Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Story: Gotta Put a Smile on Your face

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Author: ZAquanimus
Description: It's a very important day for Rainbow Dash, and all she has to do is
bake a cake. The only problem is, she's never baked a cake before.
Gotta Put a Smile on Your face

Additional Tags: Sweet, Cute, Smile-Inducing, Funny, Scootalove

45 comments:

TenchiFreak5 said...

That Photo + Those Tags = Must Read.

Multifish said...

Mr TenchiFreak, I thought precisely the same thing...

ZAquanimus said...

Wow, I guess tomorrow is only 12 hours in seth time XD

Roman500 said...

Scootalove, BEST TAG EVER! Great story.

BlankFlankBrony said...

D'awwwwww.

The world needs more Scootalove.

Lord-Blazer said...

@ZAquanimus Seth Time is Best Time :P

KidNeo said...

*Reads tags* Scootalove? I'm sold! :D

*Reads story and loves every word of it*

Anonymous said...

really nice story.
Through I do wonder why Scootaloo apparently lives with Rainbow dash.
But that's just a minor nitpicky thing, the important bit is that it really is a very good story.
-
Vegetalss4

Lord Tony said...

@Anonymous

I agree, fuck My Little Pony.

Anonymous said...

@Anonymous

Haters gonna hate.

KidNeo said...
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Anonymous said...

@Anonymous

Then why did you come to a site that is fully devoted to ponies if you hate them so much?

Don't worry, though. We'll love and tolerate you all the same. :D

Markeith said...

I laughed and I DAWWWWWWWWWWW'D, 5-stars and job well done good sir.

ZAquanimus said...

@Anonymous

There is a reason why this little issue is still left open.
My internet is derping a bit, but if you read the A/N at the very end you will see that I explain it a tad.

if not, then you'll just have to wait till my next fic for the answers ;3

ZAquanimus said...
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Roman500 said...

ǝʇɐɥ ɐuuoƃ sɹǝʇɐH

YTM said...

While I've yet to read it yet (will be doing so later tonight), I have added that image onto my desktop background, it's TOO cute. Dawhhhhh :3

Anonymous said...

Scootalove! Great tag.
And it certainly is smile inducing, though I feel like it may have been more interesting if it had been a surprise that it was for Scoots, instead of knowing before we even clicked the link.

A Vulture with a Tophat said...

Hey Rainbow Dash

Y U NO BAKE CAKE

SkaFox64 said...

Why so many fics about Dash failing at baking?

ZAquanimus said...

@Anonymous
Too True Mr.Anon.
Tooo True.

Though any who have read my first fic, Fly Away, would have known already x3.

Anonymous said...

@ZAquanimus

rereading the A/N* don't see any explanation as much as an acknowledgement of the lack of an explanation.

I would like to stress, that this isn't a huge problem just something I found a bit strange :-)

so I guess I'll just have to read your next story to satisfy my curiosity. There are worse fates than having to read a well written fanfic I guess.
-
Vegetalss4

Pustulioooooo said...

I D'awwwwwwwwwwww'd :D

5 Stars ^_^

Anonymous said...

Forgive me, but... I could've sworn I read this posted here before, not that long ago. It reads so much like this, that I'm not sure if it's a rewrite or what.

I just can't wrap my head around it for that reason, and that it just seems kinda forced in points. Cute idea, but...

Bunnylisk said...

loving all the scootalove fics lately :D

Rated-R PonyStar said...

1. Really cute story
2. When I saw the title the old mcdonalds theme came into my head.

ZAquanimus said...

@Anonymous

Ok fine, *makes it a bit more specific about the vagueness*

and thanks for the compliment.
i put alot of pride into my writing. ^.^

ZAquanimus said...

@Anonymous
You are correct good sir.
This story has for the most part already been on EquiDaily. It was written for Cereal's Speedfic challenge (as i said in the A/N at the end)
and like a few other of the speedfics, this was fleshed out, "finished" and sent in as a standalone fic.

ZAquanimus said...

@Pustulioooooo

Hey, watcha doing on the internets!? xD

Pustulioooooo said...

@ZAquanimus
Vacation is torture without internet. >_>

The Linker said...

@SkaFox64

The topic of the speedfic thing a while back was explicitly "Dash failing at baking." Some people wanted to develop what they had into a full-fledged fanfic, and so they did, and here we are. :D

Lilfut said...

It's a piece of cake to make a pretty cake
If the way is hazy
You gotta do the cooking by the book
You know you can't be lazy

I was singing that the entire time

Present Perfect said...

An hour at 500 degrees. She really DOESN'T know how to cook! Scootalove is always appreciated.

La Barata said...

NO MORE SCOOTABUSE! MORE SCOOTALOVE!
NO MORE SCOOTABUSE! MORE SCOOTALOVE!
NO MORE SCOOTABUSE! MORE SCOOTALOVE!

Anonymous said...

Have to go to bed at 4AM at very latest to be up for Noon.

4AM comes around.

Spot Scootalove-fic.

"Aaaah horseapples" *Sit down to read*

And well worth the late stay up for it indeed! A little short tale, a very tiny slice of life in Ponyville. Even the "living with" thing doesn't matter, at first I sort of assumed that Dash had just asked her to come over.

Very "d'aaww" story with some nice little interactions. I could certainly get involved in these bite size Ponyville-life fics.

physicallypossible said...

ZAq u continue to amaze me I hope ill be able to do as good with the halo crossover haha

One Hoof Wonder said...

How could I pass up a story with a "Scootalove" tag? Thanks for that!

Escher said...

@SkaFox64

Probably because it's funny, and the only one of the cast that's probably worse at it than her is Twilight, who I suspect could, contrary to all physics, manage to scorch water.

ZAquanimus said...

Thanks alot guys.
I'm so glad you enjoy reading my scootalove fics.
Though it seems that I will forever be stuck at the 4.4 star level xD

I hope to surpass that with my next fic, which I forsee to be the best my writing has to offer.

And it should answer any and all questions that people have regarding this fic and Fly Away.

Ikusa GT said...

One Problem Scootaloo can't fly she can only hover a few inches of the ground but good story.

Anonymous said...

I wish there was a Scootabuse fic I could read.

Anonymous said...

http://pastebin.com/K7dwEtvR
Here, enjoy a romantic Scoots/Dash fic everyone.

TenchiFreak5 said...

I liked this. It was a bit rough around the edges (which I suppose is to be expected when it was an entry in the SpeedFic challenge), but it was still a nice little story.

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