Saturday, April 16, 2011

Story: To the Nth Dimension

[Random][Shipping] DashxPinkie has been done a bunch, but throw a random tag into the mix and...you get this!

Author: Homfrog
Description: Rainbow Dash flies faster than she’s ever flown before and gets trapped beyond normal space-time.  She doesn’t think she’ll ever be able to go that fast again. Strong DashiePie. 
To The Nth Dimension

Additional Tags: DashiePie, sugar rush, fourth dimension, multiple wingboner, Princess Celestia

34 comments:

Anonymous said...

You can never have enough Rainbow Pie. There hasn't been enough of it lately.

Anonymous said...

I was almost expecting Dash to meet one weird red-and-gold clad human... you know, one Barry Allen.

Anonymous said...

>multiple wingboner

Ud the Imp said...

Is this sorta like a pseudo-sequel to the one shot "Opener of Ways"?

Hikuro14 said...

ponies + cocaine = this?

Great story, loved the comedy and the romance.

Zarkanorf said...

> multiple wingboner, Princess Celestia

And now I'm questioning whether celestial beings ALSO get aroused.

Anonymous said...

I want the Doctor's cupcakes so I can break physics too! :P

Prominence said...

@Ud the Imp

Would be interesting. If not, it needs one. I liked that fic.

Anonymous said...

"Don't eat those cupcakes, Rainbow Dash. You're not a Pinkie Pie, you're a Rainbow Dash. You don't even know what a fourth spatial dimension is. ...Silly Rainbow Dash."

Anonymous said...

this is so trippy

Anonymous said...

I liked the idea of Dash on psychedelic cupcakes!
Stories where the love is revealed are my favorite!

Homfrog said...

Thanks for the feedback, bronys! It'll help me get even better as a writer!

Oh, @Sethisto, that's not the title. You musta been really tired or something, but it's "To the Nth Dimension" not "The Nth dimention". Yaaay~

Anonymous said...

@Zarkanorf "And now I'm questioning whether celestial beings ALSO get aroused."

It probably blinds everyone who sees it.

K said...

Okay, that ending had me laughing my ass off. Well done, good sir. Well done indeed. Oh man, it still makes me laugh when I think about it.

Anonymous said...

> everything is right with the world!
Is that an evangelion reference?

> “C’mooooon, Dashie, we can come back laaatteerr...”

HAHAHA

Anonymous said...

It was alright, but Pinkie's hyper personality makes all Pinkie/Dash stories feel kind of forced. Pinkie Pie just doesn't seem like somepony who could actually be in a serious relationship of any sort.

Anonymous said...

That story was so random it made me high.

Oh my gosh I'm so high right now! YEEEEEAAAAHHH!!!

(It was very good ;D )

Introbulus said...

That was um...

Dawwworthy. o.o Wow.

Also, slight typo.

She thrust the thoughts into the back of her head and kept smiling, determined to treat this customer "properlyl", whoever or whatever he was.

Homfrog said...

@Introbulus

Weird, that doesn't appear to be a line in my story at all...

Naxts said...

Well! This certainly was an interesting, if not strange story. I guess that's why it has a random tag to it.
Honestly now, It seems more like a normal story then it does shipping. There's like, very little shipping parts to it and it seems to come very randomly. "I'm explaining everything about this to you btw i love you"

Although the shipping was short and random. It still made for a charming story. I liked it =)

MyLittleBrony said...

>void
>white

Looks like someone flunked Physics in elementary school.

Brian said...

Wait, why were Twilight and Celestia wearing monocles? o_O

Homfrog said...

@MyLittleBrony

No, see, it's a fourth-dimensional space. It's toroidal in nature. So any photons that get in just continue in the same direction forever, looping around to where they started, meaning it's white.

Anyways it was voidier before Dash opened her eyes and collapsed the wave-function.

MyLittleBrony said...

@Homfrog

The fourth dimension is time and anti-time. Here, and at all above dimensions, the illusion of passing time does not exist. Photons do not simply just "travel through" here... and to make everything appear white to dash... no wait, the could be explained by her appearing in the forth-dimensional centre of the universe. But yes, still, if you claim they they "loop"... how can Dash see anything? She must "absorb" some of them to be able to see the whiteness. Also, the light-beams that hit her body would lose wavelengths, and appear as coloured. Yes, they'd bounce of her, but still interact with incoming light, strengthening and weakening some wavelengths in those beams, making it coloured. And as I said first, time doesn't exist here, so how would she be able to experience it? Everything would just happen at the same time. Now, I haven't read any further, so I don't know what happens, and can therefore not complain about how wrong that is.

But... it's an interesting story so far, sorry for being a silly messerschmitt. :3

Homfrog said...

@MyLittleBrony

Well the cloud going "outside" of there never really closed until the end, so there was ambient light streaming in. I'm sure the light would have gone dark if something was still in there to absorb the photons when the cloud disappeared. And as for the whole "time" thing, it's kind of like, there's a separate continuum for this fourth spatial dimension. Anything that happens outside of it appears to happen all at once inside, and anything that happens inside is compressed together in the same way for people on the outside. Of course, it's not a vacuum, so sound can transfer through the hole, and there's air in there from where the hole opened up and it leaked through. Time is happening for Rainbow Dash as best as she can process it, and her brain adjusts gradually, much like learning to swim. I'm sure she'd eventually be having infinity+1-member orgies with herself, given enough training.

IDRK, it's just blatherskithe, elaboration and whatnot.

MyLittleBrony said...

@Homfrog

Dude, it's cool. Like, nevermind. I just finished reading it and... instead of facepalming myself to death I reminded myself of that this is nothing more than a silly fanfiction, and that I really have to stop being a constant over-speculating besserwisser.
It's just that I get so excited as soon as science is involved...

Homfrog said...

@MyLittleBrony

I agree :D Science can be a flustery fanatical business. No hard feelings, I'm just trying to rationalize the world we weave. Your icon seems a bit invocative also, and it appears to me to be prompting more conversation, so perhaps that's what going on with my mental personality-image of you. I do that sometimes.

I'm glad you liked it (assuming you did) and I hope to see your comments and Fluttersrs-face on future stories of mine!

Anonymous said...

>Pinkie feeding Dash ungodly sugar muffins
>Dash tripping balls
>Time and space starting to shit themselves
>whatthefuckamireading.jpg

Taktuk said...

Yay. Pinkie Pie getting all scientific and the reference to "Wrinkle in Time" was awesome. Or was it Sleator's "The Boy Who Reversed Himself?" I'm tired. Good stuff!

Wierdplatformer said...

I'm not one for filly shipping, but this is quite good.

BitTune said...

@Anonymous

HOMFROG BEEYOTCH! XD

Shadowbanebrony said...

AHAHAHAHAHA WHAT DID I JUST READ!?!?!?!?! :D

banannagram said...

That was funny and cute and made a lot of sense and some nonsense and was random and stuff and all. You could've made a smidgen more sense explaining the physics through Pinkie Pie though.

FreezingShock said...

This was really, really weird. But it's PinkieDash, so what the hell, I'll roll with it.

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