Description: She shall pay. She shall pay dearly for snubbing Rarity and her fashions...
Aw hell, Photo Finish is screwed.
Ok, the ending to the first part is kinda funny in how it counters the first chunk. That ending paragraph is just cute :D
Since Rarity and Photo Finish are my 2 favourites, I didn't think that I'd like this very much. It was actually quite well-written and made the most of Rarity's perspective.
It was a good story. Kinda short though.Got my heart racing at some parts.
Fluttershy would probably have a more cunning plan, such as say...leaving a 'special order' for Pinkie...
Pretty good, just felt too short.I would gladly read a chapter 2 of this.
>Anger, revenge, murdermfw i saw the header image
Heh, that was fun for what it was. A tad short.
But, but it needs more. The ending just well....
I never ever read Grimdark. Ever. Except for the fallout crossover, but that one doesn't count.Somehow though, I knew I wouldn't mind this story. And I was right. Anyway, yeah, its ok I guess. Written well enough, but it doesn't really stump the reader. Kept me occupied for a few minutes anyway.
Lol.This was great. It'd like a second chapter,though.
I am now envisioning Rarity dressed as agent 47.
yayy! I loved it! REVENGEEEE MUAHAHHAHAHA
To all those saying this should be longer/needs a continuation: it is quite possible I will extend this a bit, seeing how there were a few parts I had wanted to expand on here and there, but I really did envision this more as a one-shot; I don't think I'll be doing a sequel, to be honest.Anyways, thanks for the critique and support!
Rarity + Grimdark = Perfect ComboNice story!
And then rather than either of them or any of the major-minor characters, it shall be her assistant herself who pulls the trigger.For the mistreat that she had done, thou shall pay its price.
Pretty good. As obvious as the ending was, I think it works.