Author: Thorin N. Tatge
Description: A silly little slice of life story! Five friends are enjoying a sleepover at Sweet Apple Acres. But can they find a way to keep Pinkie away from the alcohol without hurting her feelings?
Apple Whine
Additional Tags: Short, Sleepover, Silly, Whining, Alcohol
35 comments:
cocaine
Wine coolers.
Oh boy. I love Pony stories involving Friendship Lubricant.
haha the ending was awesome. fun story to read, even though it was lacking a certain character of the mane 6 in the storyline.
great work nonetheless.
Haha, why does the Mane 6 (and Big Mac) drinking alcohol feel so right?
And the ending was hilarious.
Great little story but that ending -- does weed even affect equines?
I read this yesterday.
@Anonymous
Everyone knows that Fluttershy is a mean drunk. She refuses to get near the sauce.
I really liked the dialogue in this piece, it was very well written, especially the back and forth between Rarity and the other ponies, the author clearly has a talent for her speech in particular.
Now that it's pointed out, however, where was Fluttershy?
I really wanna know what Pinkie Pie and Rarity are like drunk now.
Ganja?! Oh shit.... Just wait, next slumber party, she's breaking out the brownies. Course, I can kinda see AJ pulling a Willie Nelson and smoking an apple bong. Actually, Pinkie NEEDS weed to chill her out. I know a guy who's really mellow all the time. Then the cops scoped him out and he had to ditch his stash... Two days later he was skipping down the street singing "Follow the Yellow Brick Road..." Some folks need it. That, or Ritalin.
That was remarkably silly. You have your whining Rarity down to a tee.
Nice story, but the ending... Eh...
@Unknown
Fluttershy doesn't drink, and the slumber parties get in the way of the animals needs. But she does dabble in other things.......
Hint: Who the fuck do you think Pinkie got the weed from?
Ahahah! That was great! I really enjoyed reading it.
Rarity's whining actually had me cringing, and I was just reading text! Goodness man, you're an expert! Well done.
I've been a friend of Thorin's for a while. He's definitely got a talent in creative things. This is the first story of at least maybe four or five he's told me he's planning on doing.
I won't give any details on the other stories, as one incoming one is potentially going to be very epic that I know the full plot to, as I more or less helped him develop it through role-play and the like.
In short, keep an eye on this author, I can personally vouch for him that his stories are gold and a good amount of you will just love what's to come.
Five enthusiastic stars. I could totally hear every pony's voice!
The ending is also great, just ignore the haters. And I agree with one of the above comments: Pinkie totally gets her weed from Fluttershy.
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! :D If a little piece like this can get such a nice reception, I'm rarin' to write a longer one!
As for those of you wondering where Fluttershy was--she isn't really the all-nighter type. I figure she keeps an early bedtime and went home hours ago to tend to her animals and her *ahem* medicinal garden. ;)
This was just so... perfect! I loved the little time skips between the debate, and Rarity's whining... brilliant!
Also, I am fairly sure Applejack's quip about why you wouldn't want to live in a fair world just won a place in the quote hall of fame. that entire back and forth was great!
@Ardashir ...Yes.
Well, I know they can get High, anyway...
"Teetotally awesome. "
Thank you sir for giving me a new way to describe myself. And the fic was aweome as well. 5.
How about we have Pinkie bake some special brownies for everypony?! :D
Oh boy!
Possible drunk pony(ies) and the Comedy Tag ?
Will surely be great, can't wait to read it... tomorrow. 3AM here, already ?
I'm thinking Zecora would be the dealer, not Fluttershy. Two reasons, 1: she lives out in the forest where she can keep an eye on her crop, and 2: she is the one who makes all kinds of "natural remedies"
side note: Zecora would have the awesomest sales pitch ever! Rhyming dealer!!
Oh jeeze. You got me with that ending. Masterful presentation of a Rarity/Applejack willpower struggle, too, as well of Rarity having fun at Twilight's expense.
IS FUNNY TO ME
@Nova25
Well... it's was mildly funny, but really not 'as much as' I thought it will be... and the alst line makes me raise an eyebrow.
I think it could have been funnier, surely.
This is probably the most depressing story on the site. Poor Pinkie...
@KmScMT
Ha ha ha, oh funny joke ;). It is not, and by far.
Ever read : The Empty Room ? ...yeah.
That was goofy to say the least.
@SIaanmeYou're quite welcome! If you actually do use that phrase, I'll be tickled...pink!
@SIaanmeYou're quite welcome! If you actually do use that phrase, I'll be tickled...pink!
Although I'm sure your longer stories are good, it was refreshing to read a short and sweet story. I want another short story like this only I want to see your interpretation of drunk ponies. Congrats once again.
MLP with alcohol and drugs? Seriously, there's something very disturbing about that.
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