Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Story: Forgotten (Update Part 2+3! )


[Normal] Pre-readers said it invoked the power of potential tears! So maybe a bit sad?


Author: JenovaII
Description: A pony from Twilight's past returns.
Forgotten Part 1
Forgotten Part 2: Soft (New!)
Forgotten Part 3: Hollow (New!)


Additional Tags: Nopony should ever be forgotten.

24 comments:

Dark Side of the World said...

This story was really good. Not a bad OC and I like the moral. 4 stars

Anonymous said...

I cried. Should have 'Sad' Tag

Dave said...

Likewise. As a short story, it certainly did what it set out to do. Job well done.

Hikuro14 said...

I almost cried...

This story is amazing...

Breakfast said...

A stirring story, it evokes images of those who feel they have little or nothing to live for, which hits home... I have been at that point.

I've never been desperate, but there are multiple methods to cope.

Nevertheless, it makes you realize who you COULD be influencing, but might inadvertently choose not to, and that's something we could all be a little more aware of.

Well written, and a good story. Quick, but efficient.

Marrock said...

@Anonymous No... not sad... Hopeful.

Randon said...

Well written, a little sad, at least a 4 star.

Anonymous said...

Liked it. A lot.

9Nine9 said...

Five stared. Shuppow. I've five stared like maybe 8-9 things on this website? Too good. Said everything necessary on dA.

Anonymous said...

made me feel a little sad there for a bit, but I agree with Marrock, a sad story is one that containes a tragic tragic ending, this isn't sad, this is inspiring. I love the friendship report at the end.

Kujiiro said...

I fell in love with this story.

CrimeOfKicking said...

;_;

Moondancer....

Zardul said...

Noooo not such a well developed Moondancer!

Silent Solace said...

I think I died a little inside... I need to stop reading sad FICA... Time for some grim dark! :)

Marrock said...

@Marrock Ok, never mind... I was painfully horribly wrong.

Var said...

This is amazing. The third part just doesn't hold back, does it? And the spiritual power behind her last two letters... wow.

5 stars, for sure. Needs a Sad tag, too.

La Barata said...

Like a motherfucking BOSS.

Valmir_R0yalGuArd said...

I cried.... This is one of the more touching stories I have ever read. There are moments where theres happiness and moments of true sadness. This fiction gives a very strong message and speaks to those who have nothing. I'm giving this a Five.

Valmir_R0yalGuArd said...

@Kujiiro

Ditto dude.

Rubidia said...

T_T

>mfw 4/5 latest stories on EqD has [sad] tag

TT_____TT

>mfw after reading this story.

Oh God why... why must these pony fics be so gosh darn sad? ;A; Still, an excellent story.

Friendly Uncle said...

I've read a lot of pony fics that have made me laugh. There have been some that made me think. There were a few that made me sad. This is the first one that's really made me cry.

Thank you.

Delta Pangaea said...

I am full of sad.

This is all...

Anonymous said...

Oh goddammit, now im all sad again.

Stars said...

Very much in need of a sad tag as well as one I would deem "hopeful"

The story is great, sad, but a clear and deep meaning. Well written and I enjoyed it very much.

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