Description: Ponies are disappearing on suspicious holidays. Pinkie Pie has a new cupcake range... and a cleaver.Night of the Pinkie Pie
Description: Ponies are disappearing on suspicious holidays. Pinkie Pie has a new cupcake range... and a cleaver.Night of the Pinkie Pie
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Woah, where's the title with this post?
Yeah, this post seems a tab bit title-less, but, I enjoyed the story none-the-less. Seems like a fun little take on "that" story, seems to have started like it was going to be Grim-dark, but I thought that it had a neat little clever twist at the end.
Damn, he didn't use my cleaned up version...
I am now a sad.
Oh Pinkie, you so crazy.
I was actually eating a cupcake when I read this and was uncomfortably reminded of certain infamous works on this site. What does it say that my appetite did not disappear at the reminder?
That story went from scary to incredibly silly.
And now the three fillies are scarred for life.
I'm glad you submitted this here! It's a quick little chunk of comedic joy. It's just... fun. I love fun things. :D
My favorite memory from this will always be Pinkie's quote from inside the bush, when I still wasn't sure if this was grimdark or not, because either way it was just epic.
If MlP was aimed at a slightly older age group, I could see this being an episode. It's adorable.
I was so worried before I read the flashback, and I haven't even FINISHED that other fic. Great job, everypony was in character and it was fun to read. :)
Oh, Pinkie... don't you know it's creepy to make a life-size sculpture of your friend?
@Ebon Mane
That's because you're an omnivore!
Some quotations and stuff were kind of odd
@Anonymous Yeah, I noticed too. Some of the wording and the misuse of quotations marks made it kind hard to read. I edited it up a bit to make it easier on the reader, but I guess he decided to use his original instead. It was a really fun story nonetheless.
That really was good. I so wanted to scream cupcakes but this is so much better. Definatly a good link to throw at people who just read the original.
Highly enjoyable story. I noticed some awesome references to "Bittersweet" as well as "Cupcakes".
Well... sure seems an incalculable amount of times better than a certain ''story'' (as far as one could DARE call ''that'' grimdark thing, a story...), which name shall not even be thought.
For a second I feared it might have been a Replica of ''that'' story.
But, raspberry jam! So, it's all good. (I might sound confusing, but just a bit)
Nice story, but the quotations are weird.
The story seems familiar though.
@Sandman You might be thinking about the story where "Cupcakes" was a hallucination suffered by Rainbow Dash, who then went to Pinkie Pie to sample cupcakes that she accidentally mistook for being made from ponies. (They were actually made from rainbows.)
Which quotations are coming up weird for people, I can't spot anything wrong D:
@nova_25
>post comment on da
>copy
>paste
>profit?
@Blueshift You didn't use them properly. Each time a character speaks, you should begin a new paragraph. You also didn't make it very clear who was saying what. It's understandable, but you could have used an editor.
@Anonymous No, I've read that and wasn't that fun.
It was more that the plot is familiar, and not to any pony fic.
I think it was a short story about a boy thinking a women was killing and cooking dogs, he saw dog heads in her oven and her wearing what looked like a blood-stained apron. In fact she was a sculptor and was making clay replicas of the dogs.
@Anonymous
*ahem*
Pinkie is someone I could easily see making life-size edible versions of her friends. Especially Rainbow Dash. (Subtext, what subtext?)
me:Night mare moon????????
Nightmare: WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Me: fights to death
nightmaremoon dies
R.I.N.P Nightmare Moon
RINP means
Rest
In
No
Peace
"Guess who made WAAAFFLES!!!"
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