[Comedy]
Author: Impossible Numbers
Description: When Applejack discovers that a thief has been stealing her prized apples, she looks for help in capturing the culprit. Fluttershy is eager to step in, but she's been acting very oddly of late...All of a Fluttershy
Additional Tags: A pony friendship-comedy whodunnit








18 comments:
NotFirst
Guessing before reading: It's Angel.
WHODUNNIT
I don't get it
Wat
Come on everypony! There's a mystery afoot! Or is it ahoof?
Who dunnit? lolidunno.
DONE.
Eh it was a decent story! But still good worth my time!
A mystery is upon us! Call in Sherclop Holmes (not THAT kind of clop, it's not a dirty word!)
A story about me?
you rock, woohoo!
I guess ill try it :)
I have the coolest idea for a small fluttershy comic now. I am going to make the Stare at least 20% cooler!
Good god RD was a total bitch in this one.
I'll let it go since it's a comedy fic but that was borderline OOC.
Hmm. What should Flutters fight next? I know! A Salamander!
It was ok, but felt kinda messy and rushed...
That was cute as hell and nicely episodic in feel in a good couple of places.
I thought that was an AMAZINGLY good read. Absolutely loved it. ^^
Big Macintosh reminds me of GrimdarkBigMac in this. the ending was so perfect.
Excellent story, despite the foreshadowing I didn't figure it out until the 'reveal'. Really enjoyed it, had some great descriptive bits (the 'stare' and 'windows on the soul' spring to mind).
Balloon! LOL!
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