• Story: Love is Abloom

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    [Shipping] Spike and Applebloom?! That's not how you spell Rarity!

    Author: DarkJester
    Description: A romantic tale of a love-struck pony and her attempts to impress the dragon of her dreams.
    Love is Abloom
    Tuesday, March 29, 2011 op
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    36 comments:

    1. ZarkanorfMarch 29, 2011 at 1:31 PM

      Rarity and Applebloom! SETHISTO, APPLEBLOOM IS A MINOR.

      HOW COULD YOU!

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    2. pollardyMarch 29, 2011 at 1:32 PM

      spike and rarity is the one true ship. or tsundere twilight forcing him to clean everything in a maid outfit.

      also zark technicly a baby dragon could be same age as the pony's he is alot smarter then cutie crusaders.

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    3. ZarkanorfMarch 29, 2011 at 1:38 PM

      @pollardy
      I was saying that "Rarity X Applebloom" was unacceptable, my fine sir. Sorry fo the confusion.

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    4. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 1:43 PM

      D'awww that was cute and pretty believable that it could be an actual episode. It wasn't overly romance novel-y, which I appreciate. I never read these slash fics but I enjoyed that.

      Keep up the good work!

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    5. pollardyMarch 29, 2011 at 1:47 PM

      @Zarkanorf

      indeed, now that just wierd

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    6. NaxtsMarch 29, 2011 at 3:13 PM

      Aww! That was a really cute story.
      It kindda reminded me of something similar that happened to me when i was younger, although it wasen't dramatic as this was. It still brought some good memories.

      Thanks for the story, made me smile =)

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    7. Desert RoseMarch 29, 2011 at 3:30 PM

      What the hay?! My story isn't posted yet?

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    8. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 3:32 PM

      That is the cutest picture I have ever seen on ED.
      Well, maybe tied with that Baby AJ & Bloomberg drawing.
      And the story was nice too :D

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    9. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 4:14 PM

      This makes total sense for some reason.

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    10. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 4:33 PM

      "Spike and Applebloom?! That's not how you spell Rarity and Applejack!"


      Fixed that for you

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    11. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 4:58 PM

      Short and sweet and incredibly adorable. I loved this. Great job.

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    12. TwinkletailMarch 29, 2011 at 5:16 PM

      i friggen' love applebloom/spike fics. they make such an adorable couple, even when they don't end up an actual couple. great job, very much enjoyed this

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    13. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 5:49 PM

      I enjoyed it, but this story really could have benefited from proofreading. There were quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. Aside from that, good job.

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    14. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 6:43 PM

      Loved it, esp the end. EEEeeeeeyup!

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    15. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 7:56 PM

      I liked it, but there was just one line that really bugged me.

      "Applebloom sweat-dropped."

      Really? Sweat-dropped? Are we in an anime all of a sudden?

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    16. DarkJesterMarch 29, 2011 at 8:04 PM

      @Anonymous
      All my stories go through a three-step proofreading process. First me, then my friend, then me again. So errors are bound to slip through.

      If you want to help me out, please point them out for me and I will fix them post-haste. Thanks!

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    17. DarkJesterMarch 29, 2011 at 8:11 PM

      @Anonymous
      Embarrassing that slipped through the cracks. >.>; Thanks for catching it!

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    18. DarkJesterMarch 29, 2011 at 9:11 PM

      @Anonymous
      It was actually proofread twice. Once by me and then by a friend.

      If you or anyone else could make a note of the errors you found, I will fix them post-haste. Thanks!

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    19. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 9:44 PM

      Eh, what's wrong with sweatdrops? I love 'em. Anime has such cleverly effective ways of conveying emotions! Anyway, adorably adorable and believable story! :3

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    20. DarkJesterMarch 29, 2011 at 10:31 PM

      @Anonymous
      Well I've been taught that anime expressions don't do so well when described with physical words. Besides that, FiM isn't even an anime. :P It's just a old habit of mine I'm still trying to break!

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    21. Poooony!March 30, 2011 at 12:30 AM

      eeeh, Spike is a baby dragon. He isn't that mature...

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    22. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 10:40 AM

      Eh by dragon standards a baby could still be 35.

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    23. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 12:44 PM

      That story made me d'aaawwww

      lol spike too young for a relationship but still loves rarity as much as apple bloom loved him.

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    24. EwyndallApril 2, 2011 at 3:14 PM

      In regards of Spike I think it's a bit off how mature and respnsibple he is acting and handling the situation in cortrast to his personality in the show (especially thinking about his feelings and acting for Rarity).

      Apart from that, it's nice, well written, and definitly earned my [D'aaawww] seal :)

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    25. AnonymousApril 28, 2011 at 12:07 PM

      Lots of beneficial reading here, thanks! I was checking on yahoo when I observed your submit, I’m going to add your feed to Google Reader, I look forward to more from you.

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    26. Brett TurnerMay 1, 2011 at 10:26 PM

      awww what a great story! i gave you a 5 star because you earned it for that cute little applebloom/spike fic, i love that match :)

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    27. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 10:48 PM

      I D'AAAWWWWWWWed all over my screen. I couldn't help but smile at the end with the "a-yup."

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    28. AmericaMay 17, 2011 at 6:04 PM

      I still can't get over how pretty applebloom looks XD

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    29. AnonymousMay 19, 2011 at 4:59 AM

      My head exploded from how cute she looks. Luckily i had an extra lying around for things like this. Good story. It was sooooooooooo adorable.

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    30. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 10:33 PM

      That picture...

      D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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    31. AnonymousAugust 17, 2011 at 3:47 PM

      rarityxapplebloom? who thought of that so I can give them a lesson on impossible ships? just kidding. applebloom looks beautiful and adorable in the picture. the story is very well written and adorable as well.

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    32. BroneyofNoelOctober 16, 2011 at 8:01 AM

      Ayup , that was an awesome story

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    33. IloveTwiSpOctober 16, 2011 at 1:14 PM

      Cute.

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    34. zorua570February 24, 2012 at 3:59 AM

      SOOOOO CUTE!!!!!
      And the sotry was so ADORABLE!!!!

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    35. CornParadeApril 15, 2012 at 7:05 PM

      @Anonymous

      Spike hatched when Twilight was quite young. So he's only a few years old.

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    36. UnknownFebruary 1, 2013 at 12:48 AM

      amazing story had me smiling all the way, very well done

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