Friday, November 18, 2011

Story: My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic (Update Sequel Part 7!)

[Crossover] A TF2 Fic! It's about time!


Author:
Axle and Wheel
Description: After a mishap in a magic duel, the ponies are transported to the Team Fortress universe. They'll take the classes places while The Engineer tries to find a way to get them home.
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 1
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 2
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 3
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 4
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 5
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 6
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 7
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 8
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 9
My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic Chapter 10

Changing Worlds Part 1
Changing Worlds Part 2
Changing Worlds Part 3
Changing Worlds Part 4
Changing Worlds Part 5
Changing Worlds Part 6
Changing Worlds Part 7 (New!)

My Little Fortress Audio Book Series

Additional Tags:  2Fort, Team Fortress 2, Hats.

78 comments:

GameBuddy said...

Oh, God. There goes my afternoon.

Anonymous said...

Better than having human female classes ('cept for soldier, his case, just human) as an option.

WANT NAO VALVE

2007excalibur2007 said...

WHY.jpg

Anonymous said...

Sorry for repeating and for being off topic here, but which was the fanfic that began with Equestria in the middle of a drought and Rainbow Dash struggling to send scarce rain to some areas?

Anonymous said...

Yes. This pleases me greatly.

Anonymous said...

Oh, that made me remember that video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hinqInEjjJw
I don't think it was posted on ED but it's Pony/TF2 related and really good and should be posted but that's like my opinion.

Kill me, I'm a PONY said...

Any bets on how long until there is the first hat drop. And who obsesses over them?

Daffodil said...

@Kill me, I'm a PONY

Fancy Fedora and Rarity.

Also shout out to my Pony Brigade bros on TF2.

Anonymous said...

So this is what happens if you cross the streams! :D

Darth Equus said...

Spelling needs a bit of improvement.

Anonymous said...

This is an interesting idea, but it could definitely use a proof reader. The punctuation in particular could use some improvement. It also relies a little too much on the reader already knowing who and what everyone is (but that's normal for fanfiction).

nova_25 said...

That's surprisingly entertaining. :)

It's simple, interesting, and involve video games. :D

A good mix, though maybe a little short... but maybe it's better that way, as a style.

Putuk said...

I once drew Derpy as the Demoman before.
Odd.
Well, I guess she'd like an eyepatch.

Anonymous said...

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Myst said...

thats it......noooo i need more.

Also by the way this is pure awesome!

alafax said...

There goes the rest of my day, Epic.

Still wonderin' where the Enemy Heavy Uber Rush kicks in.

sleepingcobrox said...

Epicness detected from this fanfic :)

FrostV952 said...

hmmm...
I'm wondering why "hats" is in the tags...
because the story doesn't say anything about hats...

No, i'm joking. I've got hats in TF2 too, hats are awesome, lol.

Anonymous said...

Freakin brilliant crossover!

Ion Storm said...

Bookmarked.

I just got off a 4 or 5 hour session on the Pony servers.

Kill me, I'm a PONY said...

@Daffodil

I think the author may have seen your choice of hat :O

Also: HATS AND PISS! YES!

Dave said...

THIS IS GONNA BE LEGEN-

(Wait for it, and I hope you're not lactose intolerant cause the next part is...)

Andrew said...

This is really good, looking forward to the next chapter.

Kill me, I'm a PONY said...

@Kill me, I'm a PONY

Yeah, he totally did

Anonymous said...

Why hasn't this updated in so long?!

Anonymous said...

we need a tf2 mod which adds pony characters as well as human characters so your on the blu team you get killed you switch to engie and get a 50% chance of spawning as applejack or the engie. although red team gets no ponies =P
(D4SHTH3R4INB0W)

Anonymous said...

Where can I download those icons?!

Anonymous said...

wow... didnt see this one coming!
its good, yes, but still...
i just absolutyly did NOT expect to see this!

zeb516 said...

Give us more freaking chapters@!@!##$%@^#$%@#$%@#^@#%^%@^$#@^@#%^@%$%#$-er

Anonymous said...

Haven't read it yet, but now I'm uber pumped.
Been waiting for something like this for a while. :DD

ryan said...

Oh god.
"...5 ponies and a rabbit today!"
I love that line. A wonderful story so far.

Anonymous said...

I was hoping for this to update :D

Tyrant Celestia said...

SPAH SAPPIN MAH PONIES

markocezar said...

Applejack=Engineer! Matches 99%... so it is 20% cooler!

Anonymous said...

Chapter 5 proves that AJ is best pony. Just like Engineer is best class.

MaskOfData said...

This was the first fanfic I read, and I've been waiting for this update for what seems like a really long time.

Thanks for writing such a great piece of fiction.

VFX Kid said...

Sweet, an update! I really enjoyed all chapters of it. Can't wait for Chapter 6!

Anonymous said...

If anyone wants those images for their HUD, here's the link of the download:
http://www.gamebanana.com/guis/25874

Nova25 said...

>Tomorrow's Sunday. Muffin night at home. Dinky loves those nights.
-Yay for Dinky :D ...and the Sunday Muffins !

...It had been a while since the last Part, but it's still pretty good. :)

Anonymous said...

This needs more regular updates :(

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, i wonder when the next one will come out :D

FlutterSky said...

Just read the new update and yup ENJOYED IT :D

Bongo said...

Poor Trixie. Being a Medic can be a hard time, whether they never protect you or annoy the living hell out of you by spamming the 'MEDIC!' button.

Sunlight Gleam said...

Chapter 6 was not as enjoyable as other chapters, but still pretty good. Having played the Medic more than any class in TF2 it was strange to me, when I play TF2 people don't reject my heals. I did like the beginning where it turns out she has only killed 5 people in a week. When Trixie chose medic at the beginning I saw this coming, but it was a little different than what I thought. My favorite part of the entire story is the part where The Scout is revealed to be a Brony, and Rainbow Dash plays TF2.

Anonymous said...

What is this I don't even

PewnyPL said...

*Looks at picture*
This is Scout, Rainbows make me cry

nigel thornberry said...

love pony's and tf2! but there is no Aussie brony server for me to play on :(

Anonymous said...

How long are you willing to put off Pinkie's ubercharge and the "I am bulletproof!" Line? I know you're going to use them.

Echo said...

I liked it, but I think you've relied too heavily on readers having pre-existing familiarity with the source materials. Also, you've got persistent mechanical errors, most notably with you dialogue.
Correct: "It works like this," she said.
Incorrect: "It works like this" she said.
Also incorrect: "It works like this." She said.

A style guide or a good proofreader would greatly improve this story.

Echo said...

@Echo
Bleh, "your dialogue."

Anonymous said...

I read the first chapter and why do I get the feeling that the mane cast will return from this adventure obsessed with hats....

decapman said...

I never thought i would see the day where Pinkie Pie was a heavy, always thought she was a scout cause she jumps around so much

Hrwking said...

This was awesome wtb more :D now I have to play some tf2

MrSevens said...

To be honest, it's kind of lacking. I think the only reason this has 5 stars is because it's the only TF2 crossover here. Well not for long. I'LL BE RIGHT BACK!

Aipom 93 said...

This is amazing, the story is awesome and you capture the characters very well. The only thing that I question is the Fluttershy killing people, yes she easily could have shot that sniper because it was about to shoot the BLU sniper, but then just going with it from there on is a little unbelievable, but that is just me nitpicking. I have one question though: Why BLU team? I'm not complaining, just wondering.

Dusty the Royal Janitor said...

I'll be honest... I feel that it's kinda lacking.
Character and plot development seem very sparse and they don't really feel like they flow very naturally. A lot of things feel particularly forced and while I like the general idea behind a lot of the story, it feels like too many characters are just too easygoing given everything that's happening. The ponies are too calm in the face of being zapped to another universe and then shoved into some surreal, gory, confused, and yet horrifically comedic battle, while the TF2 characters are like "yeah. Talking ponies. 'Scool."

The story, I dunno, it just feels lacking. Granted that makes it sorta feel in a way like TF2 I guess. I've only played it a few times with friends but I still have no idea what the story really is... and believe me I've looked high and low for what the story might be. I'm not really sure there is one. That being said, while it might "fit" with the original article, remember that the point of a story, fanfiction in particular, is to give a narrative that expands upon an idea. And aside from throwing ponies into the mix, this really doesn't do a good job of that.

I'll admit, the humor is rather spot on. I believe the words "horrifyingly comedic" that I used earlier sum up TF2 rather well, and this certainly delivers on that feel. How well it mixes with ponies... I'm not really sure. The fact of the matter is the story is too flimsy and the characters too bland all of a sudden to really give all that much of an impact. I suspect what MrStevens said is right. The only reason this is so popular and has five stars is simply because it's a TF2 crossover.

In short, I really think this would do better as an actual mod for the game, rather than a fanfiction. The story is pretty much nonexistent and too full of character inconsistencies and plot holes to really make a good fanfic. Two stars.

Jazz said...

Finished part 8. Now, the story needs to be proof read. Rather than that, it was funny reading how ponies and the mercs of TF2 interact with each other. Three stars

Edwin B. said...

I'm still wondering why Dr Hax hasn't shown up to throw a monitor at pinky pie for using her pinky senses to keep killing the spy

SecondJack said...

At first I was all like.. wat is dis i don evan?
Then after reading I was all like.. I do not regret what I've just read.

ChaosDX1 said...

A TF2 story crossover?
Before I start reading I just want to ask: Why do these two universes fit so well?

I'll read this when I get time. Promise.

Wolflover221 said...

I thought twilight might of been the sniper...also reminded me of a picture of twilight as the sniper yelling a comment along the lines of "pop your head around the corner wanker!"

2pikachuno said...

WHERE CAN I GET THOSE COOL ADDONS FOR TEAM FORTRESS 2???

Aluzird said...

Right here.
http://www.mlptf2mods.com/

DreadedCandiru2 said...

First off, let me congratulate the author on giving us a credible reason why someone as smart as the Derpy we see here is regarded as stupid...quite simply, she's more or less the Grimlock that appears in IDW's comics continuity: someone with a fine mind hampered by a faulty speech algorithm/stroke-riddled Broca's area.

Also, now that Saaaaxtooooon Haaaaalllllllle has taken over where Team BLU left off, RED's woes are just beginning.

MegaPatron said...

woo! im liking this FanFic!

MegaPatron said...

My Favorite class is sniper now....

Shadow Heart said...

And so the story closes on a good note. . .

I LOVE IT /)^3^(\

Supreme Commander of Brony Mountain said...

and then Saxton Hale was a Brony... and he likes Fluttershy...
Im ok with this :3

The Bowbina said...

SAXTON HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALE!!!!!







PROTERTY DAMAGE!!!

Warp said...

Yes. A billion and 9 classes- er, times, yes.

Lunar Solace said...

This is one of the greatest stories I have ever read.

parker said...

Short. But awesome!!! 4/5. (just cause the spelling mistakes)

jspang said...

when is Changing Worlds going to be released into the wild?

RedWolfe said...

he said changing worlds would start on january 7th or 9th, i dont remember which but it may be pushec back =(

Pinkamena Pie said...

I loves sandwiches! who doesn't love sandwiches? I love those almost more then CUPCAKES! :D

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