• Story: The Black Gate

    [Normal][Adventure]

    Author: Incorporatedstates
    Description: A horrific but familiar darkness descends upon Equestria after thousands of years of dormancy. As it swallows Equestria whole and transforms its ponies into beings far more sinister, a group of two ponies must face the unknown together if the Equestria they know is to be saved. Some ponies will rise to this new challenge with them, but far more will fall sway to the encroaching darkness. What the ponies will discover, however, is that the power of friendship alone may not be enough.
    The Black Gate - Part I


    Additional Tags: Long, Quest, Darkness, Anti-ponies, Remembrance

    12 comments:

    1. Adventure, Long, and Normal! Three of my favourite tags!

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    2. "Anti-ponies"? Long adventure fic starring Luna?

      *saved to HD*

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    3. Looks good but I'm waiting on too many stories at the mo, ill read it once it has a few chapters

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    4. Oh my, what is this? Yet another fic to keep an eye on. What evil stalks Equestria in this one? I can't wait to see.

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    5. IncorporatedstatesJuly 24, 2011 at 12:25 AM

      Author here. Considering there's no 'First!' post, I take that as a good sign.

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    6. Quite the nice beginning you have here, I am certainly interested in the direction this thing will go in the future. :)

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    7. Moral: If there are no animals in a part of a forest, RUN AWAY. They've fled for a reason!!

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    8. It appears I have another excellent read to be had, my hats off to you!

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    9. I'm liking where this story is going, but whenever I read ''The Black Gate'' part I keep thinking they're going to fight Sauron. XD

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    10. IncorporatedstatesJuly 24, 2011 at 1:46 AM

      @Fire Flash

      I suppose that's fine. A friend of mine kept harping about how the mane cast should 'close shut the jaws of OBLIVION'...

      And despite being posted at 2:00AM here on the West Coast, I'm really happ-happy at the responses so far. I hope that the graveyard update status doesn't burry this until Part II, which should be in about a couple weeks... I mean come on, the first Part is 12 pages long!

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    11. Interesting. Can't wait for more!

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