Description: It's career day at Ponyville Elementary. All of the little ponies are so excited... so why doesn't Apple Bloom want Applejack to be there?
Cutesy Buttons?What happened to Dinky Hooves?~Scratch
Never heard of Dinky Hooves, so I made up a likely sounding name.
@BobcatDinky Hooves is a mini derpy unicorn. (Her daughter) seen in the first cutie mark episode
This was a great little story XD I enjoyed it alot
Ah. Well, assume that Dinky is in a different class. And Derpy's allowed to have more than one relative. Yes, that'll stick...
Loved this story! The writing was excellent; you do very nice dialog and it makes everypony feel very in-character. The plot was cute, and I appreciated all the little meme references.Plus, I always love to see Derpy portrayed as having transcendental wisdom that goes over all the other ponies' heads. 5/5 stars!
Applejack is A LOT dumber and more confrontational in this fanfic then she ever was in the show, 2 stars for poor character representation.
Adorable, funny, and heartwarming. Great job.
This needs the I SELL APPLES AND APPLE ACCESSORIES image.
Great story. 5/5
Before I read this, I sliced up and microwaved an apple.The combination of warm food and warm fuzzy feelings made this a well-wasted 10 minutes.
"Butterguy", that killed me
"Apples and apple accessories"-right there, i died
"You think ah don't know a challenge when ah hear it? 'Cause ah won't have y'all challengin' my ability to notice a challenge when ah hear it! In fact, that sounds like a challenge right now!"I. Love. You.
@AnonymousSame here. :D
I love these stories that are written like actual episodes and successfully capture the spirit of the show.
I think it needs more apples!
The adorable randomness is palpable! Ollie Jump? Is he a brony, or a "brahny"? King of the Hill reference? And Derpy is giving away ponies' mail!? Jeezum crow! So many silly one liners and situations that I couldn't help but giggle nearly the whole time. All that being said, the sloppy ending wasn't satisfying, and this wasn't a good representation of Applejack's character. Other than that, fantastic!
It was cute but I wasn't crazy about the idea of applejack being uneducated and such since the only real reason for thinking that is the way she talks. The ending was kinda messy and the entire story felt very disjointed.That all said great references and very silly stuff tho derpy got another kid?cute attempt and i wouldn't mind seeing more though maybe the prereaders can give more help next time.
Best part of this story: Scootaloo's dad.
@Present PerfectThe other comments made me kinda reluctant to check it out, but seeing an actual Scootarelative is gonna be worth it.