[Random]
Author: Jay Bear
Description: Stinging from her humiliation in Ponyville, the Great and Powerful Trixie uses dark magic to make a demonic pact: a chance to go back in time and vanquish the Ursa Major, at the cost of her immortal soul. Does she succeed against the ferocious beast? Will fame and fortune be hers? Can her soul be redeemed, or is the magical mare forever damned? And, most importantly, does she get shipped with anyone? (Spoiler alert: nope.)
Trixie's Bargain
Additional Tags: short, deal with the devil
54 comments:
Wait a minute! I never uploaded a non-suited Trixie with wings! Where did that come from?!
What? a Trixie story without shipping? lol
Really? Wow, you ponies comment fast.
eh?
/me walks over to Trixie, examines her wings to see if they're really real
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No shipping? No reading.
what the heck!? trixie's got WINGS?!?!
Lol at no shipping. I approve
This is so beautifully brilliant. On so many levels.
Achoo
Trixie dealing with the devil? Why does that not surprise me...
>MLP;FIM
>Deal with the devil
There needs to be a "Faust" pun I can extrapolate out of this somehow...
That was fantastic. Short but very interesting and well written. Some of the best fourth wall breaking I've seen in a while.
I like how every time she talked she added another superlative to her title.
Also, the second half of the story is the kind of thing that would make a CGNU graduate proud.
What the Fluttershy am i reading?
@Bitmun
Shame you're too late to use 'Faust Post'.
Ha! Fourth wall just got *owned*! I love how Pinkie Pie mixes Latin and Pig Latin, though. That is just classy. :D
Great story, brony! I think I am going to go back now and read that Rainbow Dash story you wrote. If it's half this good, it will be more than worth it!
Very, very funny stuff.
Also, I'm never eating biscotti again.
I'm proud to say I understood most of the Latin incantation. Yay Latin class!
This story is fantastic.
"Eip Eiknip" is now a magical incantation.
Oh Celestia, finally a fic of Trixie free of Twixie. Hate that ship.
Alicorn Trixie? me gusta.
Somepony do that with Rarity too..
MaximillianVeers over at deviantart made that vec.
http://maximillianveers.deviantart.com/
Picture is not Trixie, she does not have wings. X_X
@Mist Skye
Is too! She can use magic powerful enough to get herself a pair of real feathered pegasus wings! Unlike Twilight, who takes out a pair of fragile butterfly wings made out of gosmer and morning dew.
Holy Shit...Alicorn Trixie...that's what getting everyone to read this
@Anonymous
This is true, but I never uploaded a version of Trixie with wings and no Shadowbolt suit until I saw that... I'm still wondering where the hell it came from.
What? Naked alicorn Trixie?
Brilliant.
Well, the fourth wall has died. It burned down, fell over, and sank into the swamp.
Eh, I thought it was alright, definitely fits the [random] tag. Though I feel that if somebody were to pick up where it ended, we might end up with a rather profound Cool World crossover.
Pfft- Ahahahaha! Oh, goodness. Read this story now. It is definitely worth your time.
No shipping?
Let's do this.
This story is definitely random as its tag says. I liked it, but I didn't really "Love" it. It's good, but I just feel there wasn't enough ponies. Half the story took place in the real world...
That was funny... although, why am I in the mood for something spicy now?
Wow... Pinkie Pie's inverted name is actually part of the summons... What is this, I don't even???
Must read on...
What does this speak of regarding Pinkie herself? Umm...
Reads next paragraph...
Oh...
...
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wow
just, wow...
Since Lauren Faust is a part of this, we already have our Faustian bargain, as one of my friends just pointed out.
@Stargazer
/do S/F?
Thanks everyone for reading and for your comments! As for the alicorn-Trixie pic, no idea where it came from - I had sent a picture of Gummy dressed up as Trixie for the story, but this one is definitely better.
First cupcakes made out of Rainbow Dash's body, and now biscotti made out of Trixie's soul. What's next?!
I like that it actually features Faust. Nice touch.
Alright, this story is in the cliffhanger. -_-'
@richfiles
One goofy demon if you think about it. XD
So, Pinkie Pie is a trickster demon who writes horrible alternate endings for the episodes then drops them off on Lauren Faust's desk where she tosses them in the wastebasket.
And uses pony souls in her baking.
Excellent and a half. Thank you. Five stars. Started reading while I was actually busy, but my eyes couldn't torn off the story 'till I reached the end. Just..
Just freakin' good.
i took me a good 5 hours to remember something: TRIXIE DOESN'T HAVE WINGS /gasp
@Anonymous please tell me it summons a magical talking pink pony.
@Anonymous oh celestia please don't remind me of that acid trip of a movie...
lol Trixie's too much of a bitch to be shipped with anyone.
@Anonymous less awkwardly worded, but I agree. She is rather unlike-able.
i just read the story and i have to admit it was one of the best things i've ever read.
now if you all will excuse me i have some ingredients to go collect...
That was... interesting. Good, but interesting.
This explains everything.
Epic win.
Is deeply confused by this being tagged as star-4 because that was great. Completely lost it when the demon turned up and didn't stop laughing till the end.
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