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Author: Jenohart
Description: The rule of Discord may be over, but it left behind an unexpected legacy. Ponyville is no stranger to crazy ponies, but how will it cope with a being born from pure chaos?
Ponyville Gets Screwed
Additional Tags: Bizarro, Screwball, totally-not-Lyra, the 5th dimension
37 comments:
First
First because I deserve it once.
So, Screwball is getting a story?
@DrahcirAloer lol, not quite.
I got there First
And thus the legacy of Topsy Turvy has began. (that pony in the image)
Nice job Macintosh
YES! A SCREWBALL STORY! Pony fandom, why u so awesome? Author, why u also so awesome?
Yes. This pleases me!
I was sincerely hoping Screwball would catch on; she's too interesting to not be added to the roster fan favourite background characters.
.. and though I know it's not the most popular idea, and will be less so after this story catches on the "made by Discord" idea, I personally like to think she's just a pony who could handle the chaos a little too well.. just because I find that the most amusing way to look at it.
Screwball/Topsy Turvy
Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo
Vinyl Scratch/DJ-P0N3
wow...
Oh damn it. I was just about planning to go to bed before I noticed this.
This pony was on screen for about 3 seconds and now she has fanfiction. I can't explain that.
My brain hurts. It am bad story, me no think.
Heh... Skyra.
Okay, that's clever...
Wow...this is..
actually really good
I hadn't expected it to be
But I now want moar
yay
It's been a long, long time since I've like Bizarro-speak, but otherwise, these are amusing short stories; I particularly like "Skyra" and "Onbon".
I wouldn't mind taking a shot at this character, though my rendition would be more of the 'regular pony with a insane split personality'. But this one's pretty good too. XD
Why would this get uploaded?
I've had stores submitted that were immediately rejected because the beginning chapter did not have 3000+ words, and this story so far doesn't even have that much in the only 2 chapters it has!
Just... why?
This...actually broke my brain. I cannot think coherently (relative to my previous thought processes) after experiencing that tale. (in other words, it was funny)
I need a drink, confound these ponies.
*Puts on sunglasses*
YEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
Ow. My brain. It hurts.
I can't wait till Screwball runs into Pinke Pie.
Eh, average level of insanity.
Nowhere near enough to impress me and I think the Batman villain 'Joker' is tame.
@D. Shadows
I was about to say that was both impressed and disturbed by this...
...but yeah the Joker's gotten pretty predictable. Always, ALWAYS with the the killing sprees...
"OC ponies" tag? *facehoof*
It all makes sense now! Bon-Bon has a twin!
Okay.
Okay.
Now that was just funny.
More please.
Guys. It's Screwball. Her Cutie Mark is a screw and a ball.
Screwball won't rest until the whole metaverse is destroyed, and all we're left is a blank page.
This story is deliriously giddy.
Receptionist has a BSOD. And the story even references the show's carbon copies.
wheres the second chapter?!? bs FIMfiction had this like 3 days ago
This was a difficult read. It was good, though. I like the idea of Screwball screwing with the other ponies with her antics.
An important thing: Swear words do not go well in Pony fanfics. If the pony must absolutely swear, substitute it with a pony-pun swear. I haven't read any humans in Equestria fics, but I think those are the only place where they are appropriate.
@Conner Cogwork
DO EET!
But what happened to your sequel of "On a Cross and Arrow"? That's one of my favorite stories and I was excited for a sequel.
I love the epicly matter-of-fact title :D
That was pretty hilarious, and then hilarious and terrifying. Well done, Jenohart, I'll be looking forward to more.
That was the funniest read I've had in a while. I especially loved the whole fax machine bit. XD
Well that was... uh... by which I mean... um... dang. I... I got nothing.
I am happy to see something being done with this character, though. The moment I saw her float past, I thought "This pony is just too weird to *not* do something with."
That was pretty funny. Was hoping someone would use her for something. Heck even Tom got a fic already and he's a rock.
*Read part 1 and 2*
I like how the author is talking of Derpy/Ditzy, Lyra and etc... in an amusing, yet respectful way.
It's really a great way to go with them, I would say.
...Also...
~*~*~Confusion~*~*~
But, I think it was kinda the intended goal, no ? ;)
Still... It might be good, if this 'new pony born from Chaos' had a larger role in those parts ?
It's good, but she seems to come and go maybe a bit too fast.
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