[Shipping]
Author: Mazzyrazzy
Description: After a full day in Canterlot, Twilight and Rarity decide to explore the palace garden's legendary hedge maze. Their attempts to unravel the mysteries of the labyrinth yield some interesting and unexpected results.Lost in Love
Additional Tags: Best friends, Best day ever
45 comments:
STORYTIME
Whats with all the Twi-Rarity shipping lately?
a Rarilight?
well....
i guess i should read it so the only Rarilight i've ever read is more than a single clopfic...
RarityxTwilight? Havent seen much of that *begins reading*
Yay. more rarylight!!
Rarity's been getting shipped more often lately. Wonder why.
Rarity shipping is on the up and up these days. Maybe she'll be the next Rainbow Dash.
...on second thought, no. Spike is the best Rainbow Dash.
Raritwi is always a welcome combo for me. Defiantly reading!
Rarilight? Hell yes.
Hmmm... not sure... but if it will keep me up all night. *reads*
=| This has all the makings of a good fic... 'elaborate' exposition and all... but i can't find the will to continue reading...
maybe tomorrow...
I was expecting a romantic evening with Twilight Sparkle, not Outdoor Sports.
Rarity! Put down the saddle! You know not what you're getting into!
Oh look more shipping!
Misanthropy +20 points
-looks at the picture-
Aww, so close to being able to say "Twilight look! Your horns are touching."
Just bought some Hot Chocolate.
Got mah Snuggie.
It's go time.
Now that.... was cute to say the least. In all honesty, I enjoyed the fic. Now, to get back to that Hangover fic I've been hearing about.
I remember when shipping wasn't a combination of the names, it was something like Twilight X Rarity, or an accronym. Yep, well I'll look at this story soon.
I'll finish this tomorrow, but at least this inspired to reopen the fic I was writing...
Quite good. A few errors in word choice (where you clearly meant one homophone but chose the other), but otherwise solid.
Well, that was definitely cute~
@Unknown X's?! Luxury! Back in my day, we had /'s, and we liked it! Rarity/Twilight, Applejack/Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy/Spock, etc etc. And that's why we called it SLASH fiction!
Eh? What? Time for my pills all ready? Hrrm hmm *grumble* *forgets pants*
@Dr. Orbital Death-Ray
In my day we had to ship Harry Potter characters because Lauren Faust hadn't graced us with her awesomeness yet.
Its very good, read it a few days ago. Recommended.
@wackyteen
I'm glad it could inspire.
Hopefully it was inspiration in the "this fic was so bad that I'm inspired to write something better". ;P
...and I don't know much.
;)
More Raritwi?
About time this ship got off the ground.It's my favorite.
@Mazzyrazzy
more akin to... i need edit up some stuff.
Yours seems to move a little... fast... for my tastes.
Though, I'm still waiting for a long, adventure ship fic that spans Equestria and foreign lands...
Why has no one said Twirity yet?
@wackyteen
I meant to say wasn't in my previous post. I should learn to stop trying to write after 2 PM >.>
@goldenCapitalist
Oh wow, look at that.. up in the top right corner. Is that a red X icon? Wow, with such a tool, you could I dont know, avoid stuff you dont like, instead of acting like a child.
@wackyteen
"Though, I'm still waiting for a long, adventure ship fic that spans Equestria and foreign lands..."
It'sa half term round my part so I hope I can oblige in the near future
I'm halfway through and I am already wanting to stamp "Clueless" on Twilight's forehead.
@ToonNinja
She needs more love? :P
@cursormortis
Oh yeah? Well back in MY day, we had to ship He-man and GI Joe with Transformers!
...
Those of us who survived still bear the mental scars...
I despise lesbians. There not a woman at all.
@ll-Rafael-ll
*They're
*women
Also, if you don't like it why even comment? You made the decision to click on something just to say you hate what it represents before even reading? We're bronies man, some of the most irrationally-hated people on the internet. I would've thought you would learn by now to let go of your hate, or at least contain it.
@ll-Rafael-ll
Love and tolerance, man. B)
Rafael, what's to stop me from having a bunch of communists come here to protest your actions you intolerant fool? And great story, very cute!
Yay for the story here.
Though I noticed some spelling errors, the story overally felt very enjoyable all the way. Nice work on the build-up towards the final scene in addition to the terrific use of the flashback at the very beginning
The locals, emotions, and events were beautifully described throughout this whole piece. Thanks for sharing this adorable story! I really enjoyed it. :)
@Twilight Sparkle Twilight Sparkle herself has the same favorite ship as me...thank you Celestia! Also this story was super adorably awesome!
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