Thursday, October 13, 2011

Story: One of Each Day


[Comedy]


Author: The Great Allie
Description: Every year Pinkie Pie makes one of every kind of treat, and her friends help her. This year, something goes wrong and they have to track down the Taking Things Away Goblin to save the day for Pinkie.

One of Each Day


Additional Tags: silly, baking, goblin, random, ensemble

19 comments:

Celestia said...

That is the most random description I have seen in a long time.

Jelfes said...

Reminds me of the underpants gnomes because of it being so oddly specific, Taking Things Away Goblin...

wackyteen said...

I wasn't going to read it, till I read the description.

Now I have ta.

Cain.Is.Blogging.Stuff said...

Taking Things Away Goblin. Hehe.

That part alone made me want to read it.

Dusty the Royal Janitor said...
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Dusty the Royal Janitor said...

Heh... Okay, THIS one sounds funny.
The "Taking things away Goblin..." You just know a character like that deserves a musical number or something.

Oh I'm a mean old Goblin
I steal for fun and play
I sneak into your house
And then I take your things away
Oh I'm an impish Goblin
And I am here to stay
You can hide your stuff
But it's not enough
'Cause I'll find it anyway

Jelfes said...

@Dusty the Royal Janitor Did you just make that up?

Celestia said...

*spoilers*

Oh wow, this is so ludicrously random I don't even know where to begin.
The concept is silly but well done, characterisation was good, Pinkie was hillarious. I did not expect songs in it either which was a nice touch.

Her explanation for her Pinkie center made me laugh, a government grant. I'll have to find out who gave that to her.

The ending was nice, I liked it.
It was fairly random but well written, humorous and certainly worth a read.

Dusty the Royal Janitor said...

@Jelfes

Right off the top of my head. Yup :)

Shingo said...

Did... did Pinkie roofie the mane cast and the CMC?

Wonderful story, I'd love to see more from you.

Nintyuk said...

Welcome to THE PARTY CAVE!

Batmare would be proud.

Viola said...

Now I want to read it just because of Dusty's song. How inspirational xP

zaptiftun said...

Well, that was random as heck...I could see it being an episode, though.

Dashmaster said...

Lmao, Pinkie's second song about the One Of Each Day gave me a vivid mental image of smeagol xD

Melodia said...

Where are the comments? Yeesh.

Great story though. Pretty funny.

Also, who was that pony that pretended to be Applejack?

Cold in Gardez said...

That was a really well-written story. Outstanding creativity and writing.

Good job, Allie.

Nimbus Buster said...

@Jelfes

Takes things away Goblin's Bit making scheme:
Phase 1: Take things Away
Phase 2: .....
Phase 3: Profit

haha so yeah, I was thinking the same thing

TenchiFreak5 said...

This was great. The nice little poems/songs throughout were hilarious, and I loved how the goblin kept stopping to explain the obvious. I also started thinking about the underpants gnomes when he started explaining his reasoning, and I laughed even harder then.


5/5.

DPV111 said...

Great story, worth a read.

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