I'm the guy who made number three, and I know it really isn't the best, It was actually my first try at making music ever. So if you wouldn't mind, could tell me what you didn't like, I could definitely learn from my mistakes. As your name insists, can you give me your analysis?
#1 - Really liked this one. Of course I've liked most of what art attack puts out there. :)
#2 - Ok that's pretty clever (You mad Twi?). Probably would have done better with a female vocalist who sounded at least a little like Twilight.
@Flippord - Kudos on being willing to put your stuff out there, that takes guts (and I mean that). I'm by no means a talented songwriter, but I've been in some bands and I've written my share of music. I think the biggest issues with the song for me were:
1)It lacks structure, there isn't really a clear beginning middle or end so there isn't a hook to bring the listener in.
2)The sound doesn't fill out the track, so it comes off feeling thin. That doesn't mean that you need to add a bunch of stuff to the arrangement, it's in the way it's mixed down. If your audio software does compression you may want to try adding that.
Song writing is hard - I hope you stick with it. :)
I liked #3. It wasn't super complex or anything, but it had a nice melody. Quite good for a first effort. Now go, develop your talents and make amazing things for us to praise you over.
I really enjoyed number 3, while the name doesn't seem to match the song itself gave off a nice ambiance. And the transition at the 2 minute mark was fantastic. My only qualm is I felt the piano closing was a bit too upbeat and fast for the rest of the song. But overall great song, keep it up Flippord.
#1 - I lost interest at about 1:40 maybe sooner. I listened to the whole thing but you can shorten some bits. *thumbs up* #2 - lol #3 - Good first try! (b^^b) Keep practicing!
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Nice song by the way
lol at #2
@Twilight Sparkle
Agreed.
^6Th
That second one... oh god i laughed hard
@Rainbowdash lol, nope!
Words cannot describe how much I love #3
@Lord Bloomberg
Dammit, I meant 2. :C
Oh my god, 2 is excellent.
Me gusta #1
Hot damn. The first song started off a bit too radio-friendly, but did it ever beef up by that climax at 4:17
#2 was a good song choice, but the lyrics were a bit off from the show's tone, and the singer's voice just bothered me. Too nasally.
#3 Wasn't bad, but I'm not sure it really fit the title.
#3 was too lo-fi synth-y for my tastes. Each individual note/drum hit made me cringe; I couldn't really pay attention the actual song as a result.
#2 was quite well done.
#1 isn't at all my preferred style of music, so I can't judge.
#1 Pretty good remix. I think I still prefer the original, but I liked this as well.
#2 What am I listening to?! Lawl. This is kinda funny. Not bad and fun lyrics. :P
#3 I kinda like this. Sounds pretty decent.
Damn I love pony music.
@Twilight Sparkle
Well, as the song sings, are ya mad Twi?
@Overlong Analysis Cobalt
I'm the guy who made number three, and I know it really isn't the best, It was actually my first try at making music ever. So if you wouldn't mind, could tell me what you didn't like, I could definitely learn from my mistakes. As your name insists, can you give me your analysis?
*Post starts with a picture of Trixie*
*Post is filled with nothing but Twilight songs*
Hmmmmm...
@Phluorescent
whatever you're goind to say - Trixie thinks your claim is dubious at best -
Seth, you PLANNED this, didn't ya?
@Phluorescent
Are you saying Seth is posting Trixie for no reason?
@Greenf0x
And
@Tritone
The scarey part is that Seth didn't post this... O.O
Wow. How in equestia didn't I see #2 coming from a mile away the first time i saw the Ticket Master???
#1 - Really liked this one. Of course I've liked most of what art attack puts out there. :)
#2 - Ok that's pretty clever (You mad Twi?). Probably would have done better with a female vocalist who sounded at least a little like Twilight.
@Flippord - Kudos on being willing to put your stuff out there, that takes guts (and I mean that). I'm by no means a talented songwriter, but I've been in some bands and I've written my share of music. I think the biggest issues with the song for me were:
1)It lacks structure, there isn't really a clear beginning middle or end so there isn't a hook to bring the listener in.
2)The sound doesn't fill out the track, so it comes off feeling thin. That doesn't mean that you need to add a bunch of stuff to the arrangement, it's in the way it's mixed down. If your audio software does compression you may want to try adding that.
Song writing is hard - I hope you stick with it. :)
ArtAttack. I love that kid. And I love his remixes of me. Keep being awesome Art<3
Lol I love #2. Funny. But #1 is my fav. Been listening to the hay out the original one. Now I got one that's longer. Yay!
I liked #3. It wasn't super complex or anything, but it had a nice melody. Quite good for a first effort. Now go, develop your talents and make amazing things for us to praise you over.
How'd my Trixie vector end up here?
@NaroNot that I'm complaining. I'm just curious.
1. Excellent remix!
2. Epic LOL!
3. Dat piano playin'!
I really enjoyed number 3, while the name doesn't seem to match the song itself gave off a nice ambiance. And the transition at the 2 minute mark was fantastic. My only qualm is I felt the piano closing was a bit too upbeat and fast for the rest of the song.
But overall great song, keep it up Flippord.
#1 - I lost interest at about 1:40 maybe sooner. I listened to the whole thing but you can shorten some bits. *thumbs up*
#2 - lol
#3 - Good first try! (b^^b) Keep practicing!
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