Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Story: The Seventh Element (Updated Part 2+3!)

[Normal] I never know what to use for these OC pony stories when it comes to images, so have a castle. 

Author: Marius Malek
Description: It’s been three centuries since the “event” that changed the face of Equestria forever. Thanks to the sacrifice of six brave ponies, the land has known a peace like no other. However, something lurks beneath the shadows, waiting to disrupt the lives of every pony. It is here that we meet our new hero, Flash, a young pegasus pony, who embarks to discover what happened three hundred years ago on that fateful day. Unknowingly, he will set in motion a series of events that will change the world – again.
Google Docs
The Seventh Element: Overture
The Seventh Element: Celestia's Orders (New!)
The Seventh Element: Startling Revelations (New!)

Deviant Art
The Seventh Element: Overture
The Seventh Element: Celestia's Orders (New!)
The Seventh Element: Startling Revelations (New!)

Additional Tags: 1st Person, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Epic

27 comments:

Narwhals' Bend said...

That doesn't look like a castle to me.

krypqe said...

@Narwhals' Bend
I just knew that'd be the first comment...

Rohit Eligeti said...

What's the 7th element?

Anonymous said...

Really liked this. I'd love to read more from this author! Really liked the 1sy person too. We don't get many 1st person stories.

@Narwhals' Bend
lol'd so hard!

Anonymous said...

@Narwhals' Bend
@Narwhals' Bend
Lol'd, and then lol'd again.

Narwhals' Bend said...

@Anonymous
I'm glad so many people thought that was funny.

TaleSpinner said...

I loved this! Totally great, can't wait for the next installment!

Shellsh0cker said...

Thank Celestia for people like you, Mr. Malek. You make my job so easy.

Anonymous said...

Liked it pretty much so far!
Hope that you will continue to write soon

Anonymous said...

@Narwhals' Bend XD nice

Anonymous said...

i cant wait for you to finish this it seems full of potential...

Marius Malek said...

@Anonymous

I hope I don't disappoint!

Anonymous said...

Careful with the OC there, lest you overdo it...

Anonymous said...

@Anonymous

Yes indeed, mary sue senses tingling, still, let's see where he goes with it.

Anonymous said...

I love this, can't wait for more! :D

Anonymous said...

need MOAR! This is going from a very good story to a great one - keep it up!! :)

Anonymous said...

7th element: also magic, surprisingly.

Anonymous said...

Liking it more than any other adventure fic thus far. Keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

love this story thanks for making it.

Anonymous said...

good story so far
keep on going!

La Barata said...

So far, win. Let's see if it makes it to Epic Win. Hell, I'm even betting it could make its way up to Flawless Victory.

La Barata said...

So... Planning to continue to Flawless Victory or what?

Sporian_Quantum said...

Well, two can play with this concept, only my version will include the Mane 6.

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