Author: Tenure
Description: During the course of her day, Twilight learns that Pinkie Pie's father is coming to visit her and she's throwing a party to celebrate! However, he's bringing a bit more than anypony bargained for... a confession about Pinkie's past that may change the way the pink party pony sees her beloved Papa for the rest of her days.Papa Pie Part 1
Papa Pie Part 2
Papa Pie Part 3 (New!)
Additional Tags: Random, Pinkie, Party, Secrets, Family
89 comments:
first?
you know i heard that first is the worst but second is the best
THEN I MUST HAVE THE TREASURE CHEST.
Also, this is interesting. I'm curious to see how it goes.
Though the bear joke made me cringe. Hard.
aww i get nothing.
anyway on to reading (yes i know im horrible, i posted before reading)
4 Anons in a row?
I'm not sure where this story is going, but I'll be keeping an eye on it.
for the anon above (and below) me, nope.
I'M ANON-
Wait.
Uhm... 1 chapter, incomplete... I'll pass, for now.
Yeah, I commented pretty much because of ^^^
Story sounds interesting, so I'm gonna read it.
First thought based only on the description... she was adopted. And now, to begin reading.
Let's actually read the story before commenting, yea? Oh wait... BRB
Moar. That is all.
Wait wait wait wait wait... comedy AND sad?
*adds to must-read list*
1. Great opening chapter
2. OMFG ANGEL SOFT!? LOL I shouldn't be laughing this hard.
3. Can't wait for more.
Welllllllll I'v had my fill of SAT words for the day
Very good so far, however sometimes the unwonted vocabulary detracts from the readability, flow is important too.
Noes the fic isn't done yet ;_;
The books were:
"The Elements of Harmony: A Reference guide"
"The Ultimate guide to Parties"
and "Poison making for dummies"
Ee-yup.
AH! Cliffhanger!
Must have more! D:
Quality writing
So... sad.
Moar? I can has? *brick'd*
I must know what happens next!
Derpy wants to be a what?
Intrigued so far, though the bear/angel bunny joke did put me off a bit...
...Ominous, but not obtrusively; In a way ever so slightly unnerving (in the manner of uncanny valley).
On the writing: very good details, explained in a way that is identical to the show, but leaves no room for imagination; Written too much like a transcription.
Dat picture...
I don't think my frail heart is ready for a sad Pinkie Pie just yet after reading all those sad pony fics... *adds to to-read list*
@The Dread Pirate Roberts
I knew that joke was gonna be a love-or-hate thing but once the old joke popped into my head there was no way I could resist adding it.
Ok, interesting read. It's well written, I'll give it that. However, I would of waited until you had at least two chapters before submitting this. It's hard to get into an incomplete story when there's so little to go by. The chapter wasn't long, and while it may have been written well, it wasn't really enough.
4-stars, for the quality of what was written. I'm tempted to go five, but there just isn't enough to go by. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter, which I hope is soon.
(PS, the bear joke was horrible, for lack of a nicer word. Try and avoid facepalm-inducing jokes in what I'm guessing is a serious fic)
bear joke was kinda fail
though I cant wait to read more of the actual story
Ditto on the bear joke being just...not good...but the rest has me at least intrigued. Was he trying to slip her ritalin or something?
LIGHT TRUCK
I swear I've heard that "bear joke" before.
Anyways, Pinkie Pie, crying?
MIND-CRUSH!
I'm liking Pinkie's Dad's characterization, stern but at the same time he clearly cares for Pinkie, it makes a change form most fics that paint him and Pinkies other family as stern emotionless Amish-ponies
sad comedy... no, no that cant be right.
Not much to say yet. To early. But you grabbed my attention and I will be back for more.
I bet Pinkie Pie's song is sung to the tune of "O Tannenbaum".
I had to take a star off my rating for the part with Angel and the bear. If you just get rid of that, I'll give you back that star.
Keep the bear joke. I laughed so hard I thought I'd busted something.
@Anonymous
If you want to know from where I based the song, follow the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jR0eBWDVAtw&feature=player_detailpage#t=48s
MOAR
moar please.
I've always thought the bear/rabbit joke was kinda lame, but it was pretty frickin hilarious in this context.
Indeed, keep the bear joke, i hadn't laughed so hard in a long time. then again i had just read progress (Luna Versus Ponyville Part 5 & 6)at the time, so that might have a little to do with how funny i found the joke. also, NEED NEXT CHAPTER NOW PLEASE!
This story needs three, seven, nine-hundred, four, four more chapters at least.
....Well now. This story definitely just took a left turn at 5th and BANANAS.
Moar. Nao.
I'm wondering how this can be sad and comedy at the same time... :o
+1 WTFery for that closing scene. This... just got really intriguing.
wow, that was sharp change in the story
write. MORE.
And then Pinkie Pie evolved into Charizard
wtf
WTF
WHAT THE FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU
ok guys don't panic I know how we can fix this
*ahem*
LOSING A FRIEND'S TRUST IS THE FASTEST WAY TO LOSE A FRIEND
...
goddommot
Pinkie had better get better from this, that's all I'm saying
her name is PINKIE pie
her sisters are INKY and BLINKY pie
and her father is CLYDE pie.
I see what you did there.
Hmmmm... I think I have to read this just to see how Sad and comedy fit in the same story. Not to mention it does look interesting too.
AWW SNAP!
*nods in approval*
I like where this is going.
OOooh! Creepy.
The ending of chapter 2...
Me: Wuuuuuuuut
STORY
Y U NO CONTINUE?
And throughout the entire second chapter: Please don't go Cupcakes, please don't go Cupcakes...
Hmm. I hope it updates soon. My attention has been snagged.
*adds this to like the 10 or so other fics he's following*
@Dr. Robotnik
It's actually the official inofficial names for the pie family...
one of the few fics i will be following. really interesting!
"fashionista destination supreme" cracked me up. This is great. :)
Ok i know dark comedy but im not sure about sad comedy anyways good story so far and i really want to know what this 'curse' is ):/
Is... her being able to shoot flames from her mouth like Spike her.... errm... 'curse'? Me MUST KNOOOW.
what, only 2 chapters so far? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH I need just one more chapter!
Also I think the 'curse' is her split personality.
so am i to assume this project is dead?
Oh my god, when I first read about the basement, i feared this had to do with cupcakes
Moar? Please?
@Rainbow_derp
Actually it's not on hiatus, I'm just involved with a lot of things right now.
I almost died at the bear joke. Also, I NEED MORE NOW!!!! AAAAAAAHH!!!!!!!!!
I've actually heard the bear joke before... I need more of this story though... RESOLUTION PLEASE.
@Tenure
I'm loving it man. I just want to know what's wrong with the PINK!...IE PIE!
So, is this ever going to continue?
All the stories I want continued like this one havn't been updated in forever. I'm wondering if it has something to do with the switch from the old archive to the new one
Whoa... I forgot about this one XD
I can't wait to read more no wonder she distrusted Zacora if the last time she saw a zebra was on the "Rock farm"
Also I hope you have RD Twilight and AJ knock some sense into him in the fact that Pinkie may be random but she's still has all the skills she did she just uses them in a more important way of making other ponys happy and smile.
Plus the fact that shes an Element of Harmony doesn't hurt...
SO.....If I get this right, Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom is to be blamed of this partly ? :(
ok, you have my interest... and my frustration, and alllll of my anger. seriously tho, I need more of this, quickly.
Loverd It! Want more though!
Sorry this one's taking so long. Five complete rewrites of that third part and the threat of losing my home had taken their toll. Fourth part's gonna be the last and will arrive a lot sooner than this one.
Twilight was reading a book about flying...while flying :3
@Tenure
That's really cool. You keep writing even after that. ^^
@Tenure
glad this updated, always wondered what had happened to it.
oh and sorry to hear you could have possibly lost your house. good luck to ya dude
Prediction.
Nothing is wrong with Pinkie. When she saw the Sonic Rainboom, she discovered what she actually wanted to do with her life. And that didn't include teaching/inventing. She's still a genius, creating the Pinkie Copter, has incredible memory, but parties are what she wants.
Would be why nothing Clyde tries works, as there's just nothing to fix. Also her family were already confused by her behavior (Throwing the party in the first place) before she consumed the potion.
@Tenure
I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. I do a bit in Real Estate so if you need any help with your home just email me at EverKingLLC@gmail.com. I'd be happy to help you out for free.
But it's good that you're writing again and I can't wait to see how it all ends up.
@Tenure
I'm also sorry to hear that your going through some trouble. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
... Bear joke? Someone explain this to me.
I actually put off reading this at first; I wanted to start when there were a few more chapters. So much for that! Still, I understand you're having troubles. Good luck to you!
In regards to the story: it's terrible because now that I have gotten a taste, I want more! I'm loving your take on the Pie family. It's strange no one takes advantage of Pinkie's "zany inventor" trope - yet you're going a long way with it; I love it.
Looking very forward to the next chapter.
I think chapter three is pretty great. I was so excited when I saw it was up. the cliffhanger endings are killing me man!
I. MUST. READ. MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please continue soon
Will this ever get an update?
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