Author: Gabriel LaVedier
Description: At a little gin mill called "Swallow's Swallow", two gargantuan egos puff and impact in a haze of booze and anger at the world and the injustices they may or may not have brought upon themselves.Broken Young Nag, Bitter Young Haggard
At last, the rare and powerful Gildixie.
Additional Tags: Egos, Performance, Drinking, Anger, Connection
31 comments:
Gildixie??!?!?!/ thats.....gulp....new.....
SECOND!
@robotboy199 sorry, not on fanfics.
That...sounds dangerous. I got five says this place doesn't survive the end of the story.
@the invincible
Chances are, you're wrong......gulp........
Gildixie?!?!??
.....Totally reading this.
Aww man XD.........This is quite a fic, lol!!
a trixie ship that isn't twixie? wow. props to author for originality.
WHAT HAS SCIENCE DONE!!?
Gilda and Trixie? Oh boy. That is a match of two rather large egos.
Oh dang. This is the last thing I was exspecting. Actualy I dont even think it was on the list! *puts on glasses, checks list*
Gilda and Trixie? This I gotta see.
@Crimson_Wing Many things.
Anyways, that was quite an interesting read!! Very good.
It has a "sad" tag on it, yet I was smiling. :D
@ombutescentdin The last thing that you were expecting, huh?
never thot id evr see this O.O
... Why can I see this happening?
Huh... Nifty
I see no sad in this. This was hilarious, in fact. Especially when Swallow basically pulled off a "break out the popcorn" in the background, and a random passerby joined in the show.
I give them like ten minutes before they break up.
Well that was amusing. And I always like a unique, not-seen-anywhere-else ship. I approve!
And Swallow is an awesome dude.
Well that was...interesting. I don't think such a relationship is really going to go anywhere, but it will be a roller coaster ride while it lasts!
Oh hey, I totally drew that Trixie picture up there. Asking would have been nice >.>
That was pretty great! Maybe they could each humble each other out and become less of dirtbags together.
Or just end up like Diamon Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Anyway, Energizer has the hits for Swallow...
Swallow is the man.
Also Gildixie... lolwut. That's new for me. I kinda like though.
That [Sad] tag is lost. It's not supposed to be there. =|
The end was rather abrupt, imo, and if there was ever a case of action tag abuse, it'd be here. You have it at the end of pretty much every dialogue line. The writing was a little clunky, but that's completely personal.
I guess the best part about this story was your OC. He's real, downtrodden, and likeable. Gilda as a drunkard adult, Trixie as her obnoxious self, and that ending - decent, but not spectacular. To be honest it'd take a genius to pull off any extended interaction between those two well, so +1 for effort. Overall, four stars, and I'd love to see what you can do with a less over-the-top premise. =)
...Gilda x Trixie shipping? I need to read this.
I predict a casual meeting, an insult (intentional or otherwise), an increasingly loud and heated argument, possibly over drinks, a very confusing night, and an agreement to never speak of this again.
NOTICE: This fanfiction has been declared BLASPHEMOUS by the church of HOLY TWIXIE.
Uh...uh..
You know what, this could have totally happened.
Posted by trixe in a santa hat.
Meh. Two stars. Ending was too fast, resolution felt incomplete.
31st what do I win?
Post a Comment