• Story: Revalatory Filly Skydance (Update- Act II)


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    Author: Gabriel LaVedier
    Description: A play, seen through the eyes of the audience; and a transparent parody of Revolutionary Girl Utena. At Horsetari Academy, Skydance the pegasus and Country Roads the earth pony have a fairly standard school experience. Then Skydance meets the enigmatic Daisy Dreams and the world turns upside down.

    Revalatory Filly Skydance Act One: The Stargazer Saga

    Description: The curtain rises again on a tale of confusion, passion, desire and finding a place in the world. Skydance has defeated the full Student Council and holds the Lily Friend tightly. But forces are moving against her, dark forces. And what is revealed may be more than she can bear...

    Revalatory Filly Skydance Act Two: The Calla Saga

    Additional Tags: Acting, Utena Parody, Learning, Experiencing, The Play's the thing

    31 comments:

    1. Titles and descriptions continue to get more wordy.

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    2. Well I saw the picture and [shipping] tag and got scared. After reading the description now I'm just confused.

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    3. Feels..... not like the chars, because there all actin.

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    4. First thoughts after seeing tags and picture: Pedophile Dash?

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    6. Cereal you goofed the image (AGAIN)

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    7. An attempt to combine 2 great things that fails completely at effectively representing either. MLPFiM deserves better, and the brilliant work of art that is RGU deserves MUCH better.

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    8. Not bad but I think most of the fanfic is departing the simplicity of my little pony with the ostentatious vocabulary and delivery.

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    9. ...I'm kinda confused.

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    10. Scootaloveabuse... confusing...

      I must say I find it very hard to read with the wrong names. Its not fun to have to look back to the top of the document every paragraph to check who was who again. Course I don't know Utena.

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    11. To the confused: Welcome to Ohtori Academy, mindf*** capital of the universe. If anything (and old-time fans of Utena will back me on this) this story is LESS of a mindblow, because some things actually get an explanation, the motivations are plainer and there's no incest. And it happens in a magic land of talking ponies, so the supernatual elements are less freaky.

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    12. Hrm?

      ...Hrm.

      Feeling kinda Rorschach today.

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    13. o_O
      The Stargazer saga!

      /me is famous!
      lol

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    14. There seem to be no Shipping label...

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    15. o_O
      The Stargazer saga!

      /me is famous!
      lol

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    16. Not bad but I think most of the fanfic is departing the simplicity of my little pony with the ostentatious vocabulary and delivery.

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    17. First thoughts after seeing tags and picture: Pedophile Dash?

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    18. >Revolutionary Girl Utena

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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    19. >Revolutionary Girl Utena

      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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    20. > Revolutionary Girl Utena
      > Revelatory Filly Skydance

      YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS! :D

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    21. *Sees picture of Dash and Scootaloo* Daaaaaaaw

      *Sees [Shipping]* Wait WHAT?

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    22. @Matrilwood

      This+*ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh finally some ScootXDash shipping*

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    23. the word thinks should be in front of the omygosh part, after the first *

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    24. I'll be honest, it just feels really awkwardly worded. It's not bad, it's pretty well written in fact...

      ...But the whole 'They're doing a play' thing just doesn't really seem to work for me, it draws me out of getting engrossed in it all.

      Kinda sucks too, with all the mysticism in RGU and the fantasy stylings of FiM, this should have been a five star knock it out of the park kind of story but I just... I can't focus and get into this.

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    25. ScootDash? I'm down!
      That picture alone, which also happens to be my phone wallpaper, is enough on its own to make me read it!

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    26. I love this. o.o But I think it needs an "incomplete" tag instead of "complete" unless the author has stopped it, because it's only at intermission.

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