Monday, March 21, 2011

Story: Intervention for a Unicorn

[Shipping][Random] Lyra and Bon Bon time! It's a shame the recent episodes have separated them =[ Written by Lovecraft.  Do emoticons need a period after them?
Description: Sometimes, it's difficult for ponies to admit when they have a problem.
Intervention for a Unicorn

Intervention for a Unicorn Alt Google Docs link

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked it.

But what did I just read? Mr. Author Lovecraft-chan, I would like to see more from you. Especially more with characters on the periphery.

...Or maybe I just want that drunk Berry Punch fic... Who can tell some times?

Anonymous said...

I still don't understand why sitting like that would be a problem to anypony if it doesn't hurt them. Plus its probably the preferred relaxed position of Lyra. (Story is based on pony pics, one with Lyra sitting oddly on a couch and the other with Ditzy eating all the food in the fridge)

Anonymous said...

lolwat.

Wingboner said...

Put your period before the emoticon. :3

Putuk said...

"Written by Lovecraft"
I lol'd!


Oh and the ending was really funny! :)

Anonymous said...

I still don't get the whole Lyra sitting thing :I

Mads said...

@Anonymous
Watch the background in the beginning of Dragonshy.

Anonymous said...

@Mads

Oh now I get it XD, Thank you!

Lovecraft said...

Hey! I'm glad ya'll liked it, I was a bit concerned about how it'd be received since it's...really weird, and I'm not sure how well it's written.

@Anonymous

And it's not really a problem, it just freaks the other ponies out. The whole thing is supposed to be ridiculous, and I actually really love how Lyra thinks she's people when she sits.

And yeah, I did get the idea for it after looking at Megasweet's comic the other night, and the Carrot Top comic.

Lovecraft said...

Also, Sethisto, did the Google Docs link not work?

Here it is again, if it didn't.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TFbLzPK-aW2iM9Xjpio_4y9foAlmQSF-Ow8AW8dzLRw/edit?hl=en&pli=1#

Sethisto said...

@Lovecraft

I usually just default to DA if the option is there, unless people specifically ask for both.

Fast and Free said...

That was hilarious :D

(And now I finally know where the whole sitting thing came from)

Star Whistle said...

So... now that Derpy Hooves is canon, is the next step in the fanon to get Lyra recognized as double-jointed?

Naxts said...

Hah! That was funny. Wasen't exactly the written as well as it could be but I guess its fine. I liked it; it was a fun read =)

D said...

I would love to read more in the future of the sweet couple! Such a silly intervention but still one good read.

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