• Story: A Far Gone Sun


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    Author: RedSquirrel456
    Description: In a distant future, ponies teeter on the brink of extinction, and an evil force holds sway over a dangerous earth. Six new heroes must brave the new, dark world to resurrect an ancient power and bring their home back to what it once was.
    A Far Gone Sun Part 1
    A Far Gone Sun Part 2 (New!)

    Additional tags: Long, Adventure, OCs, War, Friendship

    11 comments:

    1. Man, Seth's hands must be, like
      So full of Trixie stories right now.

      How does he eat? Like... does he brings his face to his food?

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    2. Permission required to open this document.

      I'd like to read it :(

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    3. Hard to find OC pony images?
      There are 2 reasons for that:

      1)
      >Tips:
      >-OC ponies are generally frowned upon, though I >slip them in sometimes

      2) OC ponies usually come in a crappy quality.

      Aside those two facts, everyone and their mother drew an OC version of themselves at least once.

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    4. That's not an OC pony image.

      ...Not that I'm complaining.

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    5. People like to hate Original Characters, yet what they are really thinking about are Mary Sues.

      One is required for good storytelling beyond very focused character pieces, the other is simply a side effect of bad (and more forgivably, new) writers outnumbering the more experienced ones.

      Really, having no OC's would be like having the entire stargate/StarTrek/DrWho series done without ever introducing new characters across episodes, much less new ones. They would be pretty silly shows right?

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    6. OK, just finished the chapter and so far I am liking what I see, but I must state my one major complaint about this story.


      Like half the other stories on here you authors insist on perpetually posting one little intro AND NOT PUTTING MORE UP FOR US TO REEEAAAD!

      *Fume*




      :D

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    7. LOOOOOOOOVE this. I especially love the name "Verity".

      I don't think I realized how long it was until I looked at it again. It just kinda flew by because I was so involved in it.

      Can't wait to read more! <3

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    8. uhm, i like the musketeer Diamond Dogs. explosive-loving scavengers are how i'd see them too. i'm confused, though, as to why ponies are so important a war-race like the griffons would go out of their way to try to rescue one. or something. there's a lot of questions and i'm sure you'll get to them, i just don't like waiting :)

      this is pretty good. thank you for sharing it.

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    9. Had an incredibly random dream last night I believe was inspired by this fic and want to write it down before i forget anything:

      Fluttershy goes missing, and I think the rest of the cast go searching for her (but the focus was on Rarity in the dream). She goes through a cave and finds a portal to a world full of humans, where the ponies, which are very rare on that planet, are being hunted by the government. After escaping from the cave, some humans trying to capture her for her magic and this weird scientist guy, she finds a village where Fluttershy is hiding thanks to the help of the villagers.

      Unfortunately the presence of the unicorn (probably due to magic being more valuable) causes some of the villagers to decide to capture her, at which point Fluttershy reveals that the villagers loyal to the ponies had also hired some help in protecting them

      ... at which point Captain Reynolds, Jayne and the remainder of the Serentiy crew turn up and beat the ever living crud out of the villagers. Not being able to contain any more awesome, my dream broke down and I woke up. But not before having a vague recollection of Twilight fighting a hand of blue.

      If for no other reason than it inspired such delirious awesome, i want to say thanks to the author! :D

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    10. Thank you all for the comments, it's a wonder to even have any! :D Awesome dream, too, Anon. Being an inspiration is something I've always hoped!

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    11. I really liked the characters and the direction of this story. I really wish it wasn't incomplete though :'(

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