Description: after many years a grown Spike returns to Ponyville, and finds that sometimes you really can go home again.
So Twilight just goes off to be immortal and lets all her friends die?lol, harsh.
That was very sweet ^_^ I might get a toothache
Applejack must be like 114 or something
Twilight wouldn't have let her friends pass away like that!Bring them back!!1!
you can't stop reverse death.
This is so sad! Applejack is alive with no of her original friends, other than Twilight, and Spikes friends are all dead, too! Applejack's gonna die while he sleeps, and then in 100 years, it's... it's.... awwwwww.....
@AnonymousObviously, in Equestria you can. Twilight wasn't always immortal; Celestia must've made her that way. She could easily do the same for her friends. There are spells for everything.
Fools! This is not how it ends!*Ahem*It's a little girls cartoon. Therefore happy endings will always manifest.In the real show, if they were to deal with the future, all that would happen Is that the writers would simply make it so Celestia makes Twi and her friends immortal, to continue their study of the magic and friendship, and to spread this magic around the world.The end, that's all folks, now Vamoose.
This is the first time in about 3 years that I ever shed a tear to a story....if this infringes on my manliness, shit gets real.
This reminds of Nall's plight in Lunar: Eternal Blue.
oh my heart!
It's always fascinating that most fantasy themed stories, take Lord of the Rings and Last Unicorn for example, center mortality and vanitas so much. That's why I find them so damn sad.
A great, bittersweet story, even if it did need some editing ;)
Is there going to be more?I eagerly waiting for a part two
That was very cute, great job look forward to more of your stuff.
This was wonderful. Thank you.
Dang, this was...bittersweet. A great concept, with only a few grammatical mistakes that didn't really bother me much. Plus, the last few lines were simply perfect. This definitely goes into my top 5 favorite FiM fics.Hmmm, I wonder if Equestria has an afterlife...
this should be [sad]
"Sorry, the page (or document) you have requested does not exist."Yay...
Theres a sequel to this fic now, but its a bit more explicit. Its still, a fantastic read though. Called 'Our Last Goodbye' by RagingSemi for those interested.
Here's a working link to the fic: http://www.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=166
@AnonymousIf you really think that would be better, think about what Rarity and AJ would go through, watching their younger sisters age and die while they stayed the same. Or Pinkie Pie burying the Cakes while she's just as young as ever. Or Twilight's tearful goodbye to Spike after a thousand years, while she's still the same unicorn who saved Luna those thousand years ago.And I just made myself sad.
@AnonymousSo where would one find this sequel?It's not on Ponyfictionarchive or Fimfiction. Can't find with search either.
Link is broken
this sh*t is gonna make me cry.... ;^^^; , poor spike.... T^^^T
oh my God, he killed them
Oh my god, he killed them