Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Story: Through Storm and Snow (Update Chapter 3!)

[Sad][Random][Comedy]

Author: Phoenix Quill
Description: Ditzellia Esmerelda Doo is an average mare with a long name, and typical job.
She also has a not so average eye condition, that brings pain in the form of a name given by other ponies. But
when unusual things start to happen, a stranger makes an offer that can turn the tables for our favorite mail mare.
Events take place before, during and after "The Return of Harmony" Episodes.
Through Storm and Snow Part 1
Through Storm and Snow Part 2
Through Storm and Snow Part 3 (New!)

Additional Tags: Ditzy Doo, Discord, Hope,

46 comments:

Bombedrumbum said...

Sad random comedy



Sounds like my kinda fic

Bombedrumbum said...

I lol'd at Pheonix Quill's full name for Derpy Hooves.

Jelfes said...

Sad Random Comedy... I did not know such a combination was possible.

Bombedrumbum said...

@Jelfes Dark humor, anypony?

LiuXaun said...

I just may read a fic for once.
*Bookmarked*

Travis Smith said...

Sad Random and Comedy, this is worth a read

Bombedrumbum said...

Hey, I think I know that picture!! It was part of a very well-drawn comic if I remember correctly

Rainbow Dash's Ex-lover said...

I am interested to see how you turn this out. BUT FIRST I must sleep!

Rainbow Smashly said...

Read comic picture. NOO Derpy is suicidal!

Shadow Heart said...

I read tommarow

I drunk NOW

I LIKE STRAWBERRY MUFFINs!

Travis Smith said...

Strangely, I feel more respect for Derpy but in still just not a big fan

Pegasus Rescue Brigade said...

*Gasp of a magnitude befitting Pinkie Pie*

Another Ditzy story! I love it!
(Obviously, considering I'm writing a Ditzy story now.)

I shall read immediately, good sir.

herpyderpy said...

"Ditzellia Esmerelda Doo"

lolz.

Will read this later tonight.

LiuXaun said...

I don't see how anyone could not like this pony. She's the embodiment of the fandoms influence.

Manajix said...

Meh. I'm kinda busy reading Shipping and Handling, and I would prefer not to confuse myself.

DPV111 said...

Sad random comedy?

A man walks into a bar, "OUCH!"

Phoenix Quill said...

Finally it made it here!
Well, now I only have one thing to do!
Start Chapter Two...

Bombedrumbum said...

@Pheonix Quill
I'm writing a fanfic as well. And i still haven't gotten even a tenth of a chapter done, lol. Good job and good luck, bro!!

Discord said...

i'm in it NOW EVERYPONY MUST READ IT!

Fluttershy said...

Ditzella Ezmerelda Doo? oh my...

Bombedrumbum said...

@Discord
@Fluttershy
How about you two?

WizardShy said...

@Bombedrum Hey, you're writing one too? No way! Me too! It's like a large majority of this fanbase tries it out at some point or another or something!

Discord said...

@Bombedrumbum

I have more important things to do than write story's like... OK i suck at story writing i do have ideas tho... OH THE IDEAS

Bombedrumbum said...

@Discord Write about squirrels "OH THE SQUIRRELS"

Shadow Heart said...

@Discord

Wtote for my amusement you crazy dragon goat pony bird thing.

Bombedrumbum said...

@Shadow Heart oh, the irony.....

Discord said...

Skills

Chaos✓
punctuation X
grammar X
Trolling✓
took an Arrow in the knee✓

CityFlyer502 said...

The tags alone arise my interest in this one. One more thing to pile onto my to do list.

Discord said...

@Bombedrumbum

Bombeeee that kills people

Tundra said...

I figured Ditzy was short for "Ditsiana", but I guess that's just from reading another powerful fan fiction about our favorite mail mare.
So far, Phoenix Quill, your story seems to be taking the right direction: good setting, good story line, and character actions that make sense.
I look forward to where you'll take this next.

a47a3bba-2051-11e1-af6b-000f20980440 said...

@Tundra

I definitely agree with Tundra on this; so far the story is looking pretty darn good. Granted not much has happened just yet, but I will most certainly be keeping an eye on this one for when it updates.

Also, love the full name the author made up for Ditzy, very snazzy! ^_^

Tundra said...

@Discord
Yeah, well, you're not a "people". I think you'll be fine.

Phoenix Quill said...

@a47a3bba-2051-11e1-af6b-000f20980440
Its funny, but I did not come up with that name for her, I found it on My Little Brony. Apparently it came from a Tumblr, but I have yet to find the original post.

Phoenix Quill said...

Oh... I Just found it...
Link
http://askditzydoo.tumblr.com/post/10502360514/what-surprises-me-the-most-is-how-you-even-manage

OtterMatt said...

Gilda Radner would be proud. That classic SNL joke never gets old. Going into the "read" list to watch for updates!

YetAnotherBrony said...

I'm a little apprehensive of the combination of the Sad and Random tags. I read that COPS fic here at EqD that was tagged "Comedy" and it really wasn't at all.

Sahaquiel said...

Nice opening chapter, Derpy reacted very understandably and it was nice to see ponies standing up for her for once, in most of this type of story no-one seems to, looking forward to seeing the next chapter

akiv12801 said...

I can't wait to read more of this one. I just hope that it's not too sad. Celestia knows that I don't need to cry over ponies anymore. But, it's really a great story.

Phoenix Quill said...

Hey for anyone out there that reads comments, My internet is shut down, and Its going to be a while until I have it back, Until then I am writing the second Chapter (have been since Dec 5th) When my internet comes back, I promise you shall have at least one new chapter.

DreadedCandiru2 said...

HHHmmmmmpppphhhhh. Might have known that somepony wouldn't make the connection between "explosion of color out of nowhere" and the accident that left Ditzy's eyes messed up. Too bad for everyone that said idiot tends to go overboard when she does realize she's done something wrong. If things work out the way I think they will, Rainbow Dash isn't the first one using the phrase "Stop helping!!"

KS said...

Does anyone else have problems with Google Docs or is it just me?

Phoenix Quill said...

@KS

There is supposed to be a fimfic link in there too, but for some reason, they derped and didn't put it in.

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