Sunday, September 4, 2011

Story: Cloudsdale Chronicles


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Author: Roboshi
Description: The Day of the “Best Young Fliers” competition was very special to Rainbow Dash. But she was not the only pony to discover something about herself that day. This is the tale of 3 other ponies and their own self discovery.

Cloudsdale Chronicles

Additional Tags:
Cloudsdale, Rainboom, Background ponies, collection, destiny

20 comments:

Trollestia said...

Looks interesting. Will give this a read.

Pegasi said...

I am shocked that Roboshi is capable of more then just faving pics on ponibooru...

Cador_2004 said...

@Pegasi

Sounds like you haven't read his story where Pinkie gets Twilight's horn and magic.

KitsuneDash said...

I wonder who will fave this?

Vegetalss4 said...

I really liked the Scootaloo one, not all that into the other two.

DreadedCandiru2 said...

Hmmmmmm.....a Cupcakes reference and Ditzy deciding to stay in the one timeframe. Interesting but not as interesting as Scootaloo deciding which pony she wanted to be most like. (That being said, I'm waiting for "Pretty in Pink" to arrive; for those of you not in the know, it's sort of the anti-Cupcakes.)

Trollestia said...

Also really liked the scootaloo one but did not like the first two too much, they are well written and I can't quite place WHY I disliked them but I did. I wasn't very fond of the cupcakesesque reference either but thats not why I disliked it.

Probably just the portrayal of characters not fitting what I like so im not going to rate it down as it is well written and that would be unfair of me.

DreadedCandiru2 said...
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DreadedCandiru2 said...

So, what, Ditzy is Scootaloo's mother in this timeline? Makes sense.

Joe England said...

Shouldn't this have a crossover tag?

Roboshi said...

@DreadedCandiru2

Nope the two stories are unrelated, Scootaloo's mother is a background pony you can look out for.

Ditzy's foal is gonna be dinky. and even a dr who-esk explanation for why she's a unicorn.

A.J. Scriber said...

@DreadedCandiru2

You mean this?

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/455/Pretty-in-Pink

Dubs Rewatcher said...

When Scootaloo is recording all the performances, she writes down what number 3 did twice.

Dubs Rewatcher said...

^adding on to that, why doesn't Scootaloo know who Rainbow Dash is? Or Rarity? Or Pinkie Pie?

Roboshi said...

@Dubs Rewatcher

Scootaloo hadn't met rarity OR Dash by this point the only ones she could have met were at the cutsiera party.

And Pinkie spent most of it in the back baking for that party.

By this point scoots hadn't met all the mane 6 yet.

Spikely Whiplash said...

@Vegetalss4

I agree, Scootaloo's part was the best.

Wierdplatformer said...

Pretty cute, but why would you reference cupcakes?

Roboshi said...

@Wierdplatformer

I honesty referenced cupcakes as I wanted to write my own little antidote to it, calling cupcakes an alternate future averted by Doctor whoof and pinkie herself.

I think Cupcakes is just something you need to get used to or deal with in your own way. I think I found mine.

A Terrible Person said...

Ha. Super strong butterflies.

These were pretty good stories, though. I approve.

Luminous said...

Number 3 changed gender partway through his/her act.

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