Description: Back in the old days Gilda had two fears: Dash discovering that Gilda had feelings for her and the girl's shower room.
Alternate DA link:http://dizzypacce.deviantart.com/#/d3al5e9And thanks for posting!
@Pacce*clop clop clop*Awesome!
@ButterscotchSundaeComing from you, you have NO idea how much of a compliment that is.That one story with Twilight and Pinkie in a sleeping was the first time in my life that I had to look down and ask, "Why, boner?"
@PacceThat was beautiful, Pacce. Other than an overuse of "lower regions" (which is justified, since you were trying to keep it, well, clean), it was perfect.I'm feeling Gilda a bit more for this. I'll get on that thing we discussed soon.Also, if you want some help writing playful and safe/sane/consensual stuff (not to mention really weird), I would suggest finding the comic series XXXenophile. It certainly inspires me.
@BrotherPricklePraise so nice, he had to say it thrice.
Firstly, just to get this out of the way. This is fuckin hot.Secondly, the more I read the fanfiction for her, the more I start to sympathise with Gilda. I look through the fandom and almost unanimously the opinion is that, regardless of Dash's orientation, Gilda's gay for dash, and it's the source of her bad attitude. These sorts of stories provide an absolutely fantastic characterization for an otherwise despisable character, and I thank you for writing them :)
Fantastic. Although I do have to agree with Brother Pickle, you did use the phrase "lower regions" a bit too much. Other than that, fantastic. Reading this probably requires a bit of restraint for some people. Clopping, however, is inevitable.
I've learned how desesitize myself to this stuff, however I do have an achille's hoof and I doubt anyone could hit it.Slapping coconuts together is something you won't hear from me, but I liked the stories passion.From- a random ANotWhyMoose... I mean Anonymoose... Amoosedefinate... Anonymous(finally).
@PacceWell, as the Bellman said in _The Hunting of the Snark_: "What I tell you three times is true."...I'll delete those other two comments now. (Also, did I mention you gave me a boner? We need to form a club. The Three Clopficteers!)
Yeah.. I really shouldn't have read this at work, now I'm a bit flustered myself.. Good story none the less.. Thanks
Loved it. Gilda/Dash > Dash/Pinkie any day, in my book.Though, I will admit we need some sort of ranking system within the Shipping genre. While I don't personally mind, some stories go a lot further than others, and some people may want to avoid the more...detailed works. Iunno, just a thought.Again, though, I loved this. 8.32/10
@Daffodil"Gilda/Dash > Dash/Pinkie any day, in my book."Hah! I'm glad I'm not the only one.Anyway, great story, Pacce! You're stories of Gilda, and Cereal Velocity's stories of Trixie, are driving to me write, haha.
Oh man.I've been waiting for a fic like this for a while now, and now that it's here I want more!But seriously, this is great. Gilda's embarrassment was almost tangible at certain parts, and the emotions overall were very well portrayed.Thank you SO MUCH
Dammit Pacce, you have easily become my favorite writer! I ADORE your GilDash~ Im so glad I got a day off today and was able to read this. O_O Don't stop writing ever, your just way too good to lose.
write more, i havn't seen that much of the grade but it was fun reading this one and it actually had a coherent plot :) 5/5
Well done, good pacing, good descriptions and a good plot.5/5
Cute! Insanely cute while not being overtly salacious. Good jorb, Pacce!
@Albatross !!z0yT7Pqnr yDid some slight rewording."Nether regions" now only appears once.Thank god for thersaurususususususus.
Pacce, no matter what you make, ill never hat it, i mean you are soooooooooooooooo good at this!!!
Quality. Thats all I can say, pure quality.Pacce, You've outdone yourself =)
Good work, i liked it
You should make a pony versionJust sayin~
@SethistoWouldn't work for this story, they're always naked.
@PacceThe pony version should involve them putting clothes on, THEN having the sex.
@ZarkanorfYes. This. So much this.
@SethistoO_O That would scare me and might induce nightmares...so...the opposite effect of whats happening now =D
I am at a loss for words. What do I say about this? Good job? I just don't know anymore. What kind of reception do you expect from this?
@AnonymousWell it's written intentionally as a piece of erotica, but it's still a story.So if you enjoyed it as a story and/or as a piece of erotica then my work here is done.If this confounds you, please offer suggestion as to do better if I do anything similar. If it confounds you BECAUSE it's erotica, then... um... I'm sorry?
Wait so of all the stories ive read so far and It being so vague yet it still gave me the wingest boner was amazing
anyone who gives this less then a three star rating needs a lesson in love and tolerance.