[Sad]
Author: Autumn Wind
Description: Sparkler has a happy life with her adoptive mother and sister.Shimmer
However, a secret weighs heavy on her. Seeking some advice and relief,
she comes knocking at Cheerilee's door.
Shimmer (Alternate)
Additional Tags: Sparkler shares the family secret
29 comments:
first?
A fic with an Alternative story. Sounds amazing
Hmmmm.....Cheerilee sure seems to be getting a lot of fics recently...
I can't remember ever seeing a fic posted like that before, lol. It took me a while to find out how to actually read it.
This is what amazes me.
It's like the show switched at birth, but with a pony story concept that can help make both original and alternative story simply Brilliant!!!
^_^
@Bombedrumbum
Oh, I didn't notice that, never seen that before. I wonder if they're both sad though
Wow what an absolutely amazing story! ;-; a real tearjerker and just generally amazingly written story
@ThunderIce I know!!
So.....sad......yet.......amazing.......Q.Q
I sure didn't see the ending coming. This was a very good read. Though you better have something happy on hand for when you're done. You just might need it.
Hmm...If it really is that good, bookmarked. I'll have to read it later though, it's too late here.
On an unrelated note, I found out subscribing to pasts is not such a good idea
*posts
@ThunderIce
Lolnope :)
i do it all the time
@Bombedrumbum
HOW DOES YOUR EMAIL NOT DIE????!! lol, but seriously, even with Gmail's conversation view, just 7 comments is starting to make me reconsider subscribing to this post. When it says 'Follow-up comments will be sent to', I thought it meant follow up comments as in replies to your comment(s)
@ThunderIce
My e-mail is a zombie
@Bombedrumbum
Ah, okay. I don't even know why I mind, since my email is like 96% empty. Also, these comments have gotten complete irrelevant to the story
And Blogger doesn't like posting my comments
It won't load!!! I'm asking Tia for a new computer, she still hasn't got me a Hearth's Warming present...
For anyone still unsure if this fic is worth the read or not - it's currently over on fimfiction right now, with an overall rating of 5.0 after 107 ratings.
Yes, it's definitely worth it.
Sparkler? Why does that name sound familier to me
Sparkler with Sad tag?
*adds to reading list*
A perfect 5 on FIM Fiction. Let's make it 6-Star here folks. It deserves it.
@Travis Smith She's Derpy's adopted daughter. She isn't as well known as other OCs are. That's the answer if you weren't being sarcastic, sometimes I just can't tell.
It's not a bad story, it's just, in the way of Sparkler/Derpy/Dinky stories, I prefer "My Sweetie" By Big Macintosh.
@Princess Luna
I just didn't know, I'm still learning some OCs, I thought it was Twilight's daughter from that fic of her and Trixie having a kid
@Travis Smith
That would be Midnight, or Midnight Sparkle as I refer to her to avoid confusion.
And Sparkler's a background pony, not an OC.
If you're looking this far down for whether or not you should read this, it's a fantastically moving piece where Derpy isn't the one being sad for once.
Seth, it's 6-stars now. And it certainly deserves to be. The pacing is good, the characters are believable, the plot is solid, and the only problem I noticed was "Sparkler nervously settled down on Cheerilee’s sofa, nodding nervously" in page 4.
The time spent reading this was well-spent. Good job, author.
Absolutely wonderful.
I've been writing fics for over half a year now, and I've just realised that I've written my email wrong on every last one of them through the black magic of copy paste.
My email is autumnwind.mlp@gmail.com, not hotmail.com.
Massive apologies to anyone who tried to email me at any point in time. I'd be glad to hear what you had to say.
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