Description: A thief is on Sweet Apple Acres and the farmer is pissed. Come see how Big Mac deals with Gilda.
You know, this is actually really damn good.One of the best, I'd say.
I really like this! If you told me it was made by Seargent I would have laughed you off, but I was there myself when he posted it.Actually... the ending to this makes me want him to write a Gilda x Big Mac fic... doubt he would ever do it though.
I was hoping for more shipping... Does that make me a bad person?
Good story. Of course, there is a "bad end" to it.
@AnonymousI think he said he'd think about doing some GildaxMac. Maybe he just needs more pressure to go through with it.Also, very good fic.
Eyyyup i liked it a lot :3 big mac is SO AWESHUM
@AnonymousThe bad end isn't even really that bad.It just turns out that Gilda, Big Mac, and AJ are all really really into BDSM.
Wow, really good! It actually made me feel for Gilda, despite the huge dick she was being; and it totally captured Big Mac's character. 10/10
@AnonymousI think the best part of this fic was how in-character the characters were. Big Mac was written amazingly well as a simple-minded yet logic-smart down-to-earth pony.I also like how Gilda kept a bit of her attitude, but eventually just got exhausted.If you ever write anything else like this again Seargent, I'll be there to read it.Ain't reading another Cupcakes though.
I always thought Gilda could be a more sympathetic character. Maybe she'll get a second chance in the show, but I'll take what I can get for now.
HAY HAY THIS IS NOT A 5 STAR STORY YET BUDDY THERE'S STILL A HALF A STAR LEFT TO GO
I positively adored this. Sequel needed :3
1. Sequel2. DO. NOT. FUCK. WITH . BIG MAC.3. Flawless Victory.
This was beautifully written. Makes me think most of life's problems (and problem people) can be made better by a method like this.Brave. Encore. Sequal would be nice. Maybe Trixie steals some apples or something. Oooh Maybe Luna runs away from home and Big Mac finds her. Write that one.
this reminded me of a story my mom use to tell. when she was younger her uncle was having problems with one of the kids at his orphanage. They figured the only way they could fix the problem they decided was to have the kid live with my mom's family for the summer. He went in one of the most misbehaved kids you'd ever meet and he absolutely hated it there. But the end of summer my mom said he was very polight and friendly, and he voluntarily came back for 5 summers after that.
This is not shipping. There's not a romantic implication. You should remove the shipping tag, kthx. I felt that the last scene was platonic, which I'm glad for.
1. Make another chapter/sequal2. Do excellent job3. ?????4. ProfitXD Seriously though, Trevor feels slightly jyped! It should be longer, have a sequel, SOMETHING! Please?! It just doesn't feel... Just didn't feel like that story really deserved a shipping tag. It was barely light-shipping as is! A hug doesn't really count for anything if this was/is a one-shot. Now if a second chapter IS incoming, then one will take that back, but as is, this isn't a shipping fic. (It was well-written, don't get one wrong, but it just... Left one feeling VERY disappoint.)~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Thank you for writing this-CaravanPalace