Author: Morgan Artemis Ville
Description: Luna is off in search of a falling star so that her wish of ponies enjoying her beautiful night would come true. However, she never could have imagined the feelings of friendship felt after meeting Rainbow Dash and how the pegasus pony might change her forever.Rainbow Colored Falling Stars Part 1
Rainbow Colored Falling Stars Part 2
Rainbow Colored Falling Stars Part 3 (New!)
Additional Tags: adventure, friendship, flying, hope, comedy
41 comments:
First
Curse you, anon!
LunaDash?
This doesn't really seem complete.
It's a good start though.
LunaDash sounds good...
Yeah, seems like a good start, but the tags need work.
Remove: Complete
Add: Incomplete, Abacus
Nightmare Dash? Moonbow Dash? Lunar Dash?
Has there ever been a good Rainbow Rarity fiction? Because I'm not sure anyone has done that given their bad friction nor do I believe it can be done tastefully or almost in character.
I'm not ignoring the LunaDassh that happens here or that Luna just agreed to flight lessons after a thousand year downtime.
If Luna is canonically adorkable in season 2, I am disappoint. I love this interpretation.
*isn't
Negation escapes me.
Soooooo, Luna can't fly? Really? This sounds more like FlutterDash with a name-change to Luna. And Fluttershy having an odd obsession with the night. Also, yes, needs Incomplete tag.
like it!!
2:30am, zzzZZZ
Rainbow Moon
I don't necessarily think this qualifies as shipping, unless there's gonna be a part 2...
*cries* Again with the abacus! Please stop with the abacus. I do not have an abacus and I have not named it! I think after 1000 years ponies have come up with better ways to calculate. Particularly when working with Trans Mystic six dimensional calculations. For the LOVE OF EQUESTRIA, please stop with the Abacus.
There will be more parts coming soon. The abacus references will stop I promise.
Luna can fly but she can't fly well.
And there shall be shipping.
Hehehe.
Celestia doesn't fly, she just moves Equestria to where she's not.
What is up with the abacus anyway? Im relativly new over here...
The abacus is a joke on how Luna has been trapped in the moon for a thousand years and it's assumed she's never seen modern technology hence the abacus. People then took the abacus reference and made it a parody on how it's Lunas one and only friend that she had with her on the moon for all that time.
I give up. Blogger hates me when it comes to posting.
translation: I already knew that, but didn't KNOW that I knew that. Blogger apparently doesn't like when people do this.
Chapter 2 has been submitted to Sethisto. Hopefully it will be up soon. :)
Everyone should also visit my main deviant art page because it's awesome. :)
http://dualitycomplex.deviantart.com/
RainbowLuna
@Anonymous
I wouldn't enjoy if Luna was a frigging emo...too annoying...maybe if she was an adorable rebel like Rainbow Dash is ;P
Then again she could have more personalities inside her like Dash's goofy one which you see when she first meets twilight or screws around with the guards
@Anonymous
RainbowLuna? Not even trying
MoonBow - I believe I just won
metallica x ponys!!!!
I DO WANT!!!! DO ET!!!! NAOW!!!!
also, love this fimfic
@Kits
i cant belive it took so long for somepony to say it...
indeed YOU WON
Runa, lunadash, ohh, what about rainbow eclipse? no that sounds like a story...
I always call this pairing Rainmoon or Laina.
Dangit! that is soo much cooler than lunadash....
Lol, the ending for the second one was awesome! Luna will never live that down. But, then again, it's not that bad.
Chapter 3 will probably take a while to write. The author of Luna's Best Night Ever is my ex who recently broke my heart and so I haven't really had the strength to write anything recently. I'm not sure when I'll be able to write again but I hope that everyone hangs in there with me until then...
Thanks, Morgan Ville
@Anonymous
Aww, you stole my idea! :(
Still, LUNADASH!
Hey everyone I'm sorry it's taking so long for part 3. I promise it will be done soon. T_T orz
Trollestia strikes.
Ok...this is a very....clunky...fic and to be honest, not to be mean, it doesn't quite seem up to the general standards of work usually posted to EqD.
I can't even really give 'proper' criticism....just something about the writing style bothers me, perhaps there's just way to much 'tell' in it.
honestly Im not used to writing pony fiction I write fiction fantasy in general but this just seems to make me seem as if I cant write very well at all. I'm trying here so bear with me...
AWSEMOE!!!!!
yhes!!! just like t6hat!!!!!!
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