Description: How did Ponyville's lovable wall eyed mail mare find herself in the Best Young Flyer's competition? And more importantly, how did she place?Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria
Saturday, February 19, 2011
Description: How did Ponyville's lovable wall eyed mail mare find herself in the Best Young Flyer's competition? And more importantly, how did she place?Not Quite the Best Flyer in Equestria
17 comments:
Also, do you chaps prefer stories posted as images or as word documents?
I prefer images, but a lot of people don't like them because it's difficult to open and read on, say, an iPhone or the sort.
Alternate Document link!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/186QgQGu5BTrmgg5ST1wqFm4GyB3GWNn0RUHyVsayYHs/edit?hl=en
Holy shit, is Ditzy Doo just a figment of Derpy's imagination?
@Anonymous
Ummm... What?
I enjoyed the constant shifts between D'awww, haha, and oooohhhh poor thing.
Awesome story, especially considering that the episode that inspired it has been out for less than a day!
I kinda like stories being posted as images.
@Anonymous
Nah, Ditzy's a pony I made up using one of the possible names for Derpy. I like her, she's horrible.
I liked how you tied in the from Sonic Rainboom, good work!
Awww, that was cute. I liked it! Seems quite Derpy-ish if that makes sense. If I had to point out anything to work on, you can be a bit over descriptive or redundant in places, but never so much that it ruins the fic. All in all this is an adorable little story about everyone's favorite Mail Mare!
I liked this one! At least derpy got something out of it!
But wasn't she the #7 pegasus that did 15 somersaults or whatever after dash swapped numbers?
anyway 4/5!
@Sethisto
Nope, 7 was the one who shouted LET'S DO THIS.
And then it showed Rainbow look at her 6 and then go to Derpy's 15.
Glad you liked it!
Poor thing! Even Celestia didn't get her name right!
Great stuff. Thanks for writing!
If you wanna see what Ditzy looks like:
http://dizzypacce.deviantart.com/#/d3a0k9r
Ha, ha! I enjoyed this one. Probably my favorite work from you, Pacce. The writing seemed a bit tighter than it did in Jr. Speedsters, and it achieved it's goal well. A delightful short narrative that got me to laugh when I didn't expect to.
Ohmygosh, how did I forget to comment on this thing a week ago, hnnnnnnnnnnng!!!
A very cute short narrative you have here, Pacce! I remember reading this story and how it brightened up my day a bit. Keep on trucking!!
the google docs page refuses to allow access due to an excess of redirects. could you fix that?
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