Author: Mousetrap
Description: It's Twilight Sparkle's 18th birthday, and in time-honored pony tradition her friends have dragged her to Las Haygas, the world-renowned City of Lights. They promise to give her a night she'll never forget. And with the lights, the glamor, and a few shots of Liquid Rainboom, it seems they're poised to deliver just that.My Little Hangover Part 1
But when Twilight wakes up to a destroyed hotel room, a hangover so painful it leaves her unable to do magic, a missing pony, and a slew of unanswered questions, she is forced to wonder: did they party too hard? Now, the five ponies must clean up their mess by piecing together a night that none of them can remember, all the while searching for a friend that could already be halfway across the desert...
It's a lesson they'll have to learn the hard way. Some ponies just can't handle Haygas.
My Little Hangover Part 2
My Little Hangover Part 3
My Little Hangover Part 4
My Little Hangover Part 5
My Little Hangover Part 6
My Little Hangover Part 7
My Little Hangover Part 8
My Little Hangover Part 9 (New!)
My Little Hangover Part 10 (New!)
My Little Hangover Part 11 (New!)
Additional Tags: Hangover crossover, drunk ponies in Vegas
213 comments:
Great story! the ending was awesome, even more if you read it with a "good" song, for example I read it while listening to "Raise your glass - Pink" and "beautiful day - U2" xD
ReplyDeleteYou've done a fantastic job.
ReplyDeleteFrom this story I have learned this,
ReplyDelete1. Alcohol is magical.
2. Pandas are evil.
3. Applejack's hat is not to be messed with.
4. Moustrap is a good author.
5. Pandas are evil.
6. Senior citizens, although slow and dangerous behind the wheel, can still serve a purpose. (random :D)
7. Twilight is going to be arrested for drinking under the age of 21.
That is all.
I can't believe I made the foalish mistake of reading this crazy, insane fan fic...
ReplyDelete...while on a subway crowded with jaded New Yorkers. I never had so many people stare at me for grinning and giggling like a idiot in public XD. Kudus, good sir 6/6 drunken ponies.
I just finished reading it in one go. I have this to say.
ReplyDeleteIt was really well written, true to source materials and lore friendly, too! And best of all. it's completed!
I'm not a slow reader and I find the pace to be similar to what I would expect from a light novelization of the movie itself. You handled action scenes pretty well. Also, there were no tl;dr moments, at least not for me.
What I really appreciate, was the way you wrote an original story with likable OCs, while keeping the frantic feel of the movie, at the same time not ignoring the established characters of the mane 6.
The scenes from the movie were modified enough to not feel like a blatant copy-paste and that's great.
And I really, really love how you ended the story with a Letter to Celestia. It reminds me that I'm reading an MLP FiM fanfic, not a fanfic of The Hangover.
I'm curious, though. Did any of them take pictures of their exploits? I wanna see a slideshow of their stuffs before Twilight does a delete spell, again.
That said, this is great work and a good, enjoyable read. Thank you, Mousetrap.
That was the most glorious comedy Fanfic I've ever read in my entire life. I really hope somepony decides to actually do the credit.
ReplyDeleteHilarious fanfic!
ReplyDeleteHow is this not 6 STARS!?
Well this is fun and nice story, but it is ponified (good thing) toned down (not so good) version of the movie. Was hoping Ruby and Dash whould have more colorful relationship.
ReplyDeleteAlso Ruby's cutie mark. Well I don't like idea cute marks (branding a child for what it wil do for rest of its life), but Ruby's cutie mark is stripping pole. Here is the problem, as far as I understand, fillys get their cutie mark at age to about equalent to human 10..and for a girl to find her tallent is strip dancing is just...wrong.
Why does everyone keep calling this a "crossover"? Crossovers involve characters from two separate universes meeting in one of the established worlds, like Dan Vs in Ponyville. This is a PARODY! Rarr.
ReplyDeleteThat being said, this is adorable. Everyone is in character and I agree with Fluttershy being totes sober. The thing about Pinkie is, I don't think she needs alcohol. She's like me. Ten tons of crazy without the aide of booze (I can't/don't drink).
Great stuff. :)
Why does everyone keep calling this a "crossover"? Crossovers involve characters from two separate universes meeting in one of the established worlds, like Dan Vs in Ponyville. This is a PARODY! Rarr.
ReplyDeleteThat being said, this is adorable. Everyone is in character and I agree with Fluttershy being totes sober. The thing about Pinkie is, I don't think she needs alcohol. She's like me. Ten tons of crazy without the aide of booze (I can't/don't drink).
Great stuff. :)
Haven't saw this story in a LONG while... I should remember most of it. At least, I remember it was interesting and somewhat funny.
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CH.6 :
>Stupid alcohol. Stupid Haygas. Why do ponies do this to themselves?
-Because it can be ''fun'', I suppose... with *moderation*, of course.
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CH.7 :
>You always have to be careful with peroxide, my dear. That stuff is stronger than you think.”
-SCIENCE ! :D *The more you Know*
>Illegals,” Elroy said with a shrug. “What were you expecting? It’s the desert. We’re close to the border here
-Donkeys are like the ''mexicains'' in this version of this world ? That's, huh... *Insert politically correct sentence*.
>And if you ever do find that yellow pegasus friend, tell her she’s not welcome in my estate ever again. Nor are any of you. Un-accept-able!
-1 week later, she learned that those 6 ponies were the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony, many times heroes of Equestria and the World, and directly knew the Princesses of Equestria... and sent them a fruit basket with tickets for her future concert. For no special reason, ''of course''.
>“It’s a moonlark,” she said. “Remember Princess Celestia’s pet phoenix? This bird is like its nighttime cousin.
>But they’re so rare… even rarer than the phoenix itself.
-If the bird is SO rare, and also an endangered species by the look of it... didn't the Princesses enacted laws to protected them and help them, on the Equestrian territory ?
That would make sense.
>I can’t… I can’t even begin to explain to you how out-of-character this is for us.
-A ''meta'' joke, or... ?
>it was with a thick accent that sounded like… well, exactly the kind of accent one would expect a panda to have.
>“Wassap, mothabuckers?” he screeched. “My name is Mr. Chow
-You know that 'pandas' are Chinese, right ? That kinda sounds a lot more like a stereotypical 'black rapper' there ?
...it's a Chinese Panda Rapper, or something ?
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CH.8 :
>“Rainbow!” She tugged back, and whispered. “They have weapons.”
-And you are one of the most powerful unicorns of EQUESTRIA ! Raise a darn magical barrier or something. Plus, RD can be 'almost' as fast as a bullet, if she wants to... and AJ can literally uproot a tree with her bucking.
The list goes on and on and...
>Weapons! Nobody carried weapons in Equestria, especially not guns.
-The ONE gun, kinda yes, but Twilight calls a small knife and a baseball bat ''weapons'' ? Wow ?
>If this panda could bring that much force to bear…
-He has just THREE(3) henchmen, not 50. And, barely just *1* has something remotely threatening for them. The knife and baseball bat guys can be dealt by RD and AJ in 10sec flat.
>“You can’t-” Dash was suddenly enveloped in a swirling purple membrane
-She can pick up a WHOLE damn pony with her magic(telekinesis), but she doesn't freaking grab the ONLY gun they have or put a barrier !?
Good gracious, this is getting annoying(and stupid) FAST now...
>Not that iodized junk they sell you back in Ponyville.”
-It's... salt... It can BARELY be considered something vaguely like ''alcohol'' in term of effects, in MLP:FiM.
It's not a ''drug''. -_-
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Personally, I found CH.8 to be simply... atrocious, at so many levels... so many. -_-
CH.6 and 7 were interesting and somewhat enjoyable... but, CH.8 really dampens the enjoyment, from the 2 previous chapters.
CH.9 :
ReplyDelete>This was why she never drank, or partied, or let loose
-Except for the 'drinking' part... she seemed awfully FINE with all those fun parties of Pinky Pie, in Ponyville.
Pretty happy one for parties, for one who claims to never 'let loose' or to be 'completely and totally uptight about everything'... -_-
>He is a dangerous deranged criminal.
-Funny. On 'Earth', the panda is a ''dangerously endangered animal''.
>“Please just give him the money please,” Twilight stammered.
-Is it just me, or does Twilight is acting abnormally 'stupidly and cowardly', since CH.8 ?
I know large quantity of alcohol can diminish your ''intellectual capacity'' until you are not drunk anymore, but... it's does NOT make you brain-dead, for Pete's sake !
Plus, it has been quite a while... surely, they are barely ''hangover'' now, and Twilight didn't forgot she has the magic power to lift an URSA MINOR and create magical barriers, right ?
>And before Rainbow Dash had a chance to deploy a sonic rain-nuke on them, he and his carriage were gone.
-They are faster than supersonic speed ? Because, that's about the speed of a *Sonic Rainboom* (not -nuke).
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Not as bad as CH.8, but definitely a lack of ''proper response'' from the Main 6 (especially those who have that 'marvelously mysterious and mystical' thing called : MAGIC !).
CH.10 :
>she didn’t want to try out any magic yet, but she could if she had to.
-Yeeeah, right... *roll my eyes*
Personally, I say ''bad convenience''.
>“It was nothing, just a cracked shell. He’ll be curling up into a little ball again in no time.
-Armadillos curling into balls... For some reasons, this sound adorable ?
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Adorable armadillos save the day... or rather, make me partially forget CH.8 and 9, which I don't think is a bad thing.
CH.11 :
>I learned something else, though. Drinking, when you do it right, can be a lot of fun.
-It's commonly referred to as ''moderation''.
>You can’t even see the scar. Ruby is a miracle-worker, Twilight. A miracle-worker. You could learn a lot from her.”
-Like dancing, probably. ;)
>even a solo concert at the Baylagio by the great cellist Octavia.
-Owwww... no DJ P0N-3 ''concert'' ?
>“You know what?” Fluttershy said.
>“Make me a liquid rainboom, Pinkie. And don’t go light on the grenadine.”
-*GASP !* Grenadine ! That stuff is almost as strong as... SALT ! (which mean 'not at all', in any shape or form or dimension... unless you're an alien allergic to salt water).
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Well, last chapter was relatively good.
Overall, the story was quite good ; Very interesting and enjoyable from CH.1 to 7, from what I recall... then CH.8 went downhill hard, continued a bit in CH.9, but progressively returned to 'somewhat interesting' after CH.9.
Pinkie Pie MUST BE Leslie Chow!
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