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That was very sweet. Loved it.
Aw, cute. You could use some clean up with tense agreement and dialogue grammar, though.
A ribbon passed from generation to generation? They must take real good care of it...
Sweet, but needs a LOT of editing. The grammar structure is in bad shape, it was almost unreadable for me.
Short, yet sweet! Just like an Apple should be.
This was really cute. I wonder will ever delve into how Applejack's parents died. (Though to be honest I don't think I'd have the heart to read it.)
Very touching, well portrayed emotion. It was a beautiful gesture, and I'll always remember this story when I see the two ponies together. I kinda got choked up a moment there, when Applebloom asked if Applejack loved her. Good stuff.
cute. enough said. Good work Big Mac.
It was beautiful.I really mean it. I don't think I can describe the warmth i felt in my heart with just a simple message.I really don't understand why this doesn't get the love it deserves.