Description: Before the Grand Galloping Gala, Applejack makes a very...personal request of Rarity. How could the Pony of Generosity refuse?
Rare Apples? Elegant Cider? Darling Sugarcube?Diggin' in.
"Additional Tags: Short. Sweet. Saucy"Am i the only one who gets hungry from reading that?
Rare Apple? Apple Jewel? This is hard. @Netkev I just want to know why Saucy is highlighted in yellow as if that's the main reason to read the fic because it's saucy.
Not even close to Saucy, to be honest. I like the writing, I VERY like the characters - Rarity is SO much Rarity, as only Rarity Could Get, and this is enough for me to love it.And because of that, I feel that even short tag is not enough to inform, how SHORT this was, and HOW much more I need to clo... to READ.;)
Oh wow lol, i just read this on FanFiction.net, and when I click back to Equestria Daily there it is!Anyways, it's a pretty nice story, maybe a little short but what's in there rocks. I swear, being a brony is slowly turning me furry...
I'm confused.But I like it. And I want more.
A cute little story! I love suggestive stories that turn out to be somewhat innocuous, it's always good for a laugh in my book.
I felt it was of appropriate length. Pretty well-made.
This is a good one. The writing is ambiguous enough that you could read it as just Rarity teaching Applejack to dance... or read it as something a bit more X-rated.
Oh god that was, I think unintentionally, hilarious.Saucy is an optional tag I think, just becuase it's SO ambiguous.Kudos to the author.
First MLP fanfic I've read and it's actually good. Really actually good. Was not expecting it.
Very enjoyable, albeit the ambiguity was both fantastic and slightly comical. Characters were accurately portrayed, Rarity was awesome. Has anypony else ever noticed that any shipping involving Rarity almost always has her take the lead?
I suppose it speaks volumes of me that I instantly assumed they were just dancing and was wondering why it had been tagged as shipping. And somehow overlooked all the suggestive bits.
Short, yes. Very short. But also sweet!I'm very much hoping for sequels or expansions.
Rajack? Apity? R. Jack the 3rd?I don't know.This was good though, little short, but good.
The pairing is refered to as AppleRare.Gosh guys.
Decent, but predictable and generic as hell.
It wasn't bad...It wasn't too good either, unfortunately. Kind of just the "same old same old" if you ask me. You did well author but, I would have liked a better story than "come to my barn so we can make out". Ya know?
My Little Pony: Dancing is Sensual?
@Anonymous: Probably because she fits the Older Woman stereotype a little bit, while the rest of them basically act like teenagers. This was short and sweet, though. Write more! :)
I did rather see the twist coming from when the music started, but it was very cute none the less.
@AnonymousYou really think Rarity would let anyone else lead?
Rapplety. Jaritack. Rari-apples-for-mah-brain. Hmmm... Well, Apple Jack is orange, and Rarity is white... So why not dreamsickle?
> Darling SugarcubeWorks for me.
Applejarity.(ohmigosh more than 3 syllables)
@AnonymousApplerare just sounds tghe best, I think.That or Rareapple... Bit Applerare writes better too.
Oh this was a little piece of wonderful. Short, but beautiful; both Applejack and Rarity were perfectly in-character.
That rocked on a very hilarious level. Cleverly designed so you can (almost) read it both ways.Keep it up.
...Am I the only one who figured out they were dancing?
That was awesome! I loved it very much! <D
Wow. um. well.Eeyup.That's all i can say, really.Eeyup. 5/5.i think. i don't even know.5/5.