*has eyes closed, but hears everything, then bolts up* Hey, you're awake now! I had this GREAT dream! There was ots of candy and cakes and this is kind of weird, but you and the others were too! We all had this great adventure where we had to save the world from this weird tall guy in purple, with a mustache...*keeps going on*
About what we could lose if this whole mission goes south, and I don't just mean us losing each other. What if this pushes Celestia over the edge, what if she starts killing ponies who oppose her right and left? I don't want to think about it, but I know I have to, because I might be the only one who can stop her.
I know you're all good with animals Fluttershy, but maybe it just LOOKS cute, but then it'll just leap up and bite your head off, along with anypony who gets too near and then we'd have to blow it up!
I was telling Pinkie that I wouldn't allow it to get close enough to bite your head off, even though the very idea is, well... Even crazy by Pinkie's standards.
[Pinkie said... I know you're all good with animals Fluttershy, but maybe it just LOOKS cute, but then it'll just leap up and bite your head off, along with anypony who gets too near and then we'd have to blow it up! Pinkie I just don;t get you]
Really? Why? Is there quicksand? I don't know WHY they call it quicksand, 'cause when you get caught, it takes a long time to get sucked in! They should really call it SLOWsand...
[k obvious question, would anypony here object if I either edited or omitted a few parts of the prior dialogue. I know that's part of my duties. Just letting y'all know
Well... You remember when Nightmare Moon was trying to stop you six from arriving here? Well, I set up some magical traps to stop her if I had to evacuate you six at once. Unfortunately, they aren't exactly defusable, so when she didn't set them off, I had to just leave them there.
Yeah, getting ripped apart at the cellular level and having the ashy remains of your body spread about a crater larger than Manehattan usually isn't very fun...
STAY AWAY FROM THAT FLOOR TILE! It's rigged with so much Z-4, that even Nightmare Moon at her most powerful would end losing a limb! I can't even imagine what it would do to you...
[Since it looks like a moment of OOC conversation, I'll point out that I just finished my submission to today's drawing assignment, and it's a lot better than I expected it to be, so you all should look for that when you're awake at 2:00 am. ~Display]
[Anyway...] *Whispering* Pinkie, keep quiet! We don't know who they are, and if you keep endangering our lives like this, I'll have to ask you to leave!
[I can't, to be honest. *sigh* why did I have to post that, no pony wants a cheater. Not after all the pain I've caused. I hate it to end like this. Good bye my love. ]
*Leans out of a second-story window* Go! Try to get out of here! If I can't defuse this thing, I can at least reset the timer to give us an hour or two!
Luna damn it! There's no way I can defuse this thing, I'm just going to have to hope that the max delay on this thing is long enough to let them get out of here alive...
Fluttershy, if you can hear this, I'll try to make it out alive, but your life is more important to me.
Fluttershy, I hope you can hear me, because this is important. I can keep resetting the timer on this thing to give you two more time. You have to get far away from here, for me, and for everypony else as well!
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[they ARE int the Everfree Forest...now who happens to live there? Of course, there is one ting about it that would be a might tricky...]
ReplyDelete{Fluttershy, you wake up and see me standing vigil.]
ReplyDelete[hey page 2 yay! Zecora and the Cockatrice that got stared down and won't bother us if they know what's good for them.]
ReplyDelete[Lol, I derped until I realized we hit page 2...]
ReplyDeleteOh, Fluttershy, you're awake, I was jut sitting here, thinking...
[might be awhile my sis stopped by for a few minutes. So sorry if i don't chat back]
ReplyDelete[I WAS thinking of just Zecora actually, since isn't exactly a threat]
ReplyDelete[FFFFUUUUUU- Confound these emotional moments, they drive me to misstype!]
ReplyDelete[Manticores might actually be a good plot point, you know, since they killed Nightwhisper?]
ReplyDelete[that's good...especially what happened the last time Fluttershy encountered one...of course this time, no thorn]
ReplyDelete[we ll not a threat, more as an aide possibly. I was just stating who we knew were in the Everfree forest that were mentioned in the show]
ReplyDelete[and the Manticores and Steven Magnet]
ReplyDelete@Torrential Rains [We're mostly keeping to the other side of the fourth wall, but we're here. :P]
ReplyDelete[*Inhales Deeply* ~Cool]
ReplyDelete[are we doing anything now?]
ReplyDelete[ello ello? k back now]
ReplyDeleteThinking about what Torrential, about us?
[ I haven't a clue what's going on outside the three of you're hiding in the forest, but I'm apparently awaiting some ponies in the castle. ]
ReplyDelete*has eyes closed, but hears everything, then bolts up* Hey, you're awake now! I had this GREAT dream! There was ots of candy and cakes and this is kind of weird, but you and the others were too! We all had this great adventure where we had to save the world from this weird tall guy in purple, with a mustache...*keeps going on*
ReplyDelete[wait so Steven Magnet is evil? Moustache!!!!!]
ReplyDeleteAbout what we could lose if this whole mission goes south, and I don't just mean us losing each other. What if this pushes Celestia over the edge, what if she starts killing ponies who oppose her right and left? I don't want to think about it, but I know I have to, because I might be the only one who can stop her.
ReplyDelete[No, the #25 can drive anyone to evil... Just look what it did to Spike!]
ReplyDelete[also gotta be at work at 5:30p est, just let y'all know.]
ReplyDelete[Three hours? I can finish this in TEN SECONDS FLAT! It's called everyone dying.]
ReplyDelete[it was a Strawberry Shortcake reference...only Pinkie...]
ReplyDelete[Hope I'll be done that quickly, long as the building ain't too messed up...]
ReplyDeleteIt's all cool]
ReplyDelete[I've never seen strawberry shortcake past seeing the end when Basil streamed pony on JustinTV]
ReplyDelete[Um, RP?]
ReplyDelete[ready when you are sweetie ♥]
ReplyDelete...then the watermelon EXPLODED! *stares* Everything ok guys?
ReplyDelete[I already started...]
ReplyDeleteK-k-killing ponies? Oh no oh no oh dear
ReplyDeleteT-t-then we must not fail. Shouldn't we start up again for the castle?
Nah.
ReplyDelete*Sits next to Fluttershy*
Let's just sit here like this a little longer...
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ReplyDelete*bounces in front of them* Sure! You know how much I love having fun adventures!
ReplyDelete*sigh*
ReplyDelete*leans up against Torrential, stares up at him then away at the bushes*
W-what was that I thought i heard something over there?
I'm on it.
ReplyDelete*Stands up*
Now you get to see just how good I am at my job...
*Flickers in and out of view then vanishes*
*stops and goes back* Maybe it's trying to talk to us!
ReplyDelete*wanders up* hi there little guy, you gave us such a fright. We thought you were a big scary [something]
ReplyDeleteHave you seen any ponies around here? [ooo this part fixes my fears of her being too OOC]
ReplyDelete*Fades back into view*
ReplyDeleteOh, I thought it might be a manticorn...
Man do I hate those things...
I know you're all good with animals Fluttershy, but maybe it just LOOKS cute, but then it'll just leap up and bite your head off, along with anypony who gets too near and then we'd have to blow it up!
ReplyDelete[I was just waiting to use that reference!
It'll be a hot day on the moon before that thing gets close enough to Fluttershy to hurt her!
ReplyDelete[you you beast how how could you!]
ReplyDeleteP-p-pinkie h-h-how could you do that?! A poor little animal should never get blown up. *snif*
*joins Flutteshy* Really, you can trust her!
ReplyDelete[got about 5 or so minutes to go. Doc is just about updated to this point. So less work for me later. YAY!]
ReplyDelete*jumps in front of [to be determined]*
ReplyDeleteSTOP! Torrential no!
It means us no harm, please just calm down.
Aww did Torrential scare you? Aww I'm sorry
*looks at her sympathetically* Aw, you know [i]I[/i] wouldn't do anything like that!
ReplyDeleteFluttershy, I never intended to hurt it, I was telling Pinkie that there's no way it would ever get close enough to hurt you.
ReplyDelete[see y'all in 3 - 4 hours hopefully I can insert myself into the story. Have fun :)]
ReplyDelete[See you later!]
ReplyDelete{all right, see you later also!]
ReplyDelete[wow I thought I missed alot when I seen 251 comments. Seems not... Well this note is to say I'm back and ready to continue.]
ReplyDeleteBut Torrential were you just trained to act and not question what you're doing 1st?
ReplyDeleteyou could've killed the poor dear....
[~Yay]
ReplyDeleteBut, I didn't even do anything...
ReplyDeleteI was telling Pinkie that I wouldn't allow it to get close enough to bite your head off, even though the very idea is, well... Even crazy by Pinkie's standards.
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ReplyDelete[silly blogger, derp on me will you!?]
ReplyDelete[I'm back too!]
ReplyDeleteBut Torrential how could a sweet little [animal name here] ever bite my head off silly?
ReplyDeleteI know you don;t want a repeat of what happened to Nightwhisper to happen to me. *smile*
Of course it's not gonna happen! And she sure doesn't want you trying to hurt any animals! *turns to Torrential*
ReplyDeleteBut Pinkie... You said...
ReplyDelete*Sigh*
This is going to be a long walk...
[Pinkie said... I know you're all good with animals Fluttershy, but maybe it just LOOKS cute, but then it'll just leap up and bite your head off, along with anypony who gets too near and then we'd have to blow it up! Pinkie I just don;t get you]
ReplyDelete[I doubt anypony really does lol]
ReplyDelete[Lol, this is what I was talking about! We sound like our characters playing themselves in a play!]
ReplyDelete[I'm just lost right now. I'll rework parts of this, someday...]
ReplyDelete*keeps bouncing for a bit* Hey, look!
ReplyDelete[the castle are we finally there?]
ReplyDeleteOh oh oh my it's the Castle of the Royal Pony Sisters, it's been so long since we've been here last. So many memories...
Uh, I think we might want to avoid the western side of the building...
ReplyDeleteUmm, why would we want to avoid that side Torrential. What do you know that you're not telling us?
ReplyDeleteReally? Why? Is there quicksand? I don't know WHY they call it quicksand, 'cause when you get caught, it takes a long time to get sucked in! They should really call it SLOWsand...
ReplyDeleteLet's just say, that side isn't exactly safe for us, even with me here...
ReplyDelete[dramatic music here... DUN DUN DUN!]
ReplyDelete[k obvious question, would anypony here object if I either edited or omitted a few parts of the prior dialogue. I know that's part of my duties. Just letting y'all know
ReplyDeletewell, umm if you say so Torrential. Maybe we should keep looking around the castle. Instead of trying to understand what you're not telling us....
ReplyDelete*gets right into Torrential's face* you kow...it's never good to keep secrets from each other, especially friends...or else you'l lose them FOREVEERR!
ReplyDelete(I just..had to]
Well... You remember when Nightmare Moon was trying to stop you six from arriving here? Well, I set up some magical traps to stop her if I had to evacuate you six at once. Unfortunately, they aren't exactly defusable, so when she didn't set them off, I had to just leave them there.
ReplyDeleteWell, that doesn't sound fun at all!
ReplyDeleteOh... N-N-Nightmare Moon *shudder* y-y-yes.
ReplyDelete[I fell off a cliff but I'm okay! I think...]
Yeah, getting ripped apart at the cellular level and having the ashy remains of your body spread about a crater larger than Manehattan usually isn't very fun...
ReplyDeleteWell umm now that we've cleared that up. Maybe... we should keep looking around?
ReplyDelete*comforts Fluttershy* She's back to just being Luna now, so it's ok! SHe's certainly not scary anymore! I think...
ReplyDeleteYeah...
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't recommend going anywhere without me, I had this whole place booby trapped. So Pinkie, I REALLY don't recommend bouncing around.
Y-y-yes Pinkie, I know. Just *sigh* all that darkness... It was the [night force? I forget what caused Luna to turn evil]
ReplyDeletethat turned Luna into that evil creature... Just bad memories, I never really wanted to return here to be honest.
ReplyDeleteBut we must to help save all ponykind from her..
[It was the thought that no one appreciated her for making the night.]
ReplyDeleteI can't help it, it just happens! Besides, I'd NEVER go there, *points* there, *points again* And especially NOT there! *poins one more time*
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ReplyDelete[I can still salvage what i said last, remove a small section and... awesome!]
ReplyDeleteWell, I just recommend that you do-
ReplyDeleteSTAY AWAY FROM THAT FLOOR TILE!
It's rigged with so much Z-4, that even Nightmare Moon at her most powerful would end losing a limb! I can't even imagine what it would do to you...
[I thought that was C4 not Z-4]
ReplyDeleteA limb? I'm not a tree, silly! *steps onit and shoots up, still on the tile* WHEEE!! Hey, I thought this WOULDN'T be fun!
ReplyDelete[yes, she's the only one that could get away with that]
[you can't kill Pinkie, I can prove it too. *evil grin*]
ReplyDeleteUmm, Pinkie, Torrential we probably should try and find the Rebels [?????]
ReplyDeleteNo telling when the guards may come searching for you my love.
[I meant to say Z-4, and OHMYGOSHPINKIEYOUSORANDOM.jpg]
ReplyDelete[what is z-4? I've never heard of that. ZZZZZZZZzz gosh I feel like I'm falling asleep]
ReplyDeleteUh...
ReplyDelete...
How is that even possible...
...
Ok, Pinkie, you are officially the craziest pony I've ever met...
*floats down with a small parachute, then lands*
ReplyDeleteSounds good!
[where she got it, it is not for you to question!]
[I said Z-4 because it's implied that it's a magical explosive.]
ReplyDelete[Go ahead and take a power nap if you want, tonight might be a long night.]
ReplyDelete[AHHH google just had BMWs lemme fix that in the draft then]
ReplyDelete[if I go to sleep I ain't getting up. Like i said on page 1 I was up through 3am updating the doc. So kinda tired. I'll live. for now :)]
ReplyDelete[I'll see long long I can do this for. I'll let y'all know.]
ReplyDelete[BMWs?]
ReplyDelete[BMW Z-4 I googled what Z-4 was, I didn't know prior what it was.
ReplyDelete[Black Magic Women. It started blaring Santana in its speakers, which caused things to start getting screwy. Also yes this is DN.]
ReplyDeletePinkie, maybe you can survive that, but I doubt Fluttershy or I could, so for the love of Luna, DON'T DO THAT AGAIN!
ReplyDelete*shakes head* Of course I won't! It's only funny the FIRST time it happens!
ReplyDelete[yep think I'll be good, needed some AC~DC]
ReplyDeleteThat's not very reassuring Pinkie...
ReplyDelete[Good to hear it Fluttershy!]
Umm, sorry to remind you 2 but could we find the Lunar Rebellion? I really don't want to be here much longer. *shiver*
ReplyDelete[may reword/remove I ain't said nothing for a fortnight. ]
*finds some stairs* Hey, maybe they're up here!
ReplyDeleteWell, I don't think we're going to find anything on the main floors, let's see if there's anything on a lower one.
ReplyDeleteWait, should we go up or down?
ReplyDeleteYou know what? I'm just going to trust Pinkie's senses on this one.
*goes up* HELLOOOO? Anypony here?
ReplyDelete[Oh my god... That Dash-Fly Away From Here PMV made me shed many tears of manliness... You HAVE to watch it too!]
ReplyDelete[Also, the second PMV will make you laugh Pinkie.]
ReplyDelete*cautiously follows Pinkie and Torrential up the stairs* Umm guys, wha.. what was that?
ReplyDelete*sound of scurrying hooves*
I don;t think we're alone anymore, eep!
I've got this.
ReplyDelete*Fades out of view*
Don't worry, I'll be just up ahead if you need me!
*Goes off to investigate the source of the sound*
[weird...I JUST finished watching those 2 videos! Now, which one of us is SUPPOSED to be Pinkie again...? lol]
ReplyDeleteI'm with you Fluttershy, but maybe they want to be friends, whoever it is!
[I'm not ashamed to say that the first vid made me cry manly tears.]
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ReplyDelete[oh yeah, I did come close]
ReplyDelete[Since it looks like a moment of OOC conversation, I'll point out that I just finished my submission to today's drawing assignment, and it's a lot better than I expected it to be, so you all should look for that when you're awake at 2:00 am. ~Display]
ReplyDelete[Anyway...]
ReplyDelete*Whispering*
Pinkie, keep quiet! We don't know who they are, and if you keep endangering our lives like this, I'll have to ask you to leave!
*eyes go wide, then puts her head down stlightly, with her hair twitching slightly* Oh...ok...
ReplyDelete[yes, he hit on the one thing to kind of placate her...getting left out of something]
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry Pinkie, but we aren't all able to survive magical explosions like you.
ReplyDeleteAnd I REALLY don't feel like getting blown up today.
ReplyDeleteUhh... hmmm oh uhh... g-guys oh guys. Wha-what is THAT?
ReplyDeleteHuh, what are yo-
ReplyDeleteOH.
THIS COULD BE BAD.
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ReplyDelete[hope my comment on that board doesn't effect us.... I was afraid you'd see my cheating ways.]
ReplyDelete[Nah, It's cool.]
ReplyDelete[oh I'm so glad, I wouldn't want to separate us. Wonder how many will walk in here and wonder wtf is going on?]
ReplyDelete[Here? You mean the other topic?]
ReplyDelete[cheating ways, yep. here]
ReplyDelete[Oh Fluttershy, you always were the kind of pony to have multiple relationships... Lol]
ReplyDelete[oh geez, I'm gonna go remove that again]
ReplyDelete[Remove what?]
ReplyDelete[no that's not how I want that to be. One Stallion pony, no cheating stay true. Now go remove that...]
ReplyDelete[nothing.... ]
ReplyDelete[Lol, I can just imagine Fluttershy with multiple families...]
ReplyDelete[I can't, to be honest. *sigh* why did I have to post that, no pony wants a cheater. Not after all the pain I've caused. I hate it to end like this. Good bye my love. ]
ReplyDelete[NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO]
ReplyDelete[Wait what
ReplyDeleteI go to the store to buy popcorn and I come back to drama?
...Well, at least the popcorn has a use now. ~DN]
[I simply cannot live after I've wronged you Torrential, I will never forget what you've done... good bye]
ReplyDelete*shakes off her slight funk, then turns in the direction Fluttershy indicated* I don't see anything now...
ReplyDelete[YOU WILL LOVE ME]
ReplyDelete[why did I seriously start to tear up writing that last part?]
ReplyDelete[YOU. WILL. LOVE ME!]
ReplyDelete[It doesn't count because that was OOC! Your argument is invalid!]
ReplyDelete[nah no more pain. save that for Celestia]
ReplyDelete[well let's get back to the REAL rp, for that thing I can't discuss here's sake and us]
ReplyDelete[What is this, I don't even...]
ReplyDelete[join us next time on General Horsepital]
ReplyDelete[Oh, that. Yes, for it's sake, we should continue.]
ReplyDelete[oh geez that was great T.O.! Here I thought you left looking for me, when I left ]
ReplyDelete[Onwards! For Operation: Baww!]
ReplyDelete[don't tell me you didn't enjoy that now? Shows I'm awake now! yay!]
ReplyDelete[I think you mean *Takes deep breath* ~yay]
ReplyDeleteUmm I know I heard something over there Pinkie. Are you sure you didn't see anything?
ReplyDeleteI recognize that sound...
ReplyDeleteWe should go. NOW
Uhh umm Torrential where are we going now? What about finding the Lunar Rebellion???
ReplyDelete[yes, fluttershy, I'm here...]
ReplyDeleteWell, I suggest you two get out of here as fast as you possibly can. I'm going to see if I can buy you some time.
ReplyDeleteUmm...I don't THINK so...of course, I haven't had any carrots for a while and they're supposed to help you see better..*hears Torrential*
ReplyDeleteOh, well I guess we should then! *turns quickly and bounds down the stairs*
Yeah, It's generally a good idea to run from a balefire bomb...
ReplyDeleteYeah... I'm pretty sure that if I can't defuse this thing, most of this forest is going to go up in flames...
ReplyDelete*quickly follows Pinkie outside* Torrential?! W-W-What's going on?
ReplyDeleteTorrential?!?!
T-t-the whole forest but what about? oh-oh oh no!
ReplyDelete*Leans out of a second-story window*
ReplyDeleteGo! Try to get out of here!
If I can't defuse this thing, I can at least reset the timer to give us an hour or two!
*grabs Fluttershy's hoof and keeps going faster, straining her muscles*
ReplyDeleteI don't think I wanna see THIS bonfire!
Luna damn it!
ReplyDeleteThere's no way I can defuse this thing, I'm just going to have to hope that the max delay on this thing is long enough to let them get out of here alive...
Fluttershy, if you can hear this, I'll try to make it out alive, but your life is more important to me.
[wait what does italicized text mean?]
ReplyDelete[My thoughts]
ReplyDelete[thank you wait, nevermind I got it now :)]
ReplyDelete[So do some princesses go boom?]
ReplyDelete[got mail back from Twi has she contacted you? If not I sent a mail requesting that]
ReplyDelete[oh no not yet, I have a feeling that'll be awhile.]
ReplyDelete[No Brony, no 'sploding princesses... Yet. SUPER FORESHADOWING MODE ACTIVATED.]
ReplyDelete[Yeah, I got a message from Twi, but just a really short one that didn't ask anything about the project.]
ReplyDelete[okay, I just wanted to make sure you got one then. I wasn't sure what role if any they were to have]
ReplyDelete[aww... all this building up and no boom? I am disappoint]
ReplyDelete*looks at her as they keep running* Hey, I'm sure he'll be all right...
ReplyDeleteI'm only going to get seven minutes out of this thing.
ReplyDeleteUnless...
*looks up at Pinkie* I, I, I know he will Pinkie.
ReplyDeleteI just worry, what'll happen if... I'd not consider that possibility. Be safe Torrential *she beckons*
Fluttershy, I hope you can hear me, because this is important. I can keep resetting the timer on this thing to give you two more time. You have to get far away from here, for me, and for everypony else as well!
ReplyDelete*keeps going, until she looks around and stops* Oh, wow! We're...out of the forest now!
ReplyDelete[sorry but what does bold italicized mean?
ReplyDelete[I was trying to use telepathy to speak with you.]
ReplyDelete[thank you]
ReplyDeleteI can hear you Torrential, I'm not entirely sure how. Hope to Luna you make it out safe.
ReplyDelete[Lol, I love how basically every other pony vid I end up watching on youtube is yours]
ReplyDelete[it's the tags man, the tags! I don't get how i have 530k views and near 600 subbers. This shit is nuts!]
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could get somepony to help me? SOMEPONY YOU KNOW WHO'S REALLY FAST?
ReplyDelete[wow them tags worked YAY! oh Dash? I hope or Pinkie?]
ReplyDelete[gimme a few I think i need start a new doc for our story]
ReplyDelete[Oh god, another one? Docs, docs everywhere...]
ReplyDelete[mad lagging, it's getting big!]
ReplyDelete[Let me do it, I'll compile them into a collection]
ReplyDelete