Sunday, August 14, 2011

Story: Lunar Adventures

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Author: Michael A. Gordon
Description: Luna has been banished to the moon. Luckily she has her journal with her to keep track of all the amazing adventures she'll have.
Lunar Adventures

Additional Tags: Journal, alone, truth, fear, acceptence

26 comments:

Anonymous said...

First huehue

Anonymous said...

Nth+1

Anonymous said...

Sigh nightmare moon was imprisoned IN the moon not ON it :/

LoLZorZs said...

Can't wait for the Happy Luna Contest

MuffinShy said...

This is new, looks like an interesting read.
Also, don't rage about ON/IN reading about Luna being in moon probably would be less entertaining.

CoffeeGrunt said...

"Celelstia, I must not lower the moon!"
"But Luna, you are the moon!"

...And then Luna was the moon.

Anonymous said...

The Pole thing has cnythnk-1 printed on the side.

That's Russian for Sputnik-1!

Oh, if this is more than a one-shot I GOTTA see where this goes.

Anonymous said...

Oh, it gets better!

Sputnik in it's original Russian means "Travaling Companion" According to Wikipedia. You clever S.O.B

Anonymous said...

Note: human footprints should be less deep than Luna's, since humans weigh less and have a bigger foot surface than ponies.

atzel said...

I wonder if Luna and Sputnik will make good friends

Anonymous said...

This should be interesting. Neil Armstrong anyone?

BE3ST said...

Russians on the moon? anyway, i should think this will be quite interesting.

Marelin said...

THE COMMIES ARE COMING! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Luna said...

@Anonymous
I know where I was imprisoned and I was imprisoned on my moon.

KS said...

Man, the part about the groaning, and poor Bentley and that damn box moving had my hairs standing up on my neck ><

Anonymous said...

was the box just a plain shade of brown? If it has strange red designs on it...
Finally, that flag was probably the US Flag, right?

~Appletank

Bloody said...

I can't wait for more :D

Corporal Fluttershy said...

How did Sputnik get from LEO to Lunar Orbit?

I suspect the dark magic of She-Who-Raises-The-Sun-But-Cannot-Be-Named is at work!

Anonymous said...

This reminds me of the Patricia Tannis journals you find in Borderlands xD

Nova25 said...

>I actually did it! Ha ha! Take that laws of Physics! I made a tree grow and I ate so many apples I think I’m gonna burst!
-Many things in this line are silly, funny, AND interesting ;) ...Take that laws of Physics ! :D

>I wrote a song, it’s called ‘Oh me and my Moon.
-Luna has always been the 'artist' of the 2. ;)

>I think I should name it something...Bentley...yeah, that’s a good name for a tree.
-I wonder if Bentley (?Bentley?) will one day see Bloomberg ;) ...do trees have 'genders', I wonder ?
Also... will Abacus be jalous of Bentley when 'it' finds out ? ...Or Brock the journal ?

... Noooes ! Bentley ! D: (can't she just make another tree appear ? Or a cake and tea ? ...

... I wonder if that ''moving'' metal box is a vestige from an extinct human civilization, OR if it just comes from another ''Earth'' somewhere else in space ? ...

... C n y t h n k - 1 ? The Internet, and the wise sage 'Google', point toward a weird page, with the exact same name, with various ''photos'' of people/scenery/stuff ? Is it an intentional self-insert thingy or just my imagination ? ...

Clockwise Gear said...

Interesting, but Y U NO UPDATE?

DPV111 said...

This was so damn good. Please continue it!

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