[Shipping][Comedy] Photo Dash! Or Rainbow Finish....uhh we can stick with the first one.
Author: Stephen Cawking
Description: Twilight and Dash visit the boutique of Photo Finish in Canterlot because Rainbow wants to become a model.Rainbow Dash Attempts to Dress in Style
Additional Tags: Short, Fashion, Aspirations, Licking, Indignation
90 comments:
Photodash? What an odd ship.
>Rainbow Dash wants to be a model
Ughhh, okay?
licking?
Wow they'll really ship dash with anybody.
Cue flat "Wat." from crowd.
Sorry, i mean anyPONY.
Licking.
I probably shouldn't read this.
Dash shipping with anypony bothers me....
Rainbow Dash and Photo Finish?
Wat
And just when I thought we'd shipped dashie with absolutely everyone.
What. The. Frick. Dash wasn't even in Green Isn't Your Color -_-
Say WHAT?! O_o
Lol wtf :p crazy ship
Rainbow dash always dresses in style.
Rainbow dash always dresses in style.
Rainbow dash always dresses in style.
OH GOD GET IT OUT OF MY HEAD.
~Scratch
@Anonymous
She pulled the Fluttershy ad for like, 4 seconds.
That counts, right?
Guys, It's weird, but open mind. You can't judge a Fic (Book, Pony) on looks alone. that mere description could be barely scratching the surface of something amazing.
Rainbow Dash: a nymphomaniac who fucks to get ahead in life.
Life lessons for little girls. I think Hasbro should canonize this story.
This should probably have had a random tag.
I'm hoping she goes full G3 on us... Rainbows, darling, rainbows...
@Anonymous
I think they shouldn't.
In fact, they shouldn't canonize any of the shipping stories we've been putting here.
Rainbow Slash strikes again.
Guys, this isn't straight shipping. Its about as close as possible to being a parody. Hell, it is a parody, if I'm being honest.
In regards to the story, it was funny. A bit meta for my tastes, and absolutely god-damned insane at points, but still quite funny.
WOW
Oh Seth.
It's supposed to be Shipping/Random
Seth REALLY fucked up.
After reading this story, I'm left... disappointed. It wobbled for most of the beginning, mostly with Dash's apparent readiness to admit self-doubt to her friends, but it really crumbled when it hit the supposed "shipping" part. I mean... good God, I know Dash can be shipped with anypony, but apparently the relationship can be so forced and unnatural that it's hard to view as anything like shipping. The jokes ultimately fall flat, and I am no more convinced of Photo/Dash shipping than I am of Thunderhooves/Granny Smith.
Also, “Compulsive-Cutielingus-Insanity-Syndrome?” WHAT?
"Rainbow Dash, do you know why we're here?"
"Um..."
"Dash, this is an intervention. You're addicted to sex."
10 minutes 23 seconds of me reading this... I'm somehow convinced Photo Finish is German, probably by the German counting. Besides that... 5/5, for... some reason.
"Thunderhooves/Granny Smith"
...dude. Reverse Pocahontas that, and...
SHIT, THAT COULD ACTUALLY WORK.
DASH SHIPS WITH EVERYPONY!
@ToonNinja
hey, CCIS is a real thing! Well, at least in the fics that are to explicit for this site.
If this is a parody, then Mel Brooks would be spinning in his grave, were he dead. Seeing how he's alive, I'm sure he just felt a great disturbance in the Schwartz, as if millions of jokes cried out at once, and were suddenly booed off-stage.
O_o
In the immortal words of Photo Finish...
"What... just... happened?"
I really mean it. What just happened? It's going along at a decent clip, nothing too out of the ordinary save for the arguably OOC kickstart to it with Rainbow's whole huge self doubt thing and then... BOOM! Cutie Mark Licking? And then fake sex in the street and then an after-sex-in-bed bit?
I say again. What just happened? Where did this come from?!
Also... why did I almost... kinda enjoy it?
If I could give half stars it'd be 3.5/5, but I'll round up to 4.
@Aquaman52
...I'll leave you to that. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to construct a story detailing the epic shipping ballad of Gilda and Derpy.
@Anonymous
I figured as much. Could still be handled better. Would make for immense internal turmoil: struggling to keep control of a raging libido, even around those you care about the most.
hey, it was worth a quick laugh and read, although I don't think I could put up with reading much more of photo's accent...
Oh it is a parody.
check out the blog post that went up before this got written http://mlp-wtg.deviantart.com/blog/42406916/ particularly 11 and 12
>attempts to dress in style
It's not really a spoiler to say that this attempt is doomed to fail.
Uhhh
I think this got mixed up with another story or something.
What is with all these hilarious comedy fics lately? This one put me into a fit of giggles. XD
@Sethisto
OH SETH
@Sethisto
...that's an awfully thorough "mix-up" you got here, buddy. XD
this made me laugh. quite hard, actually.
Wat
The eclectic selection of tags intrigued me, so I read it. 3 things;
How can a horse corset be busty? Horses don't have busts.
Both the title of the story and the google doc itself are just so very, incredibly smooth.
Wait, what? Seriously. I'd love to talk about the story and all, but... Just... WHAT?
Wat.
somebody call an electrician: 'cos this story has far too many WATs.
Oh, this is oughta be good! XD
@Anonymous
lol
But I mean really, what was that? I have read so many things in this fandom, and I don't remember too many that made me go "Wut?" like more than 8 times.
Most of it was okay, right up until the actual shiping. It makes no sense, feels entirely forced and out of place, almost as though the story started out with some other auther. All in all; Can't tell if juxtaposition or just poor taste.
@Sethisto
I don't get it
wut.jpeg
Hmm, yep. Wingboner.
*Facehoof*
"Short, Fashion, Aspirations, Licking, Indignation"
"Licking"
great, now I have to find out what in the hay this is supposed to mean and I don't want to look through the comments because of spoilers.
I have the why-ngest boner right now...
At first I was like... huh?
Then I was like... oooooh...
But then I was like... wtf?
@ToonNinja
"wobbled for most of the beginning, mostly with Dash's apparent readiness to admit self-doubt to her friends"
This would be an excellent point if I actually had her doing that...
Granted, I didn't specify how exactly she explains her plan to the other mane cast. I figured people would just fill in the blanks. I mean, of course she doesn't admit her innermost fears to them. She's Rainbow Dash and has an image to keep up.
Ah well... I guess it was pretty stupid of me to point that out in the comments section rather than the actual story.
I'll be looking forward to reading The Ballad of Gilda and Derpy and pointing out how out of character everyone is.
Awesome.
Awesome as TITS.
@NinesTempest
I uh..
I'm the one who removed the random tag
Not bad, although it did feel like the story was kinda forced.
Rainbow Dash Ship-Fics: By Trolls, For Trolls.
I support this for two reasons. Firstly shipping and secondly nothing about it made a lick of sense.
Damn it I hate doing puns like that.
I once read a fic that changed gears from sappy cuddleship to apocalyptic transformers crossover without any reason or warning.
This fic is stranger than that.
@Bitmun
What?
I um... What? O_o
WHAT IN THE BLUEBERRY **** AM I READING?
I love it when the filename doesn't match the title.
Check that second sentence: it tells us what the first sentence told us, only in greater detail. The writing needs some work, is my point. Just sayin'.
I do like the idea that Rainbow Dash and Rarity have something in common that way. Raging wingboners what. Twilight doesn't have a bust! Well, I'm glad at least one of Rainbow Dash's friends isn't completely against the idea of accompanying her to Canterlot.
Socks, what. God, the memes are killing me, and I don't mean that in a bad way.
You know what I'm loving about this? Excellent Photo Finish characterization. Don't see that often. Well, I don't see her at all, actually, but that the one time I do is well played is a good thing!
WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED RAINBOW DASH OH MY GOD. THIS IS HIGHLY IRREGULAR.
Wow. This is a pretty brash piece of absurdity. I think I'm at a loss for words here. That was weird.
@ToonNinja
What he said, with a heaping dose of 'hurr random is funny hurr.' Also, Family Guy jokes? Left me feeling dirty.
No, just no, because no.
@Stephen Cawking
By the time I'm done, Gilderp will be the OTP of every single brony out there. Just you wait.
I like silly fics that poke fun at the cliches of the fandom, and this one delivers. Good show!
Ironic that this story referenced family guy - the show that taught us that referencing funny things doesn't actually make you funny.
@Anonymous
I can't say I agree with calling Rainbow's self doubt out of character. Have you seen episode 16: The Sonic Rainboom?
the f**k did I just read?
@Anonymous
Licking
What!? I don't... what!? I mean... I just... WHAT!?
....
Why do we suddenly have two stories that involve licking cutie marks? I thought the socks thing was weird, but...
I honestly was caught off guard by the ending, I thought that conversation was at a table in Canterlot's fanciest eatery, not PHOTO FINISH'S FUCKING BED!!
Also, everyone who thought the Dash ships were exhausted, wrong. Dash is going to be shipped with everything, not everypony, not everybody, EVERYTHING. Rainbow x Mr. Turnip, GO GO GO!
that was.....interesting.
@Present Perfect
*replying way too late*
You are absolutely right about the first sentence making the second one redundant. I changed it, hopefully for the better.
My writing does need a lot of work, this started off as a silly writing exercise for the Writers Training Ground anyways. So I'm grateful for the feedback.
*unrelated note*
This went up to 3.5 stars what what
"How do I put zhis as gently as possible?” She feigned deep thought for a moment and boldly declared, “You are like a great, flying, gay pride flag."
How dare you! That's probably the worst insult you can give Dashie...
(Reads on a little bit)
What the heck? That's... weird. And it doesn't make sense. And it is out of character.
So... weird... I'm not buying it.
@KShrike
You mean she doesn't lick other ponies in the series? Dang... I knew I forgot something!
Vat has just happened?
..... What the HELL did I just read?
scrolling down, i swear i saw the words granny smith.
seriously people.
Rainbow Dash dressing up? No offense, but I liked her better when she was a tomboy.
Ugh, I always hated fanfics that had homosexual Rainbow Dash in them. Why the hell did I even read this?
@Anonymous
WHY ARE YOU ASKING ME THESE DIFFICULT QUESTIONS
@Sethisto
Now WHY do I not believe you, hmmm, Seth?
@ToonNinja
I highly doubt that...
But I mean it has ponies... it can't be that bad. I'll go check out some shipfics.
Rainbow Dash is awesome...
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