Thursday, August 11, 2011

Story: The Perfect Cupcake

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Author: A.J.
Description: With some help from Pinkie Pie, Twilight learns to make the perfect cupcakes for her beloved assistant, Spike.
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The Perfect Cupcake

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The Perfect Cupcake

Additional Tags: Describe it how you wish

37 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cupcake time. With twilight.

FluffyWuffs said...

wait what, where's the grimdark?

lugthor said...

wait. dose it make me a horrible person that when i read the description i thought it said "from her beloved assistant, Spike"

Anonymous said...

@lugthor
no, no...you're not the only one. O_O

Mcore said...

I thought this was "cupcakes", but with twilight... thank god.

Anonymous said...

GAH NO NOT CUPCAKES...
STAY AWAY!

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Oh thank god.

MintBerryCrunch said...

Reads title D:
Reads tags :D

Might check this out when I stop being so lazy and finish some other stories I'm following.

Twix said...

Inb4 cupcakes jokes. Wait... too late

Anonymous said...

OH GOD NOOOO

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Oh good.

nathandash said...

NOT MORE CUPCAKES!!!!!!!!!!!

oh this isn't grimdark. well. NEITHER WAS PAST SINS!

I'm not reading this cause it says CUPCAKES!!!!

RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ToonNinja said...

Well, that turned out better than all the panicky maniacs above were fearing, although I do agree that it's a somewhat unfortunate title/description.

Anonymous said...

Imagine, if you will, a world where nopony automatically associated cupcakes with, well, Cupcakes. I dream of that world every night.

FluffyWuffs said...

Read it, was a fun little read. Lives up to it's tags, don't worry guys.

For now, just enjoy the non-grimdark cupcakes fic :]!

Anonymous said...

A nice and sweet story.

MuffinShy said...

Was a bit on lookout for anything bad when Pinkie appeared, but it ended all well.
Must say dat was a lovely story.

Fuzzy said...

Fun little dialogue with a bit of d'aaww added. Worth the few minutes to poke me head in and read. Nothing world changing, just a natural little scene.

Graywand said...

My sensors were registering "d'aww" 300% above normal.

David Reinold said...

I seriously enjoyed this, but given the title, this was destined to be given a serious shitstorm.

Deathaura40s said...

I can't even walk past a bakery window now without recalling the horror...

Not that I'll let that stand between me and this fic. Next on my "to read list" for tonight.

Josh said...

*Sees cupcakes in the title*
*expects the comments section to be alight with cupcakes flashbacks*

Yup, I was right.

Also, maximum d'aaaaaaaw levels!

Ekevoo said...

That was lovely =3
Well written Pinkie Pie, and the last few paragraphs gave me cavities.
We need more stories like these! <3

zaptiftun said...

Heh, that was pretty cute.

Anonymous said...

The guy that wrote cupcakes must be damn pleased with himself with the mark he left on the fandom.

Anonymous said...

Description needs to be fixed.

"With some help from Pinkie Pie AND RAINBOW DASH, Twilight learns to make the perfect cupcakes for her beloved assistant, Spike"

Anonymous said...

@Anonymous
Aren't you clever?

Pinkamina Diane Pie said...

D'awwwww! Such a cute and sweet little story. Very touching at the end.

David said...

Two cheery Twilight/Spike stories in two weeks. I'm loving it!

Solstice Equil said...

A really cute and touching story. One of the more well written stories on the site, Its just the right length and the mood is actually like the show. I personally dislike Grimdark and the like. Unfortunately, so many people won't be treated to this due to Cupcakes, a fanfic I despise, due to OOC and many other reasons, which I shan't list here.

Good job to the Author.

SomeGuy said...

Stories of Spike and Twilight together are some of my favorites. This was a nice little story.

Nova25 said...

@FluffyWuffs
@Twix
@Anonymous
@Anonymous
*Boot to the Head*-extravaganza !

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@Anonymous
...I do too... Oh by the 'gods' that I do too...

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And now, on with the story.

Anonymous said...

It was very natural. I liked it.

Nova25 said...

>They should call you Tasty Sparkle, or Twilight Pastry!
-In a parallele universe, she must be a baker ;)

>Twilight giggled. Pinkie Pie was always such a bouncing ball of pure joyous energy.
-Yay! That's why people just love her. :)

>She smiled, stroking his spikes with her hoof. >"My very first friend."
-*Insert : Awwww* :)

>"We're friends, Twilight, and we'll always be friends. No matter what."
-Awwww #2

... Heh, ''Goofy Gator'' ;) ...

It's was a nice little story to read.

Rain Leaf said...

I think this story could use some SPRINKLES.

Matrilwood said...

No thank you, I'm allergic to love.

Anonymous said...

Awwww . . . so sweet. I wish more people would write on the relationship between Spike and Twilight.

But what's up with Twilight not putting any frosting on the cupcake? That's the most important part! Lol!

kinkyturtle said...

[Simpsons mode on]
According to the gas chromatograph, the secret ingredient is... LOVE?! Who's been screwing with this thing?
[Simpsons mode off]

I for one don't consider the title unfortunate, because it does exactly what I wish more bronies would: let cupcakes be cupcakes. I'm happy to see the word "cupcakes" attached to such a sweet, light story, and used simply to refer to actual cupcakes for a change.

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