It's a pretty intriguing concept - the dialogue needs a proofreader. Saw a your where there should be a you're, and saw "fouls" instead of "fools" (foals?) in page 5.
Also saw a don't missing the apostrophe.
It looks great, is highly legible, and is easy to follow, but if you would run your scripts by somebody it would raise the comic to an even higher quality than what it has already attained.
These seem quite elaborately drawn for comics. Nice. I love when Rarity comments on the goggles. And when AJ almost looses her hat. And "Actually it's Golden Pie." <3
And holy crap! Rarity the hero to the freaken rescue here!
Rarity's self-sacrifice in the name of getting her friend back is awesome. If the writing stays this good through the rest of it, this comic's going to want to want to whip out once in awhile to remind myself of how awesome it was.
.. The artist's comments on page six... about how Golden Pie's cutie mark looks like gay Sauron. I can't stop laughing..!
But, yes, that aside a very touching bit of dialogue there, as well as a fascinating comic shaping up by the looks of things. The art style is unconventional yet interesting (right now, for instance, I cannot stop staring at the detailed fluting on Rarity's horn), and I am interested in seeing how the story progresses. Many thanks for finding/sharing!
I am quite fine, Twilight. There is nothing wrong.
Everypony else is getting knocked away from the blast wall, but Dash is crawling towards it.
And it's Twilight's balloon, not Pinkie's. And everypony's eyes tend to look the same, with the exception of Rarity's looking like she's stressed and wearing makeup still.
So that's what she meant by balloon. I thought it was a reference to Pinkie's cutie mark. Now that I think about it I've seen others make this mistake as well. I guess it's because Pinkie uses it in Fall Weather Friends.
It's hilarious how "Golden Pie", in spite of her dislike of being among Pinkie's over alter-egos, used party-favours and custard (items commonly found in ACME's Comedy Department) to create a bomb.
This has got to be finished! Rarity's badass line in the last page is hilariously perfect. I really want to see what the other alter-egos are, and which pony deals with which.
Top Hat Pinkie - Represents Pinkie's eccentric side, acting quite sensible or more fancy-sounding, at least for a split second. Mohawk Pinkie - Represents her crazed, party-hard-indulging side that has a mind working much like New York City. Crazy-ass stuff that could be from anywhere rapidly coming up. Some of it just drifting through, and some intending to stay for a while. Quiet/Master-Mind Pinkie - represent's Pinkie's very, very unseen side of anger or evil. Suppressed by the other sides, yet somewhat suppresses them at the same time. They keep her from making Pinkie into a killer, and she keeps them from making her into a total Schizo-crazed, party-throwing one-pony-train to self destruction. Without these, all that would exist is just Pinkamena, the angsty-emotionless shell of a pony.
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Yeah, I think Or something fits it best
what the fuck....
I'm not sure what to make of this, yet I still want more...
Rarity's got some freaky eyes there. Still a nice comic.
I mean, I like something, a lot, but it is certainly something
Remake all the dresses.
AWESOME!!! Ok now that there is a comic!
10/10 Would read again.
Moar moar! It's hilarious! More crazy Pinkies!
My my my... psyche clones. This'll be interesting.
Rarity... I like you even more from this lol. You made me laugh pretty hard with that out burst lol!
Ho-o-oly crap... I love this thing... on many levels.
It makes sense, but at the same time, it doesn't... it's something, alright.
How is this not a fanfic? It's so awesome!
huh, looks interesting
really nicely drawn too
Concept is....interesting.
D'awww at Rarity loving Pinkie more.
This is really awesome!
#6 was actually heart warming. *sniffle*
...
This is pure, unfiltered awesome.
It's a pretty intriguing concept - the dialogue needs a proofreader. Saw a your where there should be a you're, and saw "fouls" instead of "fools" (foals?) in page 5.
Also saw a don't missing the apostrophe.
It looks great, is highly legible, and is easy to follow, but if you would run your scripts by somebody it would raise the comic to an even higher quality than what it has already attained.
What the fuck am I reading?
And why is it so awesome?
TWICE AS FABULOUS!
This is great. MOAR PLZ.
I nearly died from laughter because of the pun Golden Pie. My body was not ready.
And then Rarity turned into Rambo, and it was glorious.
Uh...
What just happened?
GoldenPie made me grin like a lunatic.
Intresting...
I eagerly await more.
My body is ready for more! =O
I laughed until I cried. Then I laughed some more.
It's definitely something, but I really like something.
@Jelfes
Totally. There should be a scene in one of the episodes with that exchange.
that was bucking amazing
the expressions... are priceless.
I need more.
These seem quite elaborately drawn for comics. Nice. I love when Rarity comments on the goggles. And when AJ almost looses her hat. And "Actually it's Golden Pie." <3
And holy crap! Rarity the hero to the freaken rescue here!
Rarity's self-sacrifice in the name of getting her friend back is awesome. If the writing stays this good through the rest of it, this comic's going to want to want to whip out once in awhile to remind myself of how awesome it was.
Moarr!!!!!!!!
DAT ART STYLE.
I don't know why but it's very reminiscent of something... must be the anime-ish look to it.
Regardless, so awesome! /)^3^(\
I never thought manly Rarity would be so...glorious.
@Crimson Valor Agreed
.. The artist's comments on page six... about how Golden Pie's cutie mark looks like gay Sauron. I can't stop laughing..!
But, yes, that aside a very touching bit of dialogue there, as well as a fascinating comic shaping up by the looks of things. The art style is unconventional yet interesting (right now, for instance, I cannot stop staring at the detailed fluting on Rarity's horn), and I am interested in seeing how the story progresses. Many thanks for finding/sharing!
Rarity = best pony. Always said that.
....i need more
...what is this. but i still seem to like it
I was messaging the artist a few days ago, said the Fluttershy part is the next :P
Ah Rarity, every time my belief in you wavers, you show me the way. Always the best pony. Always.
This is amazing.
Also, custard: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSqDngiVKOs&feature=related
Actually i wrote a fan fic very similar to this
http://nekollx.deviantart.com/gallery/30790176
Check out Cupcakes For Pinkie Pie
That art is damn good.
Comic two, panel two. Best face ever. And it will haunt my dreams D:
Damn, that seventh page!
GOLDEN PIE. Ohohohohohohohohohhohoh, ouch.
This is fantastic though.
I am quite fine, Twilight. There is nothing wrong.
Everypony else is getting knocked away from the blast wall, but Dash is crawling towards it.
And it's Twilight's balloon, not Pinkie's.
And everypony's eyes tend to look the same, with the exception of Rarity's looking like she's stressed and wearing makeup still.
EPIC + DIABETES: Like!
I LOVE THIS! All of Pinkie's personalities! Brilliant!
"AND I SHALL SIMPLY REMAKE MY DRESSES...TWICE AS FABULOUS!!!"
Sounds like something I'd hear in Gurren Laggan. Which is awesome. FUCK YEA Rarity!
This insanity pleases me.
Insane... and brilliant! :D
Looks like they're floating in the Greedy in that pic.
Brilliant. Can't wait for the rest.
Pg.7 - I AM RARITY, HEAR ME ROAR.
This is the most over-the-toply ridiculous thing I've seen in quite a while.
I approve, though I wonder exactly how they're going to top "Golden Pie"...
@Pinkie Pie
So that's what she meant by balloon. I thought it was a reference to Pinkie's cutie mark.
Now that I think about it I've seen others make this mistake as well. I guess it's because Pinkie uses it in Fall Weather Friends.
@Cedric Bale
TWICE AS FABULOUS!
@Cedric Bale
TWICE AS FABULOUS!
I had NO FREAKING CLUE WHAT IS GOING ON BUT I SAW THE WORD BALLOON IN IT so clearly this must be HIGH QUALITY CONTENT *+Fav*
@Pinkie Pie
THANK YOU!
Someone finally realizes that it's not Pinkie's balloon!
This is insane, TWICE AS FABULOUS!
The goggles do nothing! Also, Twilight is cute with hers.
Golden Pie *wa-wa-wa* She's the mare with the Midas Touch!
Rarity you have show me how fabulous you are once again.
DAT LAST PANEL
um... heh, whew... wow
Post the next part already author, but make it TWICE AS FABULOUS!
It's hilarious how "Golden Pie", in spite of her dislike of being among Pinkie's over alter-egos, used party-favours and custard (items commonly found in ACME's Comedy Department) to create a bomb.
This has got to be finished! Rarity's badass line in the last page is hilariously perfect. I really want to see what the other alter-egos are, and which pony deals with which.
Author, oh author! If you're reading this, I beg you:
Finish this comic, and do it well - you're on the verge of creating a new meme (and a most fabulous one at that!).
@DJ Kat
LIES! Of course it's my balloon! Who else knows how to fly without wings?
I demand more of this comic, plot and artstyle.
Top Hat Pinkie - Represents Pinkie's eccentric side, acting quite sensible or more fancy-sounding, at least for a split second.
Mohawk Pinkie - Represents her crazed, party-hard-indulging side that has a mind working much like New York City. Crazy-ass stuff that could be from anywhere rapidly coming up. Some of it just drifting through, and some intending to stay for a while.
Quiet/Master-Mind Pinkie - represent's Pinkie's very, very unseen side of anger or evil. Suppressed by the other sides, yet somewhat suppresses them at the same time. They keep her from making Pinkie into a killer, and she keeps them from making her into a total Schizo-crazed, party-throwing one-pony-train to self destruction.
Without these, all that would exist is just Pinkamena, the angsty-emotionless shell of a pony.
@USMCDefender
You left-out the depressed me. There are four personalities that came out of me.
Also, Top-Hat Pinkie is totally my ability to do anything. She's a magician. And she knows kung-hoof.
Whoa.
That... was EPIC.
Rarity for life also.
Pinky Stravo Blofled had Sauron gay brother in her ass... sweet.
Did one of Pinkie's personalities look like a zebra? A zebra of the "evil enchantress" variety?
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