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[Comedy]
Author: SuperGiantRobot
Description: It is the annual Nightmare Night costume party, hosted by Pinkie Pie (naturally). As the party goes on, she notices a pony in an extremely convincing ghost costume...Ponygeist: A Nightmare Night Tale
Additional Tags: Halloween, Nightmare Night, Costume party, Ghost, Spooky
39 comments:
Lol, sounds like a fun fanfic!
Comedy?
It's a Pinkie Pie story. You were expecting anything else?
Lol, he derped the italics around the word always (in the story)
Sorry, 'bout that; I'm always tinkering with the stories I write.
Gdocs link (DA is acting up a bit); https://docs.google.com/document/d/13khqo-Kidtlfc5tXcGRxpcOVdmOsf1NttqqtD3N3dKU/edit?hl=en_US
@SuperGiantRobot
Sorry, it's just that whenever I hear of a Pinkie Pie fic, my mind somehow registers in such a way that it either ends being either horror or something involving a bloody mess. this however sounds rather promising
@SuperGiantRobot here, I embedded the link for you
It was insane; the first day I posted this on DA I had over 5000 views. In two I had over 8000.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/13khqo-Kidtlfc5tXcGRxpcOVdmOsf1NttqqtD3N3d KU/edit?hl=en_US <------this is the link, isnt it?
ah, here we go?
@SuperGiantRobot you added a space between the d and the K in your link
This was well written and entertaining. The twist ending had me smiling.
@SuperGiantRobot yes, that link does.....
I'm amazed how well it went, On Deviant Art it was like getting hit by an avalanche.
@SuperGiantRobot well, congratulations then! Thank you for the fic, i'll waste no time reading it!!
Twilight as a prankster...
We need more of this!
I'm glad we're getting more light-hearted stories lately, there is only so much sad/grimdark I can take.
@Bombedrumbum
You're always first, so you win.
Discord will be pleased with my next plan.
. . .did I just say that aloud?
Apparently a couple of the pre-readers liked it so much they were considering asking Sethiso to bend the rule and allow it to be posted despite the fact it was below the minimum word count at the time.
A GOOD READ
Inside voice, please...
Nice Rich, your story got posted. I'll give it another read.
I added a tiny bit, just to get it to the minimum, but mostly just descriptive stuff; no real changes.
All I can say about the ending is....
WHAT A TWIST!
If I write another story, I PROMISE to impress you all just as much as I have today.
"Cross my heart and hope to fly..."
I was wondering when someone would get around to turning that pic into a fic.
Not what I was expecting but even more amusing than I would have thought.
Excellentally done and so in-character for Twilight.
Yeah, I'm surprised how well it's done. I figured it'd be good for a laugh and then...Ye gods.
twilight becoming a prankster, eh? I think Celestia is rubbing off on her.
Forget Trollestia, Heil Discord
Fast. Cute. Cool. Daft Punk.
Good story, but ease up on the italics. You emphasized far too many words too often.
That's how Pinkie speaks. Emphasis all over the place.
It wasn't just when she spoke, it was everywhere, all throughout the story. Which is fine if the situation warrants it, but I think you overdid it just a bit.
It's not a big issue, but it's something you may want to keep an eye out for in the future. Over-emphasizing can cause parts you actually want to emphasize to not have as much impact on the reader as youdesire. This isn't necessarily as big an issue when a character is speaking (though still significant) as it is when describing a scene or an emotion.
Well, to be fair, nearly all the story is from her point of view: her thoughts would probably be emphasized as well.
I can tidy it up some, but sometimes emphasis just has to be used.
4 stars from me. Well written and fun but I thought Pinkie was quite subdued, and it was very short and somewhat predictable.
Great story to read, always nice to see Twilight with a sense of humor... even if its a bit over the top =P
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