[Random][Comedy]
Author: Bob From Bottles
Description: All the author wanted to do was write out a simple literary scenario for some practice. That idea went out the window as soon as Pinkie broke the fourth wall and decided she wanted to help. Now, the author only hopes he can finish his slowly unraveling tale before Pinkie ends up driving him insane.And I Shall Name Them "Cuppins"
Additional Tags: Pinkie "helps" create a story
57 comments:
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Looks good. xD
This looks absolutely EPIC.
And Pinkie Pie even broke out of the secondary literature here and deleted the “Story” tag.
Confound that title image... I'm going to read it right now.
Oh great... Poor author. I have to read this!
Read it on Ponychan.
IT'S EPIC.
5/5
This is art.
That was glorious. Simply glorious. I laughed so much at the exchanges and the truly random turns of the plot. Glorious.
This post doesn't have the "Story:" prefix.
"Solving life's problems by blasting them with rainbows..."
I almost fell out of my chair laughing.
@Evina
Because it's not a story... it's an EXPERIENCE.
Haha they used my Pinkie picture! I gotta read it now!
Sheer, utter, complete, totally undeniable genius. You, my good brony, have won not one gold star but FIVE. Plus 12 brownie points (redeemable for 1 cuppin!) and an internet.
I think I better avoid this for the next few days so as not to unconsciously swipe any material for the Pinkie based chapter of my own story, which is in progress right now.
I better save this away so I can read it afterwards, though.
That was hilarious. Twilight's conclusion, blasting problems with rainbows, cheesy build-ups that love will conquer anything - especially if it's explosive. Oh, and mechs.
Have ALL the stars!
Pure brilliance. I laughed so hard through the whole thing. 5 stars!
I loved it until the end. The dream was way too cliche. Still, 5 stars and bookmarked.
Finished it.
Have all my internets! Trade em in for a cuppin, you deserve it.
And I sense incoming baking shenanigans after this.
And fic idea: A teleport spell teleports an unknown quantity of the main six to a few moments before they teleported, interrupting the spell. Time begins to fall apart but thats interrupted when the gang teleports in again, but from another universe.
I have no idea why I thought of that.
Oh this sounds like fun, no way I'd pass up a something like this.
THAT.... was damn funny. Bravo, encore, etc.
Now that has me wondering, IS there a recettear/pony crossover fic?
5/5 btw, loved it
Stuck that in another tab to check out later, sounds like it will be a good read.
That was really good, the use of Pinkie Pie and the fourth wall was both funny and really creative.
@Ten
I know the feeling, I have a ton of tabs open.
It was Dr. Who meets the inverse of Duck Amok. Good stuff :D
@Muffinsforever *Mental gears turning*
Bob From Bottles? This gets a read for sure.
This story was completely HILARIOUS! xD Recommended read for everyone, trust me, it's worth it. Read it NAO!
5/5
Bwahahahaha!
I loved it =D
Genuinely funny, which is really tricky to pull off in a random story. I was skeptical, to be honest, as most 'Pinkie Pie 4th wall antics' stories are too over the top 'random for the sake of random' and not 'well timed random for the sake of good comedy'. This worked, though!
5/5
SIR TOASTLY REQUIRES BUTTER FOR HIS BREAD ARMY
Celestia breaks the fourth wall, too? That is...whoa....
All my stars! Take them! All five of them!
@cc3e4fd6-2a85-11e1-88af-000f20980440
That is the story I'm planning to do next.
That was incredible!
@Bob from Bottles
Woo hoo!
The second fanfic I've ever finished reading, and it was absolutely phenomenal! Congratulations on such a great story - incredibly witty, well-paced and creative! More from you, I think! =D
@Bob from Bottles
Dear sir, please have my babies.
...OR WAS IT???
This story is absolutely hilarious and should be taken as a perfect example of how to break the fourth wall. :D
raged
Mechanically perfect, wacked-out idea. I found it amusing but not laugh-out-loud funny, though I did snort at the Spike scene. Even so, for perfect fourth-wall breaking and amazing restraint, not taking it too over the top, 5 stars. A pleasant read.
Awesome. It breaks the fourth wall without dislodging the reader, and it crafts a story WITH Pinkie Pie's randomness in its almighty glory.
@Present Perfect
Break the 4th wall? It was a little more than broken. The 4th wall was smashed, mangled, mutilated and ground into fine dust, then bombarded by light-speed protons for 20 years and reassembled into a radioactive mass.
Which was the giant ball of fire.
@White Ink
I would be remiss if I didn't add to Twilight's initial sighting of the fireball. "Goodness gracious, great balls of fire!" she cried.
;D
A joy to read. Well deserving of it's 6-star status.
5 stars for a phenomenal piece of work done, and I would've given you an additional one more if I could for throwing in dat Recettear reference. To imagine Pinkie Pie having played that game, or at the very least know of it, is plain yayifications.
Or is this a foreshadowing of what's to come? Are we actually going to see Pinkie Pie converting Sugarcube Corner into an item shop? Pretty please with 'capitalism ho' on top?
Oh. Bob From Bottles? Auto read.
I think my email to Bob From Bottles sums it up for me... Best Fic EVER!
@AK
Yes, the Recettear reference is foreshadowing for the next story I plan to write. Capitalism, ho!
"Sir Toastly requires butter for his bread army!"
Best. Line. Ever.
@bob from bottles
heh, mareacle, i see what you did there!
I liked this story, although the lampshade hanging at the end was a bit egregious.
Pinkie's relationship with the author felt like an unruly, loony-style player in an RPG interacting with a frustrated GM.
This is a very good story. It is beautifully written and highly amusing, especially if the person reading it has ever tried to write a story themselves. I can't find a single thing wrong with it. Highlights include solving every single problem that comes along by blasting it with a rainbow, Princess Luna, Recettear, and pretty much everything else. Also, I never thought the old 'it was all a dream' cliché could actually end a story properly.
Outstanding work.
And I shall name them "Bloody awesome and hilarious"
Much facepalming has been acquired here today.
T'was epic
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