DiW3hJ4Nr0/edit

Manajix said...

I have read Leviathan. It was very enjoyable. Maybe a pony version will be 20% cooler.

Manajix said...

@toothlessbrony
Dude, please work on your grammar. It subtracts from the story if it is poorly punctuated. Also, set the mood, explain characters, and describe the setting. Imagine you are telling the story to someone who knows nothing about mlp: fim. I'm trying to help. :)

Specter Von Baren said...

Seriously? Over 33 chapters?

mycutiemarkisagun said...

@DPV111

Two Words: Alcohol poisoning.

@Specter Von Baren

....IN TWO FUCKING MONTHS.

@toothlessbrony

um,

cool story bro!

*feels really bad*

toothlessbrony said...

@Manajix
Thanks man I need feedback. I'll edit it now and btw I'm a quarter through chapter 2.

toothlessbrony said...

@mycutiemarkisagun
Well this is my first fanfic with ponies ^^. So yah I suck. Like I said this is just a sort of test to see if I can actually write with their personalities. I've done an actually cool and awesome story about slenderman, I'm better at writing with different personalities. This is v. 0.5 (consider it) I'm going to edit everytime I get feedback like this. And it was reallllyyyyyyyyy short and had bad punctuation I know! But I was so excited :P. So now I'll edit it.

toothlessbrony said...

@Manajix
How exactly do you punctuate pony when showing possession. Like this?: pony's.

Blaze_Fyre said...

Transcendence?
Blood is thicker than friendship?
tear drops and snowflakes?
Brotherhood of the moon?
Lost in time?

ANYTHING?

toothlessbrony said...

Does anypony know if there's a mlp forums?

DPV111 said...

@toothlessbrony

If you are writing regular fiction try ponychan.
For Grimdark and Clop use fimchan.
There's also tome pony threads on 4chan.

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